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Posted: 11 years ago

13th part...




What preserved in her heart from so long...!

Swayam held her tightly yet safely making sure she was not hurt..! he held her by her waist with her back facing him...he gently lowered his head making it comfortably lie on her neck..!

Sharon looked up to determine if he really was so close to him when he whispered into her ears: i haven't even played the song yet and you are blushing already... ??

Sharon: ummm...

Swayam: so here is the song (taking his phone out of his pocket and playing one of his favorite songs)

Swayam places Sharon's left hand on his shoulder and his right hand was around her waist, slightly around the back and held her right hand with his left hand tightly pulling her closer to him...

Swayam started singing the song:
(Pyaar hua, ikraar hua hai
Pyaar se phir kyoon darrta hai dil) - 2

Sharon: this song..?

Swayam: yeah! Any problem.? You said you love this song...right?

Sharon: yeah!

swayam: so sway to its tune(twirling her round with his finger)         Sharon on completing the round places her palms on swayam's chest singing-                 

Kenta hai dil Rasta mushily
Mailroom naming hai khan manila) - 2

 she gets away blushing while swayam holds her wrist tightly bringing her close to him..
Swayam raises her head and makes her face him...eye to eye:

Pyaar hua, ikraar hua hai
Pyaar se phir kyoon darrta hai dil

swayam motioned his eyes asking her the same thing ^

as they both took a step forward the street lights started to glow one by one in accordance with their foot-steps:


Sharon places her hands around his neck saying to the music:

Kehta hai dil Rasta mushkil
Maaloom nahin hai kahan manzil

swayam takes Sharon's hand from his neck and kisses them saying:
Pyaar hua, ikraar hua hai
Pyaar se phir kyoon darrta hai dil

Sharon blushing gets away from swayam and heads towards the car:
(Aa, aa aa aa, aa aa aa, aa aa aa)

swayam comes to her singing with a big smile on his face and pleading her not to stop and gets on the pole nearby...Sharon follows him while swayam standing up gives her his hand..singing:
Kaho ki apni preet ka geet na badlega kabhi
Sharon stands infront of the pole while swayam stands at the back engulfing the pole while holding her from her waist and resting his head on her shoulder..Sharon turning half-way round seeing swayam sings:
Tum bhi kaho is raah ka meet na badlega kabhi
Pyaar jo toota, saath jo chhoota

swayam carefully takes her hand in his hand intertwining his fingers with hers' And stretches his other hand in air while Sharon also joins in:

Chaand na chamkega kabhi 
swayam brings her down the pole while she is happy being in his arms. swayam on lowering her sings:
Aa ha ha, aa ha ha
Aa aa aa, aa aa aa

Sharon also joins in:
(Aa ha, aa ha ha
Aa aa aa, aa aa aa)

Sharon puts her arms around swayam who has gently placed his hands around her waist. and made her sway to the tune:

Pyaar hua, ikraar hua hai
Pyaar se phir kyoon darrta hai dil

Sharon co-ordinates with him giving him a big smile more of grin:
Kehta hai dil rasta mushkil
Maaloom nahin hai kahan manzil

swayam starts swaying to the tune himself concentrating on making her smile more and more gorgeous:
Pyaar hua, ikraar hua hai
Pyaar se phir kyoon darrta hai dil

Sharon goes and sits on the bonnet of the car while her chin rested on her palms..pretending to be tired and singing the song lowly making puppy face:
(Aa, aa aa aa, aa aa aa, aa aa aa)
Raatein dason dishaaon se kahengi apni kahaaniyaan

swayam comes to her asks" what happened(quoting with his head)"he takes her hand out of her restless position and places it on her shoulder as he was to pick her but she for his shock runs her hand through his hair  and frees her other hand from him and messes his hair...he gets angry and turns around in rebel..She places her head on his shoulder asking him, "sorry!"

he tries moving ahead but she stops him from doing so by placing both of her hands around him and asking him to pick her up(on his back')he smiling picks her up and sing:

Geet hamaare pyaar ke dohraayegi jawaaniyaan

Sharon was enjoying her ride.she gives a light kiss on swayam's cheek which distracts him and he leaves his hand touching his cheeks feeling her lipstick.all while this he doesn't notice that he had drop Sharon on the ground:

Sharon frowns and asks him to pick her up while swayam says no..Still feeling his cheek!

Sharon is left awestruck on this behavior of his and gets up on her own

She on getting up runs after swayam who is running to save his life... as swayam was running away from her, the song was also coming to an end and a time came when neither the song could be heard nor he could be seen!

Suddenly when sharon notices swayam's disappearance,she gets worried

She starts shouting his name aloud her fear could be well-judged by her voice.:"swayam________swayam!"

She standing near the tree starts sweating while her eyes got watery..she continues calling his name:"swayam------swayam!"

Suddenly she felt two muscular arms around her waist she realized that she knows this touch this touch is very familiar to her

She turns around to see swayam giggling'

She starts hitting him lightly on his chest

Swayam laughing says:"you are coward! Kitna dar jaati ho'

Sharon: shut up! Do you have any idea how much I was scared (Lowering her head)

Swayam hugs her tightly wrapping his arms around her'

Sharon: don't ever play that prank again..i can't live without you'

(She bites her lip realizing what she said and buries herself in his chest while his grip tightened on her)


guys, i tried my best to do justice to this part because neither swaron magic could be created the same nor the Raj kapoor and nargis's magic could be recreated!

so,i'm sorry if i disappointed you in any case...

and guys,this time loads of comments and replies are needed!

pg 75 is the next target! 

Edited by swaron_d3 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
AWWWHHH, The whole SwaRon dance was really cute and the end part where Swayam scares her and Sharon tells him that she can't live without him was just beautiful !!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
hayeee this one was sooo romantic 😳
loved it😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
This was such an romantic update. Loved the whole portion. Right from the starting to the final part where Sharon accidentaly spoke her heart and hugged Swayam. Waitng for the next update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update..n deir dance was reallie very cute..sharon blushing n askn him to pick her up was too cute..
N u described it soo beautifully..update d next chap soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update...
m at loss of words for the song choice...
thanks for the pm...
update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
such romantic update ❤️ for me u created new magic 👏 u described swaron dance very well
i loved the part where swayam dropped sharon after she kissing him 😆
eeep.. sharon said she can't live without him. 😳
pls update soon & thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sooo beautiful 😊

Luvd it 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
thanks for the pm and beautiful update :D

Nikki <3
Edited by 1D_D3-Crazy - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing... beautifully written
waiting fr the next part
Update soon