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Fab update as usual. I have to say on base of emotion this has to be your best work amongst all. The way you portray the dilemmas, insecurity of a person on trusting someone, going into a relationship, fear of heart break and trust break, fear of rejection, aftereffects of bad childhood, parental problem - isn't normal for a teenage girl like you. so that way hats off 👏👏 i have to admit im very impressed and you know how difficult it is to impress me. though you act like a kid at time but i guess it's allowed since i do too but you are not a normal kid 😛
jk 😆 I understand Abhay's situation too well and how the fear works because he has a bad experience that changed his life. his dad's cheating his mom and her death - poor him. his fears are completely justified. and Pia's feelings are so strong here. she actually called him and did everything to surprise and make him smile on birthday. you know for a person like Pia - i mean the way you portrayed her here emo is a big issue and she is coiled up into her own so my psychology says a person like her would forget how Abhay behaved with her and still pretend to be normal just because they mus love him extremely and know the person too well to realize it wasnt completely his fault either. again marvelous writing 👏
Does Pia still get nightmares because she is afraid she isnt good enough to be loved or someone will hurt her leave her again? 😕
fab work.. update soon
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