SwaRon SS|One Way [part-12 1/12] - Page 40

Okk critics apart i like the update...how u mention both swaron pov tht was nice to read..also i luv how swayam was concern for sharon when he will nt b there for her...loved it nd pls update fast nd nd nd thnk u for the pm

Superb update and thanks for the pm :)

phew...finally i read all the parts of this ff...😎 Edited by binuja_ - 11 years ago

Awesome update 😊

awesome update😊 

OMG! did i read it right?? I mean seriously Kiddo decided to update...hmm interesting! 😉

EDITED

Firstly, sorry for commenting late..
And secondly..for the update..OMG!!!
Why is there a cliffhanger??
It was brilliantly penned down and I am glad you wrote according to both, Sharon and Swayam's point of views..It's so cute, the way Sharon admires Swayam and his cute face..Aww!!I liked the doppelganger part!!It was amusing!!
It was so sweet when Swayam turned all serious on realizing that Sharon was hurt and she was in pain!!And it was good to see that he really cares a lot...He made up his mind to stay back because he wanted to take care of her!!
Then the ringtone part..Swayam actually set his ringtone is such a way that it defined their equation...It was nice!!It's good to read the gradual development in their equation..
Why did you leave it on a cliffhanger??To some extent, the last part was in a way more enthralling, and it made my adrenaline level go up..As the SS is proceeding, it's getting more and more exciting!!
Update soon this time!!
P.S - 9 pages in word??I didn't take much time to read it..:P
Nicely written..Update soon...😊
Edited by tanha29 - 11 years ago

Hey anaya,thanx for pm and i know that its too late for comment so forgive me...
as my busy schedule,i was unable to read but now i done this..
so i love the sharon pov towards swayam and swayam'care for sharon.. in all of way i love swaron in each condition of their life... i like this part but u stop at the curious mode..
so pls update asap...   

thanx once again,
prateek

Thanx for pm.. i loved this update.. pls update next part asap..
prateek