Its grt!!!
D way u've described is fabulous!!!
D way u've described d cases is just precise n perfect!!!
N d case in which riya was accused...OMG!!! It was described in a grt way!!
Every detail was precise!!
Also u gave d correct dialogues to correct person!!!
N u also built d suspence amazingly!!!
D emotional turmoils of riya!! Grt job!!! 👏
Also d confusion of arjun towards his own care,concern n jealousy towards riya!!!
Rathore riya bonding is shown in a v nyc way!!!!
Also chore masti wid riya was grt!!!
N dis case in sikkim!!! Its amazing!!!
Dis shiron is smthng we can say as weird!!!
N d way he behaved wen asked directly was dangerously weird!!!!
N shiron was actually flirting wid riya!!! He is a monk isnt it!!!
Nyways till here its grt!!!
Hope to read nxt part soon!!!
N plz pm me wen u update it!!!
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