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PART 6



In vadhera house
Maanvi was still lying unconcsoius while jeevika was busy in praying to god for maanvi to become get well soon and viraat was still holding her hand like telling her that he is with her all the time even in her pain.
In five minutes viren arrived home with the doctor and as soon they reached here they literally ran to maanvi to check her. Dr. Mehra started to diagnose her.
"Viren, yeh konse doctor hain pehle toh kabhi unhe main ne nahi dekha" Daddaji asked.
"Daddaji main toh Dr.Armaan ko lene gaya tha woh mera bahut acha dost hai per abhi woh ek surgery mein busy tha main ne unko lane ki bahut koshish ki per surgery mein mazeed time lagan tha. Wahan mujhe yeh mil gai. Yeh Dr.Rahul mehra hain. Sanjeevani ke mashhoor cancer specialist hain" Viren gave him detailed explanation.
Jeevika turned her face towards viren as soon she heard the word cancer. She remembered her and maanvi's past by the term cancer. For them it was not only the word cancer but a deadly disease that took away their happiness and completely destroyed their ever happy live.
Flashback 7 years back 
"Maanu uth na aaj hamara college mein pehla din hai aur tu khumkharan ki ulaad ki tarah kharate maar ke so rahi hai. Issi liye main keh rahi thi tujhse keh jaldi so ja per tu meri konsi baat maanti hai. Ab jaldi uth ja main bathroom ja rahi hu tu bhi uth ja" A girl in her early twenties was yelling at maanvi who was cuddling in her sleep.
With this she went to bathroom to get fresh. Right after ten minute she was back with towel in her hands.
"Maanu uth na dekh main tiyar bhi ho gai hu aur tu hai keh ghore kya sab beech kar rahi hai" She was drying her hair and keep telling her to wake up.
She quickly dressed herself into a beautiful pink anarkali dress and wore matching pearl necklace with small earrings. She was ready with minimal makeup. Undoubtedly she was looking none less than an angel from heaven. This beautiful angel is Jeevika.

"Aah maanu, aah " Jeevika screamed.
Hearing her scream maanvi quickly got from the bed and ran to her.
"Kya hua di phir soi chubba li main ne aapse itni baar kaha hai keh apna dehaan rakha karo per aap ho ke apne ilawa sab ki care karti ho. Issi liye har waqt aap ko chotein lagti rehti hai aur phir dard hota hai toh aap roti ho. Ab aap yahan se hilna mat main abhi first aid box le kar aati hu aur please hilna mat warna aapko dard ho gi. Roko main abhi aai" Maanvi said all this in one breath. She was about to go when Jeevika held her hand stopping her,
"Kya hua dard ho raha hai. Aap bus do minute roku main abhi aati hu aur..." Jeevika cutted maanvi in between.
"Ab phir se shoru mat ho jana meri bina brake ki gari aur thora saans le le"
"Di aap ko chot lagi hai aur main kaise sakoon se reh sakti hu"
"Chot! Kisko lagi?" Jeevika tried hard to suppress her laugh.
"Aap ko lagi hai na abhi toh aap cheekhi" Maanvi was confused by her.
"Tujhe kis ne kaha mujhe chot lagi hai" With this she burst into laughter and took her position to run as she knew what will happen next.
"Toh iska matlab aap ne yeh sab mujhe uthane ke liay kia tha. Matlab aapko kahin chot nahi lagi"
"Nahi, Dekh ab toh bhi uth gai hai. Acha tha na mera plan"
"Di" They both started to ran with jeevika in front and maanvi trying to catch her.
"Di. This is not fair mein itna acha sapna dekh rahi thi aur aapne mujhe utha dia"
"Meri pyaari maanu evrything is fair in love-"
"And in war- Meri hazaroon mein ek di. Ab dekhna aap ne maanvi sharma ke under sherni se paanga lia hai mein aap ko nahi choru ki" She took a pillow and climbed on the bed.
"Main bhi teri behn hu. Agar tu maanvi sharma hai toh main bhi jeevika sharma hu" She also took a pillow and climbed on the bed with her.
It looked like two cats were fighting for their food but in actual they were two beautiful , adorable sisters maanvi and jeevika fighting with each other for each other.
"Jeevika maanvi uth gai ho tum dono" Padma sharma, their mother came up to their room to wake them as it was getting late for college.
"Oh ma" Both said in unison. They quickly arranged their messy hair, their bed and maanvi ran to bathroom while jeevika went to the dressing table.
"Good morning jeevika beta tum uth gai "
"Good morning ma" Jeevika hugged her and gave her a morning kiss.
"Meri ladli uth gai kya"
"Haan ma uth gai aur pata hai itne nakhre kiay shaitaan ne main tiyar bhi ho gai hu aur mahrani sahiba abhi abhi nahane gai hai"
"Di" Maanvi voice came from bathroom.
"Acha thek hai tum dono tiyar hokar jaldi se neeche ajao. Main ne nashta laga dia hai tum dono jaldi se akar kar lo"
"Ji ma"
Right after 15 minutes both arrived on the dining table totally ready.
 
Maanvi was wearing jeans and t-shirt looking complete diva while jeevika was looking like a beautiful angel.
"Agai meri princess" Their dad, Rishabh sharma welcomed them.
"Papa aap hamesha hamein princess kyun bulate hain hum toh do hai na" Maanvi asked childishly and sat besides opposite Jeevika.
"Kyunke meri princess tum dono do thori ho"
"Matlab papa" Jeevika added.
"Matlab do jism ek jaan ho tum dono"
This made maanvi and jeevika smile and both said i love you to papa.
"Chalo ab daughters father ki talk bahut ho gai ab kuch kha lia jai " Padma came from kitchen.
"Wow mama kheer hum dono ki favourite!" Jeevika said in excitement.
"Haan aaj tum dono ka college mein pehla din hai aur yeh kheer khas kar ke maanu ke liay hai "
"Yay"Maanvi showed thumbs down to Jeevika.
"That's not fair mama" 
"Beta maanvi ne abhi school khatam kia hai per tum toh do saal se issi college mein ho na aur yahan ki zidagi ka pata hai per maanu toh baachi hai na uski zindagi toh abhi shoru hui hai."
"Thanks mama"
"Aur mujhe pata hai mere bache ko tension mein kheer khana pasand hai toh jaldi se moonh kholo aur yeh lo"She lovingly feed maanvi who was also enjoying her pampering.
"Chalo ab ho gaya mother child pampering. Time toh zara dekh lo 9 bajne wale hai aur class ki bell kisi bhi waqt bajne wali hai. Ab jaldi se apne bags uthao aur main gari nikalta hu. Tum dono ajao main car mein wait kar raha hu"
He stood up , hand shaked with padma and said her to grant leave. She unwillingly said goodbye to him and handed him his car keys and wallet . Jeevika and Maanvi hurriedly took their bags and went to car saying goodbye to their mom. When they made an exit from the street, she burst into crying and ran to the house as she knew that this will be their last meeting.
Vikram dropped his daughters to the college and advanced towards his office. He was running business of diamond and pearl jewellery which was one of the most successful business of India at that time. 
Maanvi and jeevika were too excited about their first day at college. Maanvi was in first year while jeevika entered in third year, after one year she will be graduated and as her plan she will work as an accountant in famous bank. She was the best student of the college and also awarded with best student for the last two years. Maanvi was not too good in her studies but not bad also. She wanted to become an actress . This was her dream from her childhood.
After attending two lectures maanvi was too tired that she went to cafe to relax some. She called Jeevika and asked her to come with her. She told her that she will be attending one more lecture and then come to her. In cafe bored maanvi decided to call her mother at home so she could pass time but she didn't received the call. She again called her this time on land-line but again no response. Maanvi started to become worry, she again called jeevika and told her to come to her urgently. They both tried to call her but gained no response so they decided to call their father. On receiving no response again, Jeevika thought of going to home. Maanvi went to office for permission. Both went to their home only to see house locked. Maanvi was about to cry. Jeevika went to their neighbors home to inquire. There she got to know that her mother has gone to hospital as she fainted and their father was also with her. Jeevika was shocked at first but then decided not to waste time and quickly went to the hospital with maanvi.
"Ji thori der pehle yahan Padma sharma aai thi" Jeevika asked the nurse.
"Haan woh room no.204 mein hain, per aap kon"
"Woh meri maa hain" With this they ran to the room and saw her lying on the bed with numerous IV's attached on her hands. They were so shocked and tensed that their heart was beating on the rate of 1000 beats per second. Eyes were moist and both were holding each others hand tightly to relieve their tense . Nurse came running from the room to call doctor. 
"Doctor patient is sinking, she is sinking" She shouted. This made the sisters more tensed. They went to their mother. They saw their father standing alone in the corner blankly seeing Padma. 
"Tum dono agai" She managed to say this from her oxygen mask.
"Maa yeh sab kaise? Kya hua aap ko?"Jeevika asked her crying.
"Main tum dono ko yeh nahi batana chahti thi warna khamakha tension mein ajate"
"Maa yeh kaisi baatein kar rahi hai . Hum ko ek baar hi bata deti aap ne saari tension khud akele hi le li"
"Jeevika beta mere pass waqt bahut kaam hai"
"Nahi maa aap ko kuch nahi hoga" Maanvi said in between.
"Mujhe pata hai mein bus kuch aur pal hi zinda raho gi kyunke mujhe cancer hai third stage ka aur yeh mujhe teen mahine pehle pata chala. Agar main tum ko bata deti toh sa mere peeche lag jate aur apni duniya bhool jate issi liye"
"Issi liye tum ne mujhe bhi nahi bataya Padma" Vikram hardly said these words.
"Haan vikram bus tum mujhe yeh vada karo keh tum dono bachiyoon ka dehaan rakho ge aur jeevika tum maanvi ki hamesha dekh baal karo gi hamesha princess ki tarah rakhna aur maanvi beta tum hamesha aisi hi rehna bikul meri maanu ki tarah""PROMISE" She held her hand forward them waiting for their reactions.
"Promise" Three of them put their hands on hand but deep inside they knew that they will not keep their promises so they cross fingered their second hands behind. There she took her last breath telling them that she loves them. 
After 2 years
Two weeks had passed after Vikram's death and today maanvi and Jeevika were taken by their father's close friend to their house. After Padma's death both left their colleges taking care of their father whose health was deteriorating day by day. They were bounded in the house. The only thing for which they go out was for the medicines and monthly checkups. Maanvi stopped eating kheer as this reminded of her mother. Jeevika left the use of word princess as it also reminds her. But vikram only stayed in her room reminding her every time. This made his condition worse as he did not ate proper food or took fresh air. And after surviving critical 1 an half years he passed out. Madan vikram's friend thought about the two girls and shifted with them to Chandigarh. He gave his name to them so people will not make any talks behind them and treated them like his own daughters. Maanvi and Jeevika changed from Sharma to Chaudhry. They changed fully like their clothes, likings, dis likings, dos, don'ts, and everything. They didnot took any admission in colleges but jeevika started to work as teacher to take her and maanvi's responsibilities . Whole world shattered was finally arranging until now.

"Jeevika jeevika maanvi ko hosh araha hai" Viren's voice made her back from flashback.
"Maanu " 
"Aap thori der baad is se baat kar le ga . Main ne maanvi ko injection dia hai jis se woh sooti rahi gi toh abhi behtar yeh hoga keh aap isse kamre mein sola dejiye aur khud bhi araam kar li jiye. Subah uthte hi yeh thek ho jai gi" Dr.Mehra told them.
"Lekin doctor maanvi ko hua kya tha " Viraat asked
"Shaid unho ne khana thek se nahi khaya aur behosh ho gai. Maanvi se kahein ga keh dawayan time se le. Ab main chalta hoon" He lied to them as he knew maanvi hadnot told them and her tension and stress worsen her health. Inder took his briefcase and thanked him.
WOH SUBAH TOH BEWAJA HO KEH GUZRE BIN TUMHARE JIS KI RAAT


Edited by rida001 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
oh jeeman was suffering from cancer.really emotional.
now wat will happen to manvi.plz continue soon and PM me plz๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 11 years ago
Really emotional...
Awesome!
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Awesome yaar pleasee continue soon..
And thanks for the PM...
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awesome update
continue soon
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nice link to cancer with their past.  Very well written, so emotional.
thank you for the PM. 
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Awesome yaar ๐Ÿ˜Šplzz continue soon..๐Ÿ˜†