FF - Shattered Dreams Link 2 Thread 2 updated - Page 42

Originally posted by: hirushinz

This is by far one of my most favourite FFs ever!! You have a beautiful way with words 👏👏👏

I read the whole FF in one go yesterday and I must say a more emotionally heart breaking FF I have never read. You seem to draw out the most rawest of forms of feelings in these two charcters and only a very few writers have been able to potray so much depth like this into their charcters.

 

kudos! the last few charpters were especially gut wrenching. I felt emotionally stired the whole day after I read them.

And I love the heartbreaking sadness mixed with this FF; just what my mind is yearning for when we are on a dry spell in the real show with regards to intense scenes.

 

Ioved how you wrote the last love making scene with a strangely awry Kushi. I thought the emotions desplayed with her character in that scene was amazing.

 

 the last chapter was fabulouse. well writen and well executed. Her story made me tear up too.

 

Again well done! you have created a wonderful work of fiction!

Originally posted by: minimuffin86

okay...*takes deep calming breath*

just finished reading the entire lot and im am impressed! an intense emotional ride with flashes of humour and wit but still keeping the darkness very much alive, so you can feel it hovering around. extremely gripping and intriguing! i cant wait to read more!

p.s. the sexual tension and the act itself was to die for!