Virman ff-Main hoon hi nahi iss duniya ki PART 13 - Page 20

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: panamaa

 

wow super update
Really loved it
So arman is the one who come to see her
Feeling bad for virat
Bt don't bring maya nd all in these
Really missed these update
Enjoyed by reading it
Update soon

Thanks 
And dont worry no Maya in my story
Now I will update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: chandiniebinda

Awesome update..
Loved it...
Loved the little Virman eye lock..
Awww Viren disturb them..
Loved the Jeeman scene where they were talking about love...
Awww Virat wished that he and Manvi always stay happy like Virika...
Awww Virat has gone for a audition...
Armaan is the boy how is come for Manvi...
Awww Manvi alsoo fight with Armaan like with Virat..
Awww Virat feel jealous...
Update soon..
Dont let us wait soo much this time..
Thanks for the PM...

Thank you so much for liking it
No I will not make you wait more😛
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: pink1

nice update virat and manvi have not relies
there feeling each other now arman came
and her disease what will happen update
soon

There is much more surprise to be revealed in upcoming parts😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: swathin

wow super cute update
loved the starting of virman parts
n arman interesting character
n he is a doctor
loved the last part
waiting for next part
try to update soon

Thank you
I will update it soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: VIRMANVIAN

super update
looks like we will get two love stories at a time.
ab armaan and ridhima too joined virman's journey
i loved the part.
maanvi and armaan's fight was so nice.
liked the caring virat
please pm me whenever u update this.

Thanks
I love Armaan Riddhima so I put in it but they are here for a cameo part...which may extend to 5-6 parts
I will definitely pm you
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: masaf57

Awesome update. loved it 

Thanks masaf
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: jia123sagar

Awesome update

Loved it
Loved virman part
Arman and Maanvi's fighting was cute
Plz cont soon

Thanks 
Next part is coming up in few seconds😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
NOTE

I know I updated it after a long time but now as my summer vacations are on, I will try to update every week or so. But the main thing is that after writing such a long update then editing it, putting in pictures so you guys are happy, and after pm-ing alot of people, I get only a few comments. I appreciate the silent members so liked it but I would be more happy if you comment about it and give the suggestions. It really pushes me to write more and more. On last update which was I think the longest update, I got only 7 comments. Is that fair? Do tell me if you are bored with it and don't want the FF to continue.
Do read the update. Hope you like it.
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Posted: 9 years ago
I know 7 comments are less...
But you really write awesome...
And i love the whole story...
But pleaseee keep continuing with your story...
And Updateee soon...
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There is a note on the previous page. Do read it and then read the update. Hope you all like it!
PART 11

Viren: Aare Viraat tum kab aai. 
Viraat entered with his guitar his lucky charm but his mood seemed off. 
Jeevika came with a tray in her hand and with two more servants. She placed the food and then went to Viraat. 

Jeevika: Viraat kaisa hua tumhara audition. 
Viraat was about to answer when Armaan interuppted. 
Armaan: Audition?
Viren: Haan Armaan, Viraat ko ek bahut bari company se audition ki offer aai thi. Toh woh uske liye gaya tha.
Vanshika: Viraat beta audition kaisa hua. 

Viraat again was about to answer her when Armaan interrupted. 

Armaan: Viren Bhaiya ne bataya tha keh Viraat bahut acha gata hai aur bhaiya kabhi jhoot bolte nahi toh Viraat toh pakka select hua hoga. 
Maanvi: Haan akhir partner kiska hai.
Armaan: Hello awaz ka aur partner hone ka koi connection nahi hai.
Maanvi: Phir toh doctor hone ka aur Armaan hone ka bhi koi connection nahi hai.
Armaan: Excuse me I am Dr.Armaan so connection toh hai na.

Viraat was seeing all this and was not feeling good so he chose to move to his room. Everyone was so busy in noticing Armaan Maanvi talk that no one noticed him going except his very own bhabhi.

Jeevika: Viraat


Now everyone watched him and even Armaan Maanvi stopped talking. 
Jeevika: Kya hua Viraat
Viraat: Kuch nahi Bhabhi.
Jeevika: Bhabhi kehte ho phir bhi baat chuppa rahe ho. Tum mere liye sirf mere devar nahi ho balke mere chote bhai jaise ho aur tumhare liye main tumhari bari behn jo har qadam tumhare saath hogi.

Viraat was touched by her words. He immediately hugged her. She was getting worried now. She consoled him by rubbing his back. 

Bhabhi aapko main kaise bolo keh kya main kya feel kar raha hu jab ke mujhe bhi nahi pata. Bus itna pata hai keh kuch acha nahi lag raha.
While thinking this a random tear rolled down from his eyes which was only noticed by Viren. He came and touched his shoulder. Viren: Bata na Viren kya hua. 
Jeevika: Dekho agar tum select na bhi hue ho phr bhi koi baat nahi. Duniya itni bari hai aur tumhare talent ko zarur...
Viraat: Nahi Bhabhi. Mujhe audition main select kar lia hai. 
Everyone was very happy. 
Jeevika: Very very congrats Viraat. 
Viraat: Thanks Bhabhi
Vanshika came and kissed his forehead. He took her blessings.
Vanshika: Mujhe pata tha mera beta hi jeete ga. 
Bua chachi Billy Annie also congratulated him.
Armaan: Congrats Viraat.
Viraat: Thanks

Maanvi came forward to wish him but before she can come he went to his room to get fresh. 
All were very happy but Maanvi and Viren found some fishy about his behavior. 



Viraat room
He just placed his guitar on its position and then fell on the bed. 

Aaj sab kitna khush hogai per main kyun khush nahi hu. Poora rasta yehi sochta raha keh sab ko kaise batao ga aur unke reactions kaise honge lekin jab yeh hogaya toh mera mood off kyun hogaya. 

His mind rewinded all the things from morning till now. Only thing which he concentrated was Maanvi.

Subah main utha Maanvi se takraya. Phir breakfast pe Maanvi ne mujhse kaha keh main participate karo. Bhai bhabhi ke kamre main unki picture dekhi aur apne aur maan...Uske baad Maanvi ne mujhe wish kia. Audition dia aur ghar pahoncha toh Armaan aur Maanvi ko larte dekha. 

Tumhare poore din main sirf Maanvi Maanvi hi hua kya aur kuch nahi hua?

Viren entered in the room and sat besides him.
Aisa kuch nahi hai bhai.
Phir kaisa hai Viraat. Main dekh raha hu jab se tu audition deke aaya hai kuch khoya khoya sa lag raha hai.
Nahi bhai. 
Apne bhai se jhot bole ga. Main ne dekha jo baki sab ne nahi dekha.
Aisa kya dekha aapne bhai
Tumhara ansoon. Kehte hain keh jab dil main dard hadd tak bhar jata hai toh ankhoon se ansoon bhena shoru hote hain. Tera aisa konsa dard hai jo itni khushi main bhi chuppa nahi gaya.
Bhai aap sab kaise dekh lete ho aur kaise samajh lete ho.
Tera bara bhai hu. Tere dimag main chalne hue har baat se wakif hu har baat pata hai. Tera dard mera dard hai. Bata na kya hai aisa.
Bhai woh---

Servant came and said that they were being called in hall. But before going Viraat asked him.
Bhai yeh Armaan kon hai.
Armaan mera london wala dost hai. Aur ananya bilwander uske parents. 
Acha. Waise woh dono yahan kyu---
Before he could complete his sentence they heard Jeevika calling them so they both went. 
Reaching the entrance of hall they heard billy.Billy: Ab aisa karte hain larka larki ko akele baat karne dete hain.
Viren Viraat were shocked and confused listening to it.
Viren entered and asked to clear the confusion.
Viren: Kon larka larki. Aur Armaan tujhse pocha hi nahi keh tum yahan kaise 
Jeevika: Main batati hu. 
Viraat was listening to this very carefully.
Jeevika: Chachi ki friend ne Armaan ka naam Beeji ko suggest kia aur woh maan gai. Unho ne kal Maanvi ko call kia batane ke liye per woh bhol gai.
Viraat remembered last night incident where he heard Maanvi talking on the phone about some boy but forgot to ask who was it. 
Viren: Kis liye Suggest kia.
Jeevika: Maanvi ke rishte ke liye.

WHAT????
No this can't happen...
How can be this??
Viraat and Viren's mind were thinking these types of questions. They saw each other. Viraat eyes were full of dejection while Viren eyes were full of care towards him. 
Vanshika: Mujhe toh samjh hi nahi araha itni jaldi kaise. 
Bua: Haan Jeevika. Abhi toh tumhari shaadi ko sirf ek hi mahina hua hai toh maanvi ki shaadi itni jaldi kyun. 
Jeevika: Mujhe bhi bahut ajeeb lag raha hai kyun Beeji ne itni jaldi ki. 
Annie: Kyunke Hum Mumbai shift hone wale hain toh socha jald se jald Armaan ki shaadi hojai idhar hi. 
Billy: Yeah. Aap soch lo phir bata do. 
Jeevika: Maanvi tu bata tu shaadi karne ko tiyar hai

Maanvi looked at Viraat who looked at her helplessly.
Mana kardo iss shaadi ko Maanvi. Please mana kar do. 

Maanvi thought for sometime then a thought came into her mind and she said.
Maanvi: Jaisa keh main ne kaha tha meri zindagi sirf meri di ki hai. Meri poori unki hai toh yeh saare decisions aap hi lo gi di.
Jeevika: Itni bari zimedaari mujhepe na dal Maanu. Kahin main tujhe mayoos na kar du.
Maanvi: Aisa kabhi nahi hosakta. Jo aapko kaho gi woh hi hoga. 
Jeevika: Thek hai phir. Main ne soch lia hai.

Armaan Viraat Viren Maanvi
These four people prayed several time in this one second that Jeevika don't take the decision against their wish.


Jeevika: Ek mahina. One month main deti hu tum dono ko. Iss main ek dosre ko pehchaano jaano phir mere pass aana aur tab main yeh faisla karo gi keh tum dono ki shaadi honi chahiye ya nahi.
They were relaxed by this.
Jeevika: Thek hai na Maa
Vanshika: Meri bahu kabhi galat faisla le hi nahi sakti. Ananya ji aapko toh koi problem nahi hai.
Billy: Isse kya problem hogi. We have no problem. 
Ananya nodded and then glared at Billy. She got a call. 
Annie: Mujhe na abhi jana hoga. Per Armaan yahan ruk sakta hai.
Billy: Phir main bhi chalta hu. 
Ananya: Armaan mil lena Maanvi se. Bye everyone.
They went. 

Armaan: Viren bhaiya mujhe na aap ka ghar dekhna hai. 
Viren: Sure. Main dikhata hu chal. 
Armaan was about to stand when bua interuppted.
Bua: Viren tum rehne do. Maanvi hai na woh dikha de gi. 
Maanvi was shocked by this. Viren tried to came up with some thing.
Viren: Bua...Woh Main keh raha tha keh Maanvi khud abhi nai hai iss ghar main toh usse bhi saare kamro ka nahi pata. Kyun Maanvi
He winked at her and she understood.
Maanvi: Haan Haan.
Jeevika: Phir main chalti hu tum dono ke saath.
Viren: Aare Jeevika tum mere saath chalo na. Maanvi tumhare saath (pretending to think) Viraat. Viraat chala jai ga tumhare saath. 
Viraat: Okay bhai. 
They three went starting from the ground floor. 

Viren took Jeevika to their room to make her understand the plan.

Jeevika: Viren Ji aap mujhe aise kaise khench kar lai ho. 
Viren: Kyun biwi ho meri. Poora hak hai mera tum pe. 
Jeevika( blushing): Mujhe pata hai per
Viren(he moved closer to her): Per
Jeevika: Per abhi darwaza khula hai aur sab hai yahin par.
Viren: Toh main kya kar raha tha. Tumhare dimag main pata nai kya chal raha hai 
Jeevika( Hawww look)
Viren: Acha meri baat suno
Jeevika: Pehle yeh batao keh aap itni jaldi kaise aagai
Viren: Kyun bura laga mera aana toh main jao
Jeevika: Viren ji
Viren: Acha sorry baba. Meri meeting kaldi khatam hogai toh socha tumhe surprise de du lekin yahan akar toh main hi surprise hogaya.
Jeevika: Aisa kyun 
Viren: Armaan aur Maanvi. Aur unka rishta.
Jeevika: Sach batao toh main bhi shock hogai thi. Sab yahi soch rahe honge keh itni jaldi kaise uski shaadi kar de.
Viren: Haan per main kuch aur bhi soch raha hu.
Jeevika: Kya. 

Viraat: Yeh hai mera kamra. 
They moved inside his room.
Armaan: Wow. So simple per phir bhi bahut alag.
Maanvi: Mera partner hai hi bahut different. 
Viraat: Hmmm
He turned around to show him more things. She was confused to see his this type of reply.

Aaj Viraat ko kya hogaya hai. Mera dhang se jawab hi nahi de raha hai aur na hi baat kar raha hai. Subah se meri uske saath zyada baat bhi nahi hui phir bhi ignore kyun kar raha hai
Armaan saw Maanvi lost somewhere so he waved his hand in front of her and called her name. She just smiled at him. Viraat saw this but ignored them. 
Viraat: Chalo main tumhe ab garden dikhata hu.

Garden
Maanvi: Yeh mera iss ghar ka sab se favorite part hai. 
Suddenly it started to rain. Armaan and Viraat moved to a tree where they can be saved from rain. But Maanvi stood there spreading her hands feeling the rain as if its her first and last chance to experience rainy feeling. She started twirling enjoying that moment. 

Armaan and Viraat were admiring the innocence in her act. 
Armaan(looking at Viraat): Kitni achi lag rahi hai na
Viraat(looking at Maanvi): Haan bahut pyaari bahut khobsurat
Armaan(chuckled a bit) : Khobsurat aur barish...Hain Viraat 
Viraat came back to his senses and starts ruffling her hair. 
Viraat: Woh toh bus aise hi.

Armaan phone rang. He picked up the phone but was unable to talk due to lack of signals. He excused himself. He had moved just a few steps when he heard Maanvi sneeze. Maybe due to cold. Even before he could react, viraat ran to her and put his upper jacket on her. Then they had a eyelock.

Armaan just smiled and moved inside. 

Raining+Maanvi+Viraat+eyelock

Yeh saazish hai boondoon ki 
Koi khawaish hai chup chup se
Yeh saazish hai boondoon ki 
Koi khawaish hai chup chup se 
Dekho na Dekho na 
Dekho na Dekho na 

Hawa kuch haule haule zubaan se kya kuch bole
Kyun doori hai ab darmiyaan
Dekho na Dekho na
Dekho na Dekho na 


Maanvi started running around the trees and Viraat behind her. At one moment she turned back to see whether Viraat is there or not. She was disappointed to see no one behind her. But as soon as she turned back, she collided with Viraat and fell in his arms.

Phir na hawein hongi besharam
Phir na dag mag dag mag hone yeh qadam

Viraat made her stand straight but did not removed his hand from her waist. 
Phir na hawein hongi besharam
Phir na dag mag dag mag hone yeh qadam He lightly kissed on her cheek. She ran from him and then stood still. 
Saavn yeh seedha nahi khufiya bara
Kuch toh baraste hue keh raha hai 
Samjho na Samjho na 
Samjho na Samjho na 

He came to her and placed his head over her shoulder. She closed her eyes to make this moment forever.



Hawa kuch haule haule zubaan se kya kuch bole 
Kyun doori hai ab Darmiyaan
Dekho na Dekho na

Dekho na Dekho na 

He turned her to face her. Seeing her eyes still closed he smiled and then kissed her forehead. 

Jugno jaisi chahat dekho jal bhuje
Meethi si mushkil hai koi kya kare 
Jugno jaisi chahat dekho jal bhuje
Meethi si mushkil hai koi kya kare

She opened her eyes and then kissed his forehead too. 

Hontoon ki arzi aise thukrao
Sansoon ki marzi ko jhutlao na

His eyes struck on her lips. 
Chu lo na chu lo na
Chu lo na chu lo

She closed her eyes as her acceptance but still feeling her condition he moved back. When she felt him moving away she opened her eyes and saw him standing opening his arms. 

Hawa kuch haule haule zubaan se kya kuch bole
Na doori hai ab darmiyaan

She hugged him as tightly yet lovingly as she could. 

Dekho na dekho na 
Dekho na dekho na 
Dekho na dekho na
Dekho na Hmmm Hmmm Dekho na


This scene witness were not one not two but four. One Armaan who watched them from the entrance, Viren and Jeevika who saw them from their bedroom window and the third nature, destiny who were happy that Virmaan met. But will their this type of relation be long-lived or short-lived?