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Posted: 13 years ago
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part-2




she traced his cheeks and jaw line with her fingers gently wiping his cheeks which are wet due to tears'. She held his arm and rubbing his arm upside down with her down filling his room with the sweet noise from her jewelries''. He smiled through his tears'.. she smiled seeing him smiling but she knew how much weak from inside, how much he torn from inside deep from his heart'. He held her hand and kissed her hand for thanking her for coming in his life making it so beautiful'' he again looked at the huge photo frame which is hanging on the wall , he traced the photo with his hand with so much love he had deep inside his heart'..


"you look same as your papa, yash!" his wife said to him'.. he held her hand which is rested on his shoulder''.

"hmmm, but only by looks'." Yash replied to his wife who looks at him like she doesn't know nothing'. She wants to know about his parents but he never open up himself''

"you know what'. I always hear that there is seven people in this earth who looks same' I mean has a same face'.. but you know I never believe those talks'.. those were baseless talks fro me'.. but today you know'' I believe those baseless talks because I found a proof'.. you" he looked at her''

"you are same as like your father'.." she said again to him'.

"you know what? You are also an exception case like me'.. " she raised her brows in question and he smiled at her'..

"I mean sweetheart! You and mama are also looks so same but you have curly hairs but mama has straight hairs but one thing is similar between you both.." yash told to his dearest wife'..

"and what that's thing?" she asked to him'..

"you are also sweet like my mama, but you know what I don't remember anything about her'" tears came out from his eyes when he was telling her about his mama'..

"but you know when I saw you first, I though my mama came to me, because you look same as like her, but later I got to know that you are madhu, not my mama" yash said to her looking deep in her eyes'

"why yash? Why you always aloof? Why you never open up yourself to me? I wanted to know yash'" his wife madhu said to him''. he ignored her questions which she used to ask him''''.

(ok''. Yash from punar vivah and madhu from madhubala'' both are newly wed couple'. )

Yash looked at madhu fro a brief moment and then turn again to the huge portrait which has a old garland on it'' he removed the old garland and hanging a new fresh garland with fresh flowers on it'' madhu helped him in hanging the garland on the portrait'..she knew he loved his parents a lot but somewhere he has little hatred towards his father''she doesn't why he hate his papa but she knew she has to find out why he hates his papa? He removed his hanky from his pocket and clean the his parents photo''. He lit the candle in front of his parent's photo and whispered'..

"happy birthday mama'.. " wished his mama through his tears, madhu also wished her mother-in- law happy birthday'' and both took blessing through the photo'..

"I missed you mama'' so much'. " he turned and hugged madhu at once hiding his face from this world'.. he is also hard rock like his father but he is not a jerk like his father'.. he hates his father but more than he loves him'.. but he used to show his hatred towards him'''.. madhu patted his back lovingly'''..

"happy birthday papa'." She wished him looking at the photo while yash closed his eyes more and tears welled down wetting his cheeks'' YASH SINGH KHURANA is crying today''.

"won't you wish your papa yash?" she asked to him in her sweet tone, while calming him down massaging his hairs'' he shook his head in no''. he won't wish his papa, he won't wish him happy birthday''.

"why?" she asked to him'''

"because I hate him but what to do' I love him also'. Mujhse ab aur bardasht nahi hota'.. I can't tolerate it more now'.. I want to open myself to you'' I want to share my pain to you'' I want you by my side madhu'.. only you'.. " he fell down on the ground missing his parents so much'.. though he get parents love from meera & dev but he missed his real parents'.. who left him behind in this cruel world alone'' he used to love his papa until he get to know the truth about his mama''.. madhu sat down beside him and cupped his face in her palms'.


"madhu, I love my papa more than myself but when I get to know the truth'. I felt disgust from him'.. suddenly my inner beast evoked and I started hate him'.. " yash is opening himself to his wife'.. the pain which is deep inside his heart' today he is sharing to his soul mate'.. he felt little lighter but there is a lot more, he has to share with her''

"ssshhh'.. calm down yash'.. " she wiped his tears and hid his face in her chest'. He hugged her tight feeling her warmth''.. madhu grabbed the glass of water and told him to have it'. He has two sips of water and feeling suffocated now'..

"what happen yash? Why are breathing so hard?" she asked panicking seeing his state '.. his physical state and mental state going worst'.. she massaged his hairs and rubbed his back up and down with her soft hands''.

"I want to see my mama so badly''.. I want to feel her warmth so badly'.. I want to hug my papa so badly'.. why I has this urge?" he questioned to her looking at her face finding an answer, hoping that she has the answers of his questions''

"no yash''. Don't say like this'.. you are not going anywhere'' get that'.. you just missed your parents today so badly that's why you have this feeling so badly'." She said to him straight looking in to his eyes cupping his face in to her palms'.

Precap

Past for sure

Ok, don't get mad at me for taking yash and madhu'. I wanted some thing different that's why I picked them'. Maaneet has their different story in this'. So please have trust on me'. Some readers wants from me that it should be happy os but like a cry baby'. But as you have read the title, TISHNAGI-that snatches a life away'' what do you from the title?

Ok I know this is a short one but what to do.. I have wrote so many parts' so please kaam chala lo'''.

Now give me my comments and likes'.

Waiting for your response..

Love ya

neha


Edited by neha5058 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
Loved the update a lot...
thankgod it was not maan!!!
Y yash hates his dad so much!!!!
waiting for Life of maaneet!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
nice update
really curious to know the past...
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
awsem update waiting for past to be revealed



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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
lovely update .
yash is hating his dad 😕
want to know about maaneet😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
different story.. n very interesting..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
lovely update
i hope u have not made maan a grey character in this OS
coz hearing about why yash hated maan its seems that maan was adisgusting maan as per yash
but will wait for the past to open

plz update next part soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
awesome update...
Egrly waitin fr maaneet stry to start
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49

intersting one dear

m very curious to know d past of his parents

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Posted: 13 years ago
#50
nyc update
so saddy i feel lyk crying even widout knowing whole past

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