Tishnagi-tsala-MG OS DISCONTINUED, NOTE/PG20

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TISHNAGI-that snatches a life away


Hello friends''''. Me neha, here again with my bak-bak''.. I knew mai bahut pakati hu aap logo ko but still what to do'.. control hi nahi hota yaar'' aap logo ko pakana achha lagta hai''.hehehe''..😆 ok sorry''.. here is my new OS-TISHNAGI-that snatches a life away''

Please take a look and tell me hows this?


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PART-1




Mangalam bhagwaan Vishnu, mangalama garuda dhawaja,

Mangalam kundari kaksha, manglaye tano hari..

Priest was chanting mantras for the marriage'.. and the couple was doing according as priest said to them to do' priest was chanting mantras and asked the couple to add ghee in the fire' bride held the groom's hand while groom was adding ghee in the fire as priest tell them'. Priest called the bride's parents for kanyadaan and they did their kanya dan to this man who is going to be life partner of their daughter'. Priest told them to stood up and took 7 pheras round this sacred fire'.

Around this holy fire for taking 7 promises for their life long, they stood up and groom held his would be wife's hand and took first 4 pheras around this holy fire holding her hand in his and then bride took last 3 pheras with his groom'. The 7 pheras completed and they again sat down in the mandap and priest told groom to fill bride's maang with sindoor and tied this manglasutra around her neck'. groom did as priest told him to do'. After all the rituals the bride is now groom's'. now she is his wife, his life partner, in his all pain, happiness'. She will be by his side always as they promised to each other'. They took blessings from elders and went to his house taking his bride with him'..

The door bell rings and his mom opened the door for them holding the aarti thal in her hand''

"meera maa'.. " he called his mom name in happiness and she gave her 1000 watt smile to him and her daughter-in-law'. Both bent down and took blessings from her'. His dad came from behind and called meera that took aarti and fulfill all the rituals'.. meera noded as her loving husband dev told her to do' meera did aarti and told her daughter-in-law to kick this pot which is full of rice and bride did as her mother-in-law told her'. She again bend down and took blessings from her'. They completed all the rituals and play little bit games with snehal'. Meera's daughter'. She loved her brother so much'. Though she knew little bit about his brother's past but she knew everything about her brother's present' she loved her bhabhi a lot'

After completing all the rituals snehal held her bhabhi's hand took her in her brother's room'. The room was decorated with red and white roses'.. the dim light of candles tickling her senses'.. candles were only present there for burning their night like a fire'. The moon light is a sign of their love' the bed was completely decorated with red roses and white chiffon curtains were spreading all over the bed covering it beautifully'. The cool breeze was coming from the large window and the curtains were blowing like anything from the air'

Snehal was teasing her bhabhi a lot like anything with her brother's name'. teasing her telling about her brother's biceps, about his body, about 6 pack abs and her bhabhi was all red'. After a lots of teasing session, snehal left her bhabhi alone '.. she was sitting alone in the room on the king size bed in the mid of it like a queen waiting for his king'. The room was making her feel like she is living a fairytale and waiting for her love'.

After a lots of thinking, her face was like a tomato cherry red' she was blushing like anything , she clutched her fingers tight in excitement, she curled her toes in anticipation, she bit her lip in urge to fell him'. her fingers were aching to feel his body beneath her fingers' her throat went dry with her own wild thoughts which are going more wild by passing every second'. A cool breeze came and tickle her senses more, she shivered in these cool breeze'.

After a lots of waiting, she heard the sound of knob clicking and door slightly opened' she saw the an entering figure inside the room' she saw his shoes and she looked more through her net dupatta'. She knew his from so long but today they became' they married after a long wait'. Because he wants to take responsibilities of his papa's business and make it on a new height and he did'. Today KHURANA CONSTRUCTIONS is number 1 company of INDIA while this is at 3rd position across all the countries'. He fell in love with her when she joined his company as a accountant '. Both get engaged and took a decision that after completing 3 big projects they will get married and today the day came they get married'.. she became his after a long time'.

He entered inside the room and went away from her'' she looked at him'''. she knew this would be coming'. '''He stood in front of huge of photo'''. Which is hanging on the wall'''' He looked at the photo and some alone tears escaped from his eyes and making his eyes wet '''' She stood up from the bed, he knew she will ask him so many question , she asked him so many times about it but he never open up himself in front of him'''' he thought he will break down but today he has to tell her everything about his life' about his past'' . about everything'

He wiped his tears with his index fingers and took his tears on his finger tips and looked at them'''.. Looking deep in those tears which makes a man weak from inside'''.. She came and stood beside him'''' he knew she is right here, with him'. he crossed his arms over his chest and looked deep in that photo remembering those lovely moments'''..that beautiful life , those beautiful moments''. She stood beside him and held his shoulder '.

He heard her bangles sound which fills his room''. Giving an unknown feeling to him'' again tears split from his eyes making him again weak and she shook her head in no'.. telling him don't cry'.. came out from your past, that dreadful past which he never shared with her'' he held her hand in his hand and try to say something but she made him quite keeping her finger on his lips'.. again tears formed in his eyes and she raised her fingers to his face for wiping them' she gently wipe them with her fingers stroking his cheeks gently with her soft fingers''

she traced his cheeks and jaw line with her fingers gently wiping his cheeks which are wet due to tears'. She held his arm and rubbing his arm upside down with her down filling his room with the sweet noise from her jewelries''. He smiled through his tears'.. she smiled seeing him smiling but she knew how much weak from inside, how much he torn from inside deep from his heart'. He held her hand and kissed her hand for thanking her for coming in his life making it so beautiful'' he again looked at the huge photo frame which is hanging on the wall , he traced the photo with his hand with so much love he had deep inside his heart'..



precap

past

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tell me friends hows this?😕

Should I continue this one?😕

Can anyone guess who is this couple?

It will take only 2-3 parts''.

I know this is a short one but what to do' just write today within 1 n half hour'..

Waiting for your response'.

Aur haan'' ye batana mat bhulna ki banner kaisa hai?😉😆

Love ya 😃

Neha'..







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my whole work here...

neha's fantasies on maaneet
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congrats for the new story
and lovely start
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lovely start dear...very interesting...whose photo is that...wat happened in te past...
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very nice start..a bit suspence.. hopefully the pair is geet n maan.pls cont soon
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congrats for the new os
loved the start...
the couple is maneet but whose in that photo??/
wtng for the nxt
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lovely cncept
why do i have a feeling that the pic is of geet
who is dead
i hope i doesnt happen
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