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anky_s

@anky_s

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hello guys...

I am a new user of IF. I have read some FFs here & I must say that they have been written beautifully. The writers here really have great potential & I would congratz them for their talent. Though am not very good in writing but these FFs 7 writers have encouraged me to write something.Ofcourse, I know I may not be as good as them but I am just giving it a try (basically for self satisfaction😉)

Mostly I have read FFs based on the show Geet orpreciselyof Maan-Geet as they are my favorite.

So, I thought why not I start with them only.

Well, guys before I start writing I want to know ur views abt it.I am giving a brief info abt my concept.First of all wud like to tell that my concept is not based on Geet unlike other toics.Though I have picked some characters from the show but it has total different concept.I have changed the characters as well as faces as per my idea.U all might feel its a larger than life types but that's the advantage of FF, isn't it ? So, I have introduced some new faces & characters in story.Its not abt a TV show, so don't think how this actor or actress is playing role here.Its my story & i have chose people as per the need.

Guys here am giving u a brief & character sketch of my FF.Plz go thru it & lemme know if I shud continue wid it.

Gurmeet Chaudhary as Maan Singh Khurana

Drashti Dhami as Geet Handa

Sushma Seth as Chandrika Singh Khurana a.k.a Dadima

Ayushmaann Khurrana as Jai Singh Khurana (Maan's younger brother)

Kanwaljit Singh as Mohinder Handa (Geet's father)

Rantna Pathak as Rano Handa (Geet's mom)

Parineeti Chopra as Shagun Handa(Geet's sis)

Bani J as Bani Rathore(Geet's best friend)

Rajeev Khandelwal as Capt. Rajeev Sharma

There are more characters which will be introduced as story proceeds.So, guys lemme know ur views over this.

The story revolves around two families Khuranas & Handas based in Mumbai.

Khuranas:

Chandrika Devi is oldest person in Khurana family.She has two grandsons & a grand daughter.Her son & daughter-in-law passed away years ago & she herself has raised her grand children simultaneously handling the business started by her husband & maintained by son for sometime.Even though she is old yet she is a woman of 21st century, elegant, sophisticated & modern.

Maanis her eldest grandson.A 25yrs. oldruthless, arrogant, short tempered businessman.He loves his family to death & can do anything for them except one thing i.e. marriage.He has taken over all business responsibilities fron his Dadi so she can now relax.He is the MD of Khurana Constructions & Industries.He has made it India's top most firm in business.He has a strong feeling of dislike & mistrust for women due to his past.Please note that Maan has never been in any relationship nor had any GF so don't think he dislike women coz of that.He hates women since he was 12.The reason wud be disclosed as story will move.Though he is kinda anti women still he has no problem with his brother being in a relationship.

Jai (23yrs.)his younger brother has done MBA & now helping his bro in business. He is in a relationship with Banihis childhood love. He respects his brother a lot & considers him as a father.

Handas:

Mohinder Handa is India's most successful lawyer.Alongwith law practice he handles his family business set up his late father.He is married to Rano, a social activist.Has two daughters: Geet & Shagun.

Geet(22yrs) studying law, has done CS & also a distant learning course in PR.She is a brilliant student.She is modern yet traditional.Very bubbly, vivacious, charming, naive, clumsy gal.She's darling of her dad.

Shagun, twin sis of Geet is studying in Germany.She & Geet are best buddies,partners in every crime in childhood.

Bani,belongs to a royal family of Jaipur, daughter of Prithvi Singh Rathore. Her family has shifted to Mumbai years back. She is Geet's best friend & studies with her in same college. She has yet not told Geet abt Jai.

Rajeevis the son of Rano's best friend who passed when he was 6yrs old in a plane crash.Ever since then Handa family has taken care of him as their own son.All love him very much.He is 3yrs older than Geet & Shagun but has been their best buddy.He has joined army, so now gets less time with family.Very protective abt Handa family.

Guys this the completesummaryhere though I have skipped some imp. characters coz they need to be behind curtains till story proceeds.Ur valueable views are most welcomed.

Thanks

Anky

Thanks for waiting but I see I haven't got a good response but still am posting the very first part of my most ambitious FF hoping I might get atleast an average response from the readers & my friends coz only ur response is 1 thing which will encourage me to write more.

INDEX

Part #1:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2821693

Part #2:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2821693?pn=2

Part #3:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2821693?pn=6

Part #4:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2821693?pn=9

Part #5:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2821693?pn=11&#56150202

Part #6:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/56470637&#56470637

Part # 7:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/56938367&#56938367

Part # 8:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/58260786&#58260786

Part # 9:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/59658454&#59658454

Part # 10: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/61284861&#61284861

Part # 11:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/61688007&#61688007

Part # 12:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2821693?pn=31&#62278936

Part #13:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/62667394&#62667394

Part 14 :https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2821693?pn=47&#64543749

Part # 15:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/65811128&#65811128

IMP. NOTE : Page 67

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/66697430&#66697430

Part # 16:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2821693?pn=67&#66796037

Part # 17:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/67514120&#67514120

Part # 18:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/68778217&#68778217

Part # 19:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2821693?pn=99&#90859159

Part # 20:

Okay, now before starting our story lets see where our characters live, I mean their abode/ house.

KHURRANA MANSION : KM

HANDA PALACIO : HP

HP- Anterior View

Okay here it goes...Lights, start sound, roll camera, shot one take one & action...

 ~LoveWill Find A Way ~

Love changes people in the most unbelievable way. Two individuals,Geet &Maan, who are as different as chalk & cheese, comes together in this powerful & heart warming Love Saga.

 Part 1:

Khurrana Mansion, Mumbai:

It was 11pm. The darkness of the no moon nite has engulfed everything in its embrace. Though Mumbai is a city which never sleeps but somehow tonite it is quite much silent than usual. The outskirts of city were deserted. The Khurrana Mansion was no exception. It was pitch dark in KM and every member of KM has now retired to their rooms.Each member in KM was sleeping peacefully coz there is 1 member who has sacrificed his sleep so his family can have peaceful nites. The whole mansion was dark with no sign of light except 1 place from where a little light was emitting behind the closed doors. It was his study.

imagine this as his study & its nite outside the window.

Yes, he was in his study after making sure that his brother & Dadi are sound asleep.His Dadi hates him being working till late nite, so he has sneaked out of his room after Dadi was asleep.He don't want to hurt her in anyway but then he has to be in study for some real important reason.

He was flipping the pages of a file which has some info about some people.He was reading each word very carefully so he won't miss anything here.He was not happy with the info he has got.He wanted morecategorical links & info to persue his long awaited task.He frustatedly closed the file & threw it on the table in front.He fished his cell & punched few keys & waited for other person to pick up.The person picked after 3-4 rings.

Person: hello

Maan: Its Maan Khurrana..

Person: yes sir, how come u called at this hr. ?

Maan (in angry tone):The info u have given is not complete.The threads are loose.I have given u enuf time & money & then too u haven't got proper info, why ?

Person (scared at his tone & stammers): uhh...sss...sir..wohhh...uhh..am sorry sir. But its been a long time & ppl doesn't know much abt them.I am trying my best sir & I might have to travel out to gather more info as they moved out from Mumbai long back & as per my info they hadn't been at 1 place for long.This is the reason it is taking time.but trust me sir I shall get whole info soon.

Maan (calmed himself hearing the man's scared voice): Look, time is 1 thing which I can't give u, but since ur efforts seems sincere I am giving 1 last chance & if u fail this time then don't turn up & show me ur face. 1 more thing, come to me only when u get something meaningful & big.Understand ?? You better understand.

Person (still stammering): uhh...yyyess sss...sir! This time I will get u wot u want as am quite close to it.I won't give u another chance to complain.I promise.

Maan(bit relaxed): hmm...I'l be waiting & u better keep ur words.

With that Maan hung up the phone.He threw his cell on table in irritation & got up from the chair. He brushed his hand in his hair & tried to calm himself down.But all in vain & he banged his hand on the table making loud noise.
damn it...

He realized he has made a quite audible noise & any1 might have heard it.He pour some water into a glass & just drank it 1 go thinking it might cool down his temper.Feeling a bit relaxed he walked towards the window of study & stared outside in the darkness of nite in thehorizon.He stared & stared & stared, himself not knowing for how long.Nothing going in his mind.It was as blank as the darkness of nite.He was thinking nothing & just staring.Lost in the trance of his own his slowly slid the glass of window to open it a little.The cold breeze which was blowing outside now cam in contact with him, soothing him.After a while he came back to his senses & realized the track of time.Its mid nite now.He again looked outside but this time his mind was thinking something.


Maan(self thought):Darn it! I failed again. Maan Singh Khurrana failed again.The life has once again failed me.but no I won't give up on it till I breathe my last.That's only purpose of my life.I shall find out everything about it at any cost.I will pull all the forces to trace out this whole thing.Yes, I will find out no matter wot, no matter how.Maan Singh Khurrana can never fail.I can't let my words fail.I have to find out everything & have to bring it to its destiny.I have worked for it for so many years.I can't let my hard work go in vain.I can't let sacrifices of others go in vain.If not for me then for those lives I have win this battle.But I can't let Dadima know abt it.She won't approve of it.So, I have to keep it under wraps.

After convicing himself Maan felt a bit relaxed but still his heart wasn't at peace.Well, it hasn't been at peace for past many years & that's why he has never been able to have a peaceful sleep at nites & so he hate the nites.Atleast, in days he can merge himself in his work but at nite he has to drag himself to bed & have to toss restlessly over bed fighting wid his eyelids to get close to have some peaceful sleep.But that's the last thing on earth which he thinks wud ever happen to him.By now he is sure that he can never have a peace of heart & can never sleep peacefully in his whole life.Well, least did he know is that his much awaited peace is sleeping peacefully, wandering in the dreamland of her own in the same city only a few miles away from him.The life has its own plan for him which presently he's unaware & probably its right this way.As everything happens when it is destined to happen & when it is least expected.
As they says:

"Waqt se pehle aur kismat se zyada kabhi kisiko kuch nahi milta aur waqt aane par he sab milta hai...!"

Shrugging off every single thought Maan made his way towards his room to have some sleep as tomorrow was a long day & he has to be at his best for the coming challenges.With that he lied on his bed closed his eyes.The moment he closed his eyes he again saw those eyes filled with happiness & freshness.He smiled wid his closed eyes.Those eyes have always soothed his heart since childhood yet he don't to whom those beautiful eyes belong.He has never met the owner of those eyes then how come he knows them & how they bring some peace to him, soothe him.These are the questions which have been unanswered for long & he has now give up on them thinking atleast there is 1 thing which gets him a bit peace.He again smiled & slowly drifted to sleep.

So, friends this was the very 1st part of this FF.I hope u all liked it & if u liked then plz don't forget to hit Like & if u wanna give any suggestion then plz go ahead.And, if u wanna criticize then I am open to accept.So, plz be responsive & kind to ur friend.😊

Love u all

Anky.

Edited by anky_s - 9 years ago