Ariya FF: Milenge ab Yaara: Part 16 @ page 44 - Page 31

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Posted: 11 years ago
hey i have been a silent reader all throughout but i thought its imp to congratulate u n 1 another writer on the forum for the outstanding work u guys are doing...u guys r simply the lifelines of this forumπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ƒ
n about your work...u r too good,your story,the characters are so  well described...it makes me think its actually playing!
your present update...superb is the word...loved arjun's jealousy!
shree n chottu r too good...dey r my stars⭐️⭐️...cupids in your ariya story i may sayπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
will be waiting for the next update...update soon dear!
n wanna know wots up with this aditya guy😲
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update! Can't wait for next update! Plz pm me! 
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey.. Thanks for the PM's dear.. Read the last two parts together..

Part 15: Arjun Sir's Jalebi was adorable.. I love Chottu and Shree.. πŸ˜³  Gosh! Riya got high on coffee and almost attacked Arjun!!?? πŸ€£ 
So, a new case?? Sounds quite interesting!

Part 16: Brilliant work with the setup..Aww.. so Dharam has taken a liking towards Riya ji! 😳 Oh and the tomato bit was damn cute!! Like really, I personally think flowers are anyway over-rated.. So, tomatoes?? Not bad! πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

Shree: I think he likes Riya

Chottu: Kaun Arjun sir?

Shree: No yaar!! That's a separate movie...I'm talking about that Aditya...I mean Shiron..

this cracked me up hard! They're adorable darlings! I love the way they tease Riya and she gets all flustered! πŸ˜†


And well, is that smoke i can smell??πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜‰

Arjun smirked. He couldn't believe the guy just gave her a vegetable. Was he out of his mind? Did he have any idea how girls' minds work? He was out and about in the world until 2 months ago, so why was he behaving like he was from Mars??

πŸ˜‰ Well, I'm sure it is!! πŸ˜›

Oh and the new twist?? he's a business tycoon?!!

You had me glued to the screen! πŸ‘πŸ‘

Do continue soon.. 😊





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Posted: 11 years ago
😳😳😳arjun is jealous
that is sooo cute...
and baby tomato was highlightπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
loved the update...cant wait for more..
thanks fr the pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
UPDATE SOON PLZ.. 
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey dear when will u be updating?...waiting eagerly...sorry cant help itπŸ˜›
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow loved it. Feels like reading Sidney Sheldon's  work.
Plz do pm me when u update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey dear.please update soon. eagerly waiting for next part...

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Posted: 11 years ago

It was amazing ... sorry i dint reply earlier 😳 ... i was busy so really didn't get time to comment

omg luv the part when Arjun was jealous ... n Rofl did he actually give Riya a baby tomato 🀣
I loved it really badly n plzzz do update soon waiting for it
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Posted: 11 years ago
No update yet?? πŸ˜­πŸ˜­πŸ˜­