ur eyes my hope-SWARON!! updated part-15

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Posted: 11 years ago
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UR EYES MY HOPE--SWARON...!!!!!!

i don't know what i'm going to write down now...today's episode has touched my heart in such a way that it forced me to write my feelings...the way sharon consoles swayam is commendable..!!!
my heart skips a beat when sharon looks at swayam with her beautiful mesmerizing eyes which are not only pleasing but also convincing swayam of her love for him.
i hope you would like my creation...it is a shot in the dark which could be either incredibly great or disastrous...so here it goes:

RDX SIR'S WEDDING DAY-----------
SHARON AT HER HOME GETTING READY...
SHARON:WHICH one should i wear...? its really confusing(pulling her hair) i told simmi-rinni to choose one and send it...they instead have sent 5!!!!!! i think i should call them and ask which one i should wear?
she accidently dials swayam instead of simmi
without paying much attention who was on the other side of phone...she starts with...
hell guys!!!!!! u've sent me 5 dresses--one pink,one blue,one purple,two maroon...i'm dealing with such a confusion here...i dn't know which would suit me best(and in her mind which one would swayam like...?)
swayam:i would say pink cz it suits best on you...its not that rest are bad...but pink is an fairy's colour so i think u should wear pink one...
she was left stunned and immediately sees whom she has called...when she sees swayam on her dialing screen..she bits her lip...at the same time 
swayam in his mind she must be left speechless after seeing my name and would be feeling very embarrassed for which she would have bit her lip..!
bit ur lip???? swayam said.
sharon:how did u know?
swayam:that means u did..!
anyways i think u should wear pink...as of i would like to see you in pink.😍
sharon:i wanted to call simmi and accidently called you!
swayam:its okk...no problem
i think now you should call simmi and know her views cz they are the one whose opinion matters u most...rt?
sharon:(was somewhat hurt by what swayam rt now said but sooner realized it was a result of her own mistakes said:)kk...see you at the wedding.
(disconnecting the call)
  

i hope you liked it...
i would continue it soon and do tell me your opinion...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice post... i loved it... especially when sharon was thinking in her mind that which one swayam like... awww so cute. Really u hve beautifully written the feelings of swaron towards each other!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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very cute 😊
sharon thinking which swayam wil like 😳
do continue soon
ps thanks 4 pm
Posted: 11 years ago
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sure its very nice and interesting
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Posted: 11 years ago
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oh very nice OS...loved it ya...especially lip bitten part...swayam guessing it...heheheheheh...do PM me...plzzz if possible do include something romantic...i wud love to see sharon askn swayam over phone abt the dress she shud be wearing...
Edited by luvSwaron4ever - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ut was really a sweet.starting
Do continue n pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice start..swayam knws sharon da most.. Pleez do cntinue..its awesome
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome start !!
really liked it πŸ˜Š
thanks for the pm .
update soon...


p.s - i am the 9th person who is replying so update the next part soon...😊
Edited by tanukaswaron - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I am the 10th...its cute so update and do PM me next time 
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Im 11th nw pls update m waiting awsm part