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neetha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#211

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ahh..just loved it rutu..the confused sharon n the samart n witty swayam ..they are super awesome n yeah the last art was shho cute..the kiss sharon gav to swayam near his lips😳..hayeee..❤️

p.s: dont be sorry...maine abhi tak update nahi kiya..log mujhe maar dalenge..😛

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swayamsharon

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Posted: 11 years ago

#212

again it was cute!!! sharon confusion, swayam answer it was awsum

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---Priya---

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Posted: 11 years ago

#213

rutu i enjoyed this update to the core... i just cnt say how much i enjoyed reading it 😃

beautifully written..👏

sharon trying to figure out the difference btwn both the sharon's 😊 very wel written and finally she got to knw that only swayam can solve this prb for her 😳

sharon-swayam teasing each other about their dress 😆

poor swayam... he cudnt even taste his hot chocolate 🤣

and the last part 🤣 again felt bad for swayam.. he expected somethng else 😉 but somethng else came up 😆

plz update asap...

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Roger

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Posted: 11 years ago

#214

As always awesome update rutu
Coming to the update it was really sweet
Old sharon vs new sharon
Sharon's confusion was right even I really want that this also happen in show coz she is changed n its all because of swayam n it was really good that she knw it
N then our swayam is here to solve her confusion
Glad that they talk about their past,their insecurities,their confusions
I really loved this ss but its gonna end soon
Ps.u better come with new ff or ss soon
Itna accha likhna ke lia dhamki

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tanuka

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Posted: 11 years ago

#215

awesome update rutu !!

beautifully written 👏

sharon observing the changes in old sharon and new sharon was fantastically described 👍🏼

its so wonderful how swayam always tends to solve all problems and anwers all questions of sharon.❤️

loved the last part , sharon version 1.1 😃

bechara swayan couldnt drink his hot chocolate and also his gf didnt let him kiss her 😆

will be waiting for the next part , update soon...

thanks for the pm.

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Sakina

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Posted: 11 years ago

#216

A very beautiful,and insightful part.I loved the way Swayam explained things to her.Nicely written.:)

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Sawyer_Tom

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Posted: 11 years ago

#217

Hey Rutu. Sorry for not commenting before this. Been kinda busy. 😳

So anyways, you write quite nicely. I really like your SS. The concept is what we all need to see in the show right now. And the way SwaRon discuss all their problems and clear all their misunderstandings in your SS- you should replace the CV's. You'll do a better job of it. 😳 Especially SwaRon. God knows these two have to talk things out.

And I really really liked your whole old Sharon- new Sharon approach. Quite effective and amusing. And the Sheldon touch is always a crowd pleaser.😆

Keep writing because you are really good at it. 👍🏼 And thanks a ton for the PM.

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Nehal92

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Posted: 11 years ago

#218

whoa!!! this was awesone..no..super duper awesome!!!! hayee..confused sharon n genius swayam!! loved it👏

poor swayam cant even have his fav drink!! ( i mean sharon 😛)

update soon

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Poonam

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Posted: 11 years ago

#219

Awww... That was way too cute rutu...^_^ It's always mesmarising how Swayam always solve prblms within no min..:) U know m in our tv hall*as usual, nt giving a damn to it* n I was reading ur update..:P when that bath robe n shirtless thing came, I cudn't stop my laughter...:P:P:P n every1 was looking at me like m a stranger...hahaha... It was too good...:):):)

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Jum

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Posted: 11 years ago

#220

awww.. so cute..

sharon Confused! :P
lol..
Cute.. still..
Waiting for the Next update..
Update soon..
:)
Hey! about hot chocolate..
even i want one!!

Haha but i liked d Last part!
Cute Kiss <3

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