MYFIRSTOS/ff Abhiya repentence part 5 updated pg33 - Page 27

loved the way they were all over each other😍😍

Jazz I loved it...romantic scenes are too good... superb update 😳

Nice update! I loved that scene where Abhay was looking at the shooting star and wished that Piya would always remain happy and Piya wished the same for Abhay! 😳 Looking forward to the next update! Continue soon 😊
Edited by Deepi20 - 12 years ago

Super job Jazz...

Originally posted by: janu1610

Jazz   amazing part yaar . don't under estimate urself . that telepathy conversation was very nice . And when Abhay intrude in her dreams that was cute gesture . how some one can love some one this much . But again they can...
romance of Chaand nd Haseena . Gosh girl are u in ur senses .Abhi b dil nahi bhara inka!!!!😆
very cute part . loved it ...
for Abhay n piya...
is bejaan dil ki awaz ho tum
meri saanson ka taranna ho
mere humraz ho tum..
nazar dhoondti hai har pal tumko
mere dil mein chhupe ehsaas ho tum...

love
ritu

ritu...thanksa lot for liking it...actually weather made me underestimate myself..but now ok Edited by lakshyasss - 12 years ago

is awesome dear 

thanks for the pm...😃

Awesum part. .jazz
loved it
awww. . Abhiya scene was supert hot , passionate & dreamy. .
Birdie kha kha kar phat jaye gi. .
Misha ke dimagh mei itne questions. .lagta hai pia ki jaga leli hai !
Chandeena romance was superb & ek dum hatke. .
Jazz! I want a full tu marriage & honeymoon of abhiya. .hehe
thanks 4 d pm
continue soon
tc

Originally posted by: strawberryrashu

Jazz yaha bhi last pe comedy lines lol awsum update abhi itna romance kya honeymoon me hamari neend udane ka irada hai thanks for pm

😉neend to uraan ke hii rahoongii😉update aaj karoongii

Originally posted by: sunflower52

I loved the update. Please do continue. Abhiya were so cute.

😉abhiya are abhiya😛