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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: masaf57

Sorry for the late reply but your update was amazing!!!!


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PART 13

Next morning Viren and Jeevika were ready to go London. They had flight at 10am so before going to office all gathered in hall to see off.
Daddaji: Viren beta tum yahan ki fikar mat karna. Inder tumhara kaam sambhal le ga. 
Viren: Ji Daddaji. Lekin woh Mr.Agarwal ke case ke liye toh mujhe hi aana pare ga.
Daddaji: Kab hai case
Viren: Do din baad ki date mili hai
 
Maanvi heard this. She become worried what if they will come in two days. She is not mentally prepared to tell them her secret so early. 

Maanvi: Do din baad aap wapis nahi aao ge. Honeymoon pe jarahe hain 10 days se pehle toh aana hi mat.

Jeevika noticed that Daddaji did not liked her talk in between them so she grabbed her arm lightly and pulled towards her.
Jeevika: Baro ke beech nahi bol maanu.
Maanvi: Per Di. Do din..
Jeevika: Kam ke liye aana pare ga toh aana pare ga. Kaam ko rok thori na sakte hain.
Maanvi: Lekin honeymoon ko bhi toh nahi rok sakte na. Ek baar hi hota hai.
Jeevika: Chup kare gi tu. Viren ji ka decision hai tera ya mera nahi.

Meanwhile Inder came and informed them that client had postponed their meeting.

Viren: Magar chachu achanak postpone kyun kar dia.
Inder: As far I know koi relative beenar hogaya hai toh out of city jana par raha hai unho.

Maanvi blabbered: Bhalla ho us rishtedaar ka jo exact time pe beemar hogaya. 
Jeevika: Kya bakbak kar rahi hai.
Maanvi: Kuch nahi di.

Chachu: Acha bhai chalo tumhari flight ka time horaha hai. Late hogai toh lene ke dene par jai ge. 

Both started to take blessing from elders. 
Chachi: Jeevika Yeh meri list hai. Hai ni mera inna dil chah raha hai london aane ko per honeymoon main haddi thori bano gi toh yeh hai meri list. Lana zarur. 
Jeevika giggled: Pakka chachi. Next time hum sab chale ge. 
She hugged her. 

Viraat: Bhai bhabhi khoob enjoy karna aur yahan ki tension bilkul mat lena. Aur contact main rehna.
He hugged Viren and Jeevika brotherly. 

Last was Maanvi. Both sisters got emotional. It was like a scene in bidaai. 
Jeevika: Maanu apna khayal rakhna. Medicines time pe lena. Shaitaani mat karna. Aur- 

She choked saying the last sentence so she just hugged her which said million things. 


Maanvi: Di aap bhi apna khayal rakhna aur plz meri tension mat lena. Enjoy karna.
Jeevika: Main tujhe iss hallat main chor kar jarahi hu upar se tension bhi mat lu. Yeh toh bahut mushkil hai na.
Maanvi: Acha phir thori si tension lena zyada nahi. 
They hugged again then said goodbye.
Both had tears flowing rapidly as if it was their last meeting. 

As the car went out of sight, Maanvi broke into tears. Luckily everyone had come inside. She slowly went to garden and cried her heart out.


Di jab mujhe aap ki sab se zyada zarurat hai tab hi aap mujhse dur chali gai. Lekin is main di ki koi galti nahi. Maine hi toh unhe bheja. Aur karti bhi kya. Bhejna zaruri tha. Agar na bhejti toh har waqt mujhe yeh guilt rehta keh main jhoot bol rahi hu, chuppa rahi hu apni di se. Main itni helpless kyun hu. Kyun hu

It was painful for her not physically but emotionally. Her fate played a cruel game with her giving her a deadly disease. 

Meri kya galti thi keh pyaar ka ehsaas hua jab zindagi ki rasta hi nahi nazar araha. Pehle maut abhi jati toh sirf yeh gham rehta keh di ke saath zyada nahi reh pai. Lekin...Lekin ab Viraat. Uske saath mujhe jeena hai, zindagi bitani hai. Life ki har khushi har dard ko uske saath mehsoos karna hai. 
Kyun kia aapne aisa. Kya galti thi meri. Kehte hain ache logo ke saath kabhi galat nahi hota toh mere saath kyun...Aisa kya kia maine jo itni baari saza mil rahi hai. 

Jeevika: Viren Ji humne sahih kya na
Viren: Kiska Jeevika
Jeevika: Maanu ki shaadi rukwa ke
Viren: Mujhe lagta hai sahih kia humne.
Jeevika: Per Viren ji phir yeh saara plan shaadi ka kyun agar mana hi karna tha
Viren: Jeevika, Maanvi meri choti behn jaisi hai. Agar main Viraat ka bara bhai hu woh Maanvi ka bhi hu. Tumne ek mahina ka waqt toh dia tha usse per uski ankhoon main saaf dikhta hai keh woh besukoon hai. Main apne bhai ko pyaar ka ehsaas dilane ke liye, apni behn ki ankhoon main dar nahi dekh sakta. Mujhe iss baat ka ehsaas hua hi tab jab Maanvi ne us game ke waqt woh baat kahi. 
Jeevika: Viren Ji aaj mummy papa bahut khush honge keh unhe sahih maino main ek baita mil gaya jo unki dono baitiyoon ka bahut khayal rakhta hai. Per Viren ji Maanvi kuch toh chuppa rahi hai. Aisi kya baat hai jo woh hamare aane ke baad kahe gi.
Viren: Wohi toh mujhe bhi samjh nahi arahi. Ek baat toh hai keh sirf shaadi hi uski problem nahi hai kuch aur bhi hai jisse woh bahut affect horahi hai. 
Jeevika: Mujhe toh bahut dar lag raha hai kahin kuch...
Viren: Shhh kuch nahi hoga. Tum tension mat lo. Maanvi ne hame nahi bataya toh uske piche bhi koi wajah hogi. Tumhari behn bahut samjhdar bilkul apni teacher didi pe gai hai. 
Jeevika: Viren ji aap bhi na
Driver: Airport agaya. 
Viren: Chalo ji utro warna der hogai toh aapki behn meri class le gi.


Mujhe Bhai ko sab bata dena chahiye shaid meri woh madad kar sake. Nahi pehle Maa ko batata hu. Maa ko batao ga toh woh Bua ko batai gi which I cant afford. So pehle Bhabhi se baat karta hu. Shaid Maanvi ne bhi bhabhi ko kuch bataya ho jo mujhe koi clue de dein keh woh bhi mujhe...I mean. Nahi. Bhabhi Maanvi ki bari behn hain aur maine suna hai bare siblings bahut overprotective hote hain. Bhai bhi toh hain. Toh nahi. Agar yeh sunke Maanvi ko wapis bhijwa dia toh. Phir kya karo

He roamed around the room but got no clue what to do. Then his eyes fell on the guitar and an idea struck in his mind. MUSIC

Main tenu samjhwaan ki
Na tere bina lagda ji
Main tenu samjhwaan ki
Na tere bina lagda ji
Tu ki jaane pyaar mera
Main karo intezaar tera
Tu dil tu yunh jaan meri 
Main tenu samjhwaan ki
Na tere bina lagda ji
Tu ki jaane pyaar mera
Main karo intezaar tera
Tu dil tu yunh jaan meri 
Main tenu samjhwaan ki
Na tere bina lagda ji

Mere dil ne chun li ya ne tere dil ni ya raha
Tu jo mere naal jo rehta turpave meri saha
Jeena mera hai
Hun hai teri ki main kara
Tu kar ietbaar mera 
Main karo intezaar tera
Tu dil tu yunh jaan meri 
Main tenu samjhwaan ki
Na tere bina lagda ji

I love you Maanvi. 
He opened his eyes with an answer in his mind. 
I need to tell Maanvi that I love her. Mujhe kissi aur ko batane ki zarurat hi nahi. Maanvi ko batana chahiye. Chalo ji. 

He went to cupboard and took his most favorite black shirt with blue jeans. In few seconds he was ready standing in front of mirror. 

Perfume. Done. Hair. Done. Clothes and Shoes done. Perfect
Bus Maanvi haan karde. Life ka maqsad poora hojai ga. Lets go. 


Ting tong
Vanshika: Tarun zara darwaza kholo.
Servant opened the door. Armaan had came. 
Armaan: Hi aunty
Vanshika: Aare beta tum. 
Armaan: Haan aunty woh mujhe Maanvi se kuch zaruri baat karni thi. Kahan hai woh?
Vanshika: Pata nai. Maine bhi kaafi der se usse dekha nahi. Ek minute. 
Tarun Maanvi kahan hai?
Tarun: Woh shaid garden main hai. Thek se nahi pata. 
Vanshika: Thek hai tum khana ki tiyari karo. Armaan beta tum ruko mai Maanvi ko bula lati hu. 
Armaan: No aunty main usse wahi milke nikal jao ga thora jaldi main hu. 
Vanshika: Chalo thek hai. 
Armaan: Bye aunty
Vanshika: Bye beta

She saw him going out very fastly. 
Vanshika: Lagta hai bahut hi zaruri baat karni hai itni jaldi main hai. 

Viraat was about to go to Maanvi but before him Armaan came and went to her. 

Armaan iss waqt kyun. Warna toh kehta hai busy hota hu toh abhi kyun aaya. Aur kissi se mile bagair Maanvi ke pass. Boss kuch toh garbar hai. Thori der baad ajata toh kya problem thi. I know destiny kabhi mera saath de gi hi nahi. Usse le aai so main na jao. Lekin main toh jao ga. Karlo jo karna hai. Aaj toh main bata kar hi raho ga. 

Armaan was finding Maanvi in the garden but she was nowhere to be seen. He decided to go back. 

Kismat hamare sab faisle karti hai na toh aaj main ek challenge deti hu. Mujhe lagta hai main ne aisi koi galti nahi ki jis ki itni bari saza mile. Cancer ke saath pyaar. Ab mujhse aur nahi raha jaraha. Mere dil se kissi tarah yeh boj khatam ho warna mujhe bhi nahi pata nahi kya karo gi.

She just closed her eyes when she felt a tap. She understood that this is a sign of destiny. She didnot wanted to waste any time so immediately she hugged that person. 

Itni jaldi meri baat suni jai gi mujhe andaza nahi tha. Mujhe tumhe yeh sab bahut pehle hi bata dena chahiye tha per kabhi waqt ne saath nahi dia toh kabhi dil-o-dimag ne. Lekin aaj main tumse sab kehna chahti hu. Bahut dino se dil pe yeh boj tha. Socha tha sab ko ek saath waqt aane per batao gi magar ab main aur nahi seh sakti. Mujhe tumse share karna hai. Di ke ilawa sirf tum hi ho jis pe main aankh band karke bharosa kar sakti hu aur dil halka kar sakti hu. Main bahut tension main hu ek taraf maut mera intezaar kar rahi hai aur dosri taraf zindagi ne apne sab se khobsurat darwaze khol diay hain. Maut mujhe apni taraf khench rahi hai lekin mujhe zindagi ki  taraf jana hai. Mujhe tumhare pass aana hai. Magar jo dor mujhe khench rahi hai woh bahut mazboot hai. Cancer ki. Mujhe blood cancer hai 2nd stage ka jiska matlab hai ahista ahista main dur jarahi hu. Mera jism himat haar raha hai. Magar main nahi har manna chahti. Main jeena chahti hu. 

Armaan was hell confused and embarrassed by her this reaction. Before he could say anything she started sobbing. So as a nice person he placed his hand over her shoulder to console her. 


Game was again played. Watching the most loved person hugging someone else is the heart wrenching scene and this was experienced by Viraat. He saw this with his own eyes. If someone come and tell him about this he would never ever believe but watching it with his own eyes shattered him. 
Maybe he knew that eyes are not always true so use your ears by listening too. 
He moved a bit forward to listen what she was saying.

Main tumhare saath jeena chahti hu. Tumhare saath hamare ek aashiyaana banana chahti hu. Life ka har moment share karna chahti hu. Aur yeh sab sirf tumhare saath aur kissi ke saath nahi. Kyunke...Kyunke...I love you. Main tumse pyaar karti hu apni jaan se bhi zyada. Issi liye apni jaan dete waqt mujhe apni nahi hamare saath ki fikar hai. 

Sharing can make our heart lighter but could make someone's heart much heavier who adore us more than their life. Same is in the case of Maanvi. She herself felt lighter but the thing she did not knew was that because of this someone's else heart became heavier more than anything. Viraat. 
He witness the most dreadful thing he could ever imagine in his wildest dream on the moment he was about to say the most precious words to his most loving person. 

What new game has destiny stored for them?

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Posted: 9 years ago
RES 
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Awesome update 
Loved it..
Wanted to know what will happen next.. 
Continue soon 
Edited by MyKryan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update he mu now what
will happen update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
aswwm dear 
loved it πŸ‘πŸΌ  πŸ‘
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update...
Loved it...
Finally Virat will confess his feelings for Manvi...
OMG WHAT HAPPEND..
Manvi told everything to Armaan not Virat...
And Virat saw everything...
Pleaseee dont create misunderstanding between Virman...
Update soon...
Thanks for the PM..
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Posted: 9 years ago
I'm really sorry for the late reply I have been really busy lately with finals and stuff. But anyways, the update was amazing and keep on continuing because we love reading your work :) 
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi guys
I am back because my exams got over
Here is a special update 
I made a vm on main hoon hi nahi iss duniya ki and some mix songs even before i started to write the story
I hope you guys will like it
http://youtu.be/tiY4h8ObBlU
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hii...
You are back...
How went your exames???
I lovedd the vm...
Finally a Virman vm again...
I hope you will update soon..
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Posted: 4 years ago

Reopened on request.