ur eyes my hope-SWARON!! updated part-15 - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
#51
lovely update. Loved your math calculations 😆
A jealous Sharon is always a treat..Looking forward to your next update and see how Swayam is going to clear the MI. 
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52
yr...itna chotu sa ? next time pls a bada wala nd yeah thnk u sooo much pm ke liye! ;)😉👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
Read all 3 update & i like the way in which the FF is progressing..
Plz pm me when u update 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
hiii...i read all the three parts...loved them...plz pm me next time when u update...i am adding u to my buddy list...n update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55

4th part...


vicky & nil:missed swayam...hmm?

this annoys both sharon and rey as they hear it...sharon gets frustrated and essages swayam-rehearsal hall rt now!!!!!! he didn't see the msg and goes to the canteen with everyone..! he senses sharon's absence but thinks she must be busy smwhere else...

AT THE REHEARSAL HALL:

sharon:where the hell is he...?

its been 20 minutes since i've messaged him...

vicky enters----vicky:sharon tum yahan...?

sharon:haan...i'm waiting for swayam..kuch cultural societies ke baare mein discuss krna tha.!---aur kuch personal socities ke baare mein bhi..(mumberibg to herself)

vicky:vo toh vahaan canteen mein sab ke saath hai...!

sharon:acha,par kyun?(in an annoyed manner)

vicky:haan! vo kriya ke vaapis aane ke kaaran..! he is so damn lucky pehle Nicole mam aur ab Kriya aur aage pta nhi kitni girls uske peeche pagal hoongi..!  

sharon:yeah!

 

Sharon reaches canteen and glares swayam...she was ready to rip his head off...!

this doesn't go unnoticed by swayam...she again sends him a msg and this time swayam reads it...in class rt now!!!!!!!

swayam:ab kya hua?

in class...sharon:you are late by 2 minutes and 13 seconds!!!!!!!

swayam:vo--vo--acha koi kaam tha (asking very scared)

sharon:lagta hai aajkal tum bahut busy rehne lag gaye ho!

swayam:nhi vo...

sharon:kal cultural society ki meeting hai...i want a report regarding all the activities which are in action rt now...

swayam:yes mam!

sharon:report ki proof-reading ke liye usse aaj shaam paanch baje tak ready kar lena! bring it to the rehearsal hall then..i would meet you there.

swayam:but!

sharon:any problem?????(with her diva attitude)

swayam:n..no...no!

sharon:kk...good!you better be in time..

 

sharon leaves while swayam stays there to prepare the report...after a while rey comes there.

rey:hey dude! kya kar rha hai?

swayam:kuch nhi...sharon ne kuch kaam diya hai toh...

rey:tera kuch nhi ho sakta!!!!!!!(in a regretting tone)

remember i told you,,"rudeness"!

swayam:chod naa!

rey:acha! aaj tu get together ke liye toh aa rha hai naa..?

swayam:soory yr...i cn't!

rey:tu ne sharon ko btaya get together ke baare mein...?

rey:tu ne sharon ko btaya get together ke baare mein...?

swayam:i forgot!!!! vese usse pta hee hoga...vo bhi toh aayegi!

rey:chal bye! i gtg...

 

Its 5' swayam is gng to the rehearsal hall where he sees Sharon dancing to the song KYUN of Kambakkht Ishq...she swayed with the music..he cherished her as if any angel was dancing..she was doing a mixture of freestyle and contemporary...

note:the maroon part is of swayam and purple of sharon...

he stood there watching her...

Kyun Pholon Ke

Khile Khile Rang Ud Gaye-3

she seemed to herself sing the song and realted with every word of the song...


Kyun In Dino
Khud Se Rehti Hoon Mein Khafa Khafa
Khafa Khafa

then as the male portion began...Swayam lipped it and started to sing it himself..sharon was surprised to see him this way...she lowered her head in embarrassment...
Kyun Pholon Ke
Ude UDe Rang Khile gaye-3


Kyun In Dino 
Hosh Mein Hai Mere
Nasha Nasha
Nasha Nasha

he also swayed with the song and they both didn't came to know when they both started to dance to its lovely tunes...as the female portion had to done by smone sharon also joined in.

They both not only danced to the tunes but to each other's heartbeat...

Kyun Pholon Ke
Khile Khile Rang Ud Gaye

swayam asked sharon if they could dance together as he put his hand forward...sharon hesitantly puts her hand on his hand and they started to dance together.

Teri Meri Takraro Se
Bana Dil Ka Yeh Rista Hai
Aaina To Mein Dekhu To
Tera Chehra Hi Dhita Hai
Jab Se Mujhse Tu Mili

swayam held sharon tight with his hand on her waist and one hand merged with hers...
Jane Kaise Mulakaton Mein 
Yunhi Aisi Waise Baaton Mein 
Kare Chote Mote Vaadein The
Isi Chote Se Bahane Se 
Pakke Tujhe Kho Diya

sharon turned around showing her back to swaym and blusing...
Meri Hi Hai Khata
Meri Hi Hai Saja
Phir Bhi Dil Kahe 
Yeh Kyun Hua

swayam rolled sharon as he took her finger in his ahnd and rotated her...
Kyun In Dino
Khud Se Rehti Hoon Mein Khafa Khafa
Khafa Khafa

Kyun Pholon Ke
Ude UDe Rang Khil gaye

Kyun Pholon Ke
Ude UDe Rang khil gaye

all this while they both were lost into each others' eyes and had reached another world where they were alone and were two bodies one soul...




Aaj Se Jo Mere Kal Honge
Teri Aankhon Mein Woh Dekhte Hai 
Teri Baaton Ke Jo Aksar Hai 
Meri Daastan Ho Likhte Hain 
Aisa Mujhe Kyun Hua 

swayam held sharon from her waist while sharon was lloking into his dark brown chocolaty eyes...

Dhuan Dhuan Si Kahani Hai 
To Bhi Aakhon Mein Bhi Paani Hai 
Galon Se Yeh Jo Guzarti Hai 
Tere Gam Ki Nishani Hai 
Mit Si Gai Har Dua



Meri Hi Hai Khata
Meri Hi Hai Saja
Phir Bhi Dil Kahe 
Yeh Kyun Hua
sharon turned around but swayam pulled her towards him.sharon was astonished she held swayam's hand tightly

Kyun In Dino
Khud Se Rehti Hoon Mein Khafa Khafa
Khafa Khafa

Kyun Pholon Ke
Khile Khile Rang Ud Gaye



Kyun Pholon Ke
Ude UDe Rang Khil gaye...

as the song came near its end they both were reducing the distance between them and were lost into each other...but as the song ended they came to their senses they both stepped backward....for a while they were at loss of words but then swayam tried to break the silence when sharon's phone rang!

simmi:hey sharon!where are you? we all are waiting for you! don't you wanna come for the get together...?

sharon:no,simmi i was just about to leave.i'll be there in half an hour!

disconnecting the call...sharon:what are you doing here?

swayam:you called me here...remember? for the report!

sharon:yeah! i remember..so,have you completed it?

swayam:yeah! just a small section left!

sharon:so complete it(with full attitude) anyways i have to go...i'll meet you tomorrow...!

swayam:but-------ummm...proof reading!

sharon to herself:i know tumne jo bhi kiya hoga sahi hee hoga...

i'll check it in the morning...!

sharon leaves for the get together where everyone is waiting for her and swayam to come...!

nil:lo sharon aa gyi! but where the hell is swayam?

rey:vo nhi aaye gaa!

chorus:par kyu?

rey:usse kaam hai...vo nhi aayega.

sharon senses swayam's absence:where the hell is he?

she asks rey about swayam's absence and he tells:swaym ko tumhaare reputation ki bahut fikar hai...usne kaha ki agar vo report complete nhi kar paaya toh tumhari cultural society mein insult ho jaayegi.vo tumhaari tarah nhi hai vo tumhe insult hote hue nhi dekh sakta...sharon why do you laways keep hurting him?

sharon feels guilty about what rey just said...she remembers the day she slapped swayam in front of everyone...the abandoned staircase when she said to him that she doesn't "want him"...a tear escaped from her eyes!

she then remembers the paso-doble which she did with swayam and the rage in his eyes that day...

the next part to be today only but minimum 12 replies required...go ahead start filling the pages with loads of comments and likes!





Edited by swaron_d3 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56
super amazing update !!! the swaron dance was hawt :) will be waiting for the next part, update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
Great going till now. Loved the dance portion of this update and jealous Sharon is always million bucks . 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58
Good one...update soon...thnx for the pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#59
wonderful update.
thanks for the pm.

do update soon,.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#60
Swaron dance was amazing
Waiting for next update