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Posted: 13 years ago
#61
different story
nice..
yash hates his father maan..
w8ing 4 past
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Posted: 13 years ago
#62
Painful.part...
So.maaneet r yashs parents...
Bt y he hates his father... I hope maan ne kuch bura na kiya ho...
Bt i no tu mere hopes par pani dal degi... Bt plzzz update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#63
Neha 🤗...thank u for the update and PM...Yash and Madhu...glad u made them a couple in your OS...i see this Yash has a really painful past too...felt sad for him...glad he has Maadhu to help him...waiing to see what happened to Maaneet...plz continue...TC 😊

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Mishti13 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#64
beautiful update
thanks fo pm
cont. soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#65

Well well well you really shocked me by revealing

the couple to be yash & madhu. But I ain't

complaining i loved the starting & waiting

for the next part to be MAANEET saga.


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Posted: 13 years ago
#66
Nice update yash is hating his dad
want to know about maaneet really curious to know the past waiting 4 next part..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67
amazing start...yash is son of maneet...
waiting frt he past to unveil...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68

dear...😛
4 PMing Me..😊..
ur updates r just ... n
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just dear.😃..
4 ur
updates...😃...
keep the job up dear..👏..
keep ing dear...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#69
Awesome update...loved it
waiting to knw maaneet life
continue soon
thankx for pm



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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey friends... sorry for being late... as you all know last week i was busy with desiring devil ss... and now i'll try my best to finish this one by this week... please support me... here is the a short update as i wrote it just now in 40 mins... pls have a look...

part-3



"no yash……. Don't say like this….. you are not going anywhere…… get that….. you just missed your parents today so badly that's why you have this feeling so badly…." She said to him straight looking in to his eyes cupping his face in to her palms……

Both stood up and he moved to the window looking at the moon which is full is it's shape… it was glowing like a new bride but this moon is witnessed for what happened with his mom at her wedding night…. He was asking from this moon why he let that happened with his mom….? Madhu held him by his shoulder and rubbed his arm for calming him down…..

Yash-"do you want to know what happened in my parent's life?" he asked to his beloved wife looking at the moon still….. madhu looked at him knowing his condition and she wanted to know the truth as well which makes him like this…. She knew him from the childhood as she is the daughter of aditya and pinky…. He was not like this but passing some years suddenly he became like hard shell…. She made him turned and look direct in his eyes capturing his emotions….

Madhu-"yes yash.. I want to know but if you are satisfied with it otherwise I won't like to be…" yash knew she will say him this…. He moved towards his wardrobe and took out the diary and handed to her and told her to read this diary… it's his mom's means geet's diary… she will get to know everything about them…. He signaled her to sit on the couch and read it….. she nodded and she moved to the couch where yash stood at the window gazing at the moon still asking the same question…. Where was his mom's fault…. He hated his dad but he loved him also… only few ones know about this that he hated his dad and madhu is the one of few…..

Madhu sat on the couch and opened the diary with her shivering hands, a smile formed on her lips seeing the pic at the front page which is very old may be it was her childhood pic…. "GEET & MAAN" written below the picture… madhu caressed the picture and moved further, flipped the another page……

Hello I am Geet….. Geet Handa…. My age is 9 years old…. Quite small na…. I know….. you know what why I am writing this diary… because I have not my mother…. Everyone have mother except of me and Nahar bhai sa….. from now onwards, I'll tell you everything my sweet diary…………..

Flashback

Geet-Kaka sa……. Hamein ghar jaldi jana hai please car thoda tez chalayiye na…. she told him between her crying…..

Kaka- bitiya, kyon ro rahi ho? Kisis ne kuch kaha? He asked to her because he also loved her as she is so cute and sweet by her nature… she showered all her love to everyone but she get accusation from everyone beside of her dadi sa and her nahar bhai sa….. who loved her so much….

Geet-nahi kaka sa, bas aise hi… she rubbed her eyes and then they reached to their hawali at Udaipur…. She immediately opened the car door and ran inside the hawali and bumped to her nahar bhai sa….

Nahar-geet, sambhal kar…. Chot lag jayegi…. Geet looked at him raising her face , he saw her red eyes which shows that she cried a lot…. He immediately bend down and cupped her face in his palms and asked what happened? She hugged him and cried..

Geet-bhai sa, hamari maa sa kyo nahi hai? Sabke paas maa sa hai bas aapke aur hamare paas hi nahi hai….

Nahar-bas itni si baat… aapko pata hai gudiya, bhagwaan ji ko na ek bahut hi ache insaan ki jarurat thi to unhone hamari maa sa ko apne paas bula liya…. Hum na aapko raat mein maa sa se milawayenge…. Aap milengi unse? He asked from her wiping her tears…. She nodded and kissed him on his cheek and ran inside her room…. She threw her school bag on the couch and changed her dress and pulled out her diary and starts writing it…. Wrote at the first page about her mother and about her bhai sa….

At night, she went to her bhai sa's room and snatched the file from his hand and made her way to the terrace with him…. she sat on the swing with her bhai sa and kept her head on his shoulder while he caressed her head lovingly…. He asked about her school and classes and some other things… she told him everything about her school, about her exams and her friends….

Geet-bhai sa, hum maa sa se kab milenge? She asked with a sad face but a happiness were there for meeting with her mother least she know about the meeting…..

Nahar-chalo hamare sath…. He stood up grabbing her hand in his…. They made their way to the open area and nahar made the bed at the terrace and both laid down side by side looking at the sky….

Nahar-gudiya, aap dekh rahi hia wo sabse jayada chamakta hua tara(star)? He asked to her pointing at the most twinkling star…. She followed his finger point and looked at the twinkling star….

Geet-ji, bhai sa….

Nahar-wo hai hamari maa sa… and looked at her little sister….

Geet-lekin bhai sa, hamari maa sa tara kaise ho sakti hai? She asked to him in her utter confusion… nahar smiled at her small sister and her innocence…. She doesn't anything….

Nahar-aapko pata hai, jab bhi koi bhagwaan ji ke paas jata hai and to wo dur aasmaan me jakar tara ban jata hai taaki wo upar se hamein dekh sake, hum par nazar rakh sake, hamien guide kar sake, hamein pyaar de sake, mushkilo mein hamara sath de sake…. Geet at once sat up looking at her bhai sa…

Geet-sach mein bhai sa…. Maa sa hamein dekh sakti hai?

Nahar-han bilkul… aur aapko pata hai wo aapse kya keh rahi hai iss waqt? He asked from her still looking at the sky… she shook her head in no and asked kya?

Nahar-maa sa aap se keh rahi hai ki aap kabhi udaas mat hona, kabh mat rona ki aapki maa sa nahi hai… wo hamesha aapke aas paas hai… jab bhi aapko unki kami mehsso ho to aap bas apne dil par hath rakhna and aur unhe yaad karna…. He said to her putting her hand at her heart's place….

"today I met with my mother… you know she is looking me from far no, no very far…. She is a star you know…. Mujhe bhi star banna hai but I don't know hoc can I become star? It will be so fun na being a star, we can see everyone, everything….. sachi me, tub hi mere sath star banna meri pyaari diary… mai tujhe akela kaise chhod du…. Tu dekhna, mai ek din jarur star banungi"

Flashback ends

Madhu felt a lump reading this first page… she was so innocent at that time….

Yash-"you know what mom wanted to be a star and today she is a star… my dad fulfilled her wish…today she can see everyone, everything… it will be fun for her na…."



precap
more past


waiting for your response
love ya
neha



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