MYFIRSTOS/ff Abhiya repentence part 5 updated pg33 - Page 26

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beautiful update kiara👏abhaypia convo at the beginning ws too emotional. abhiya in the balcony and wishng fr eachother ws so cute...and chay brushing pia's photo wth his face and telling tht he cnt live wthout pia fr a moment nw...i just love this word of abhay's...its so romantic😳and chay realisng pias dream and thinkng of fulfilling them ...aww i so love ts part...and u wrote it so well...abhaypia be love making scene ws very passionate..the chandeena convo ws great too..bravo dear👏offcourse u shud continue dear..and update soon wth chiya' abhiya's marrige. tc. love u..😳and thx fr the pm jazz. oopps sorry i wrote kiara by mistake..gussa mat hona yaar pullzz..actualy i m replyng frm cell so i ws unable to delete tht name...!sory once again fadear r.Edited by lost_in_love - 12 years ago

awesome update
i like you post

awesome update
loved it
waiting for Abhiya's marriage
continue soon

its fantastic jazz... abhay pia r so overwelming... i loved dere romance... cont soon n thanks 4 d pm...

ausum and fab update jazz...abhay and pia...😍...too good romance...yeh bhi koi puchne ki baat hai...ofcourse marry abhiya and update asap...m eagerly waiting for next update..especially dobriyal sis confession and confrontation...lovely update...thanks for pm...

wow. . . Super . . Really love you ya. . Jitna actual serial nahi de saktha itna hume yahan miltha hey loved it. . Really thanx for that. . And please update it soon.. . And pm me

wow jazz u call this update bad.Ar u nuts?😡.Wow superb update I so luved it yaar.Abhiya romance,chandeena romance & misha mocking at panchi all was fun 2 read.Plzz do continue😳

jaaz continue soon ya make their marriage nd honeymoon happenning 😉... awesome part yaa do update 2moro... do it or 😈

thnx for d pm dr