A Bird In The Cage #2 last part pg 20

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hi guys this is my new thread for bird os actually i didnt plan of new thread i dont even want to start it par aapke response ki itni baarish ho rahi hain ki mujhe majburan naya shuru karna pada anyways thanks a lot for all your support till today if you have not commented so much i might have not started new thread when i started this os i never expected i will start a new thread but you people made it possible it has more four parts hope you like the last four parts

 

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congrats for the new part sweety...
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part 21

 

In the weekend mayank takes nupur to their farm house she gets fresh and comes out she was looking beautiful in wet hair he holds her from waist brings her closer removes hair on her face touching her skin which makes her shiver he catches her chin brings her closer and kisses her lips)

M-nupur tumhare liye kuch hain

N-yeh kya hain

M-main tumhein is dress main dekhna chahta hoon tum pehnogi kya

(she takes it ands wears it ,it was a knee length dress she was looking very hot he was lost looking at her he plays music both have a small  dance later both lay on bed hugging each other)

N-tum mujhe yehaan kyun lekar aaye

M-aise hi har baat ka reason nahin hota main bas tumhare saath thoda waqt gujarna chahta tha isiliye lekar aaya kyun acha nahin laga

N-acha hain

M-waise dress kaisa hain

N-bahut chota hain

(he smiles and gets her closer she rests head over him and closes her eyes)

 

Marriage preperations started so everyone were busy in those preparations.

M-good morning

(in sleep he was searching for nupur on bed she was not there)

M-itni subah subah kahaan chali gayi

(he goes out she was busy with marriage works)

M-is shaadhi ke chakkar main nupur ke paas mere liye time nahin hain

Later she comes with coffee to room mayank was getting ready

M-badi jaldi yaad aagayi aaj kal tumhein meri koi value nahin hain jab dekho shaadhi ke kaam tum pehle hi teek thi meri har baat sunti thi par aaj kal meri kam baaki logo ki baat jyada sunti ho

(she makes a small child face)

M-kuch bhi badal sakta hain yeh nahin choti si baat pe rona shuru (he brings her closer and kisses her forehead) I am sorry dekho kaan bhi pakad liya ab toh please

(she smiles)

M-yeh teek hain (he was holding her from waist ) waise main soch raha tha kyun na aaj dono baahar chale

N-lekin shaadhi ke kaam hain na

M-tum aise baato se hi mujhe gussa dilate ho aur phir roti ho tumharethodi der naa rehne se shaadhi nahin rukhegi chup chap chalo

N-lekin mayank

M-tum meri baat nahin sunogi

N-sunungi

M-phir chup chap chalo

(she nods saying yes)

M-that's like my nupur ok main 5'o clock tumhein pick karne aaonga ready rehna

(she nods yes he kisses her cheek )

In the evening he comes to pick her but she was busy with marriage preparations he tries to talk to her but doesn't get the chance as she was surrounded with people after late night she goes to her room

M-tumse maine kya kahaan tha dono baahar chalenge par tum tumhein toh meri baat ki koi value nahin hain

N-par mayank woh maine jaanbuz kar nahin kiya main kaam kar rahi thi

M-main yehaan khali baita hun main tumhare saath baahar jaane ke liye saare kaam chod kar aaya tha aur tum

N-i am sorry please naaraz mat ho

(she has tears in her eyes)

M-nupur tum bhi na choti bachi ki tarah behave karti ho aise har baat pe koi rota hain kya main tumhein darane ki koshish karta hoon par tum apne aasoon se ulta mujhe darathi ho ab rona band karo warna mujhe rona padega

(he wipes her tears and finds she was having fever)

M-tumhein toh bukaar hain ab chup chap aaraam karo

(he gives her tablet and makes her sleep suddenly someone knocks the door)

He opens the door and finds a girl

Girl-woh didi ko neeche bula rahe hain

M-(in rude tone)didi so gayi ab nahin aayegi

(she leaves he locks the door)

N-tumne usse jooth kyun kahaan

M-nahin toh kya kahoon haalat dekhi hain khud ki ek toh tez bukaar hain is waqt neeche jaogi toh chakkar aake gir jaogi chup chap so jao

(she hugs him and sleeps)

 

In the morning she opens her eyes and finds herself still in his arms

She looks at him and smiles

He opens his eyes

M-goodmorning aise kya dekh rahi ho

N-kuch nahin

M-tumhari tabiyet kaise hain

N-ab teek hain

at the breakfast table

Shilpa-kal raat itni jaldi so gayi beta main toh sab ke liye sarees select kar rahi thi tu nahin aayi isiliye tereliye sarees nahin select kiya

(mayank feels this is the right way to take her out)

M-mom aap tension kyun leti hain main sham ko nupur ko apne saath lejaa kar uski shopping karwaonga

Shilpa-kyun tu apna time waste karega main us shop waale ko phir se bulalongi

M-ismain koi problem nahin hain main lejaonga na

Shilpa-tik hain jaise teri marzi

In the evening he takes her to shopping she wears a beautiful yellow saree

M-nupur jaldi se tumhein jo chahe select karo humein aur bhikaam hain

N-kya kaam

(he keeps finger on her lips and asks her to select the sarees)

 

N-saara shopping ho gaya ghar chale

M-ghar nahin kahin aur chalenge

N-kahaan

(he takes her to beach)

N-yehaan par sab ghar main hamara wait karenge

M-tum kyun tension leti ho main manage karloonga bas tum yeh batao tumhein yehaa rehna hain ya ghar jaana hain

N-mujhe yehaan acha lagta hain par

M-par var kuch nahin main hoon na sab sambhal loonga

(she hugs him)

(they enjoy the whole evening )

 

Dil deewana bin sajna ke

Maane na

Dil deewana bin sajna ke

Maane na

Ye pagla hai samjhaane se

Samjhe na

Ye pagla hai samjhaane se

Samjhe na

Dhak dhak bole it ut dole

Din raina

Ye pagla hai samjhaane se

Samjhe na

Ye pagla hai samjhaane se

Samjhe na

 

Duniya maange apni muraadein main to maangoon saajan

Duniya maange apni muraadein main to maangoon saajan

Rahe salaamat mera sajna aur sajna ka aangan

Iske siva dil rab se kuchh bhi chaahe na

Ye pagla hai samjhaane se

Samjhe na

Ye pagla hai samjhaane se

Samjhe na

 

Jee ye chaahe banake aanchal tumko lapetoon tan pe

Jee ye chaahe banake aanchal tumko lapetoon tan pe

Kabhi ye sochoon main ud jaoon tumko liye gagan pe

Aur bhi kuchh hain dil ke iraade kya kehna

Ye pagla hai samjhaane se

Samjhe na

Ye pagla hai samjhaane se

Samjhe na

 

Dil deewana bin sajna ke

Maane na

Ye pagla hai samjhaane se

Samjhe na .

At night in beech nupur kept head over him and closes her eyes he keeps hand around her. Both sit like  that in sand for sometime mayanks cell rings

M-hello mom woh gaadi kharab ho gayi isiliye late hua hum aarahe hain

Shilpa-mujhe ache se pata hain tu kahaan hain isiliye jooth mat bol

M-mom sorry woh

Shilpa-sorry bolne ki koi zaroorat nahin ab enjoy karoge toh kab karoge bas jaldi nupur ko lekar ghar aaja raat bahut ho gayi

M-ok mom

In home mayur don't have dinner  they just go to their room he comes from washroom and  finds her sleeping sitting on bed he looks at her and smiles he makes her sleep properly her hair was falling on her face which was distubing her he removes those hair and kisses her forehead which removes frown on her face . he sleeps beside her in sleep she catches his hand and keeps head over it he smiles and kisses her cheek

M-i love you

a smile appears on her face which widens his smile he hugs her whole night he was staring at her playing with her hairs. In the morning she opens her eyes and finds him very close to her his face was very close to hers she was busily looking at him he opens his eyes he gets more closer and kisses her lips

later she hugs him rests her head over him

N-tum hamesha mere paas rahoge na

M-achanak yeh doubt kyun aaya main tumhein kabhi chod ke nahin jaonga

(she was already in his arms he hugs her more tighter)

S-gunjan aaj toh tumhein mere saath baahar jaana hihoga

G-main nahin aa sakti mujhe kaam hain

S-tumhein kaam important hain yaa main

G- in full nautanki) mujhe na mujhe na(changes the tone) kaam hi important hain

S-teek hain tum kaam karo main sheena ko date pe lejaonga

G-hamari shadhi honewaali hain aur ab bhi tum you are disgusting

S-main bhi wohi keh raha hun hamari shadhi hone waali hain isiliye humein ek dusre ke saath time spend karna chahiye

G-par sam kaam

S-ek din kaaam nahin karogi toh koi earthquake nahin aayega please meri maa maan jao

G-acha teek hain

S-tum meri fiance hi hona

G-tumne yeh question kyun poocha

S-kuch nahin ek date ke liye itna bav ka rahi ho

In the evening sajan go on date

He takes her to their guest house which was fully decorated with flowers in the lawn in the background her favourite music was being played the place was very peaceful noone were present he asks her for dance he holds her from waist brings her closer she was lost in his eyes which were filled with nothing more than love he suddenly gets closer and kisses her lips

After sometime both sit near swimming pool with legs in the pool she rested head over him and he kept his hand around her shoulder and brought her closer both were silent for sometime

G-sam main tumse kuch poocho

S-hmm

G-tumne mujhse pehle kitne ladkiyon ko kiss kiya

(which changes his mood)

S-tum kehna kya chahti ho

G-tum itne saare dates pe gaye the na to kabhi kisi ladki ko kiss kiya

S-hum yehaan ek dusre ke saath time spend karne aaye hain aur tum kyun acha kaasa mood kharab kar rahi ho jo beet gaya so beet gaya un baaton ko kured ke kya faida

G-tumhare liye woh sab baatein beeti hui hogi lekin mujhe yeh sab jaanna zaroori hain

(he cups her face)

S-tumhein na ladne ke alawa kuch nahin aata pata nahin mera kya hoga woh sab puraani baatein hain mere life main unki koi jagah nahin hain tum meri aaj ho aur yeh mere liye sabse important hain mujhe ache se pata hain tumhein woh baatein pasand nahin hain phir tum kyun khud ko aur mujhe unbaaton ko dil main rakhke hurt kar rahi ho main un sab cheezo ki wajah se tumhein khona nahin chahta isiliye please un sab baaton ko bula do mere liye

(she hugs him)

G-try karoongi

(he smiles)

Benia also go on date. Benji arranges a date in a hotel . There were some violonists who play music and both dance

D-benji tum itna kyun tense ho rahe ho

B-pehli date hain na isiliye thoda darr lag raha hain

D-actually yeh mujhe kehna tha tumhein nahin

B-oh sorry waise tumhein sab pasand aaya

D-bahut acha hain aur tumhein itna tension lene ki zaroorat nahin hain main yehaan tumhare saath time spend karne aayi hun baaki sab mujhe koi maanya nahin rakhta

B-dats so sweet of you dia mujhe kitna darr lag raha tha kitumhein yeh sab acha lagega ya nahin anyways thanks

D-thanks kisliye

B-mere saath date pe aane ke liye

D-tum itna formal kyun ho rahe ho main tumhari fiance hoon

B-phir bhi tum mana kar sakti thi

D-benji kya hum normally baat nahin kar sakte hamari shaadi hone waali hain aur ab bhi tum koi naye rishtedaar kitarah baat kar rahe ho

B-ok sorry

D-ab kuch order kare bahut bhuk lag rahi hain

B-ya sure

(they enjoy their dinner and while leaving he stops the car)

D-don't say phir gaadi ruk gayi pata nahin hum jab bhi saath rehte hain yeh gaadi kyun ruk jaati hain

B-gaadi nahin ruki maine hi rokha hain ghar tak paidal chale agar tumhein koi probllem nahin hain toh

(both start walking suddenly he catches her hand both hold each others hand tightly she places head over him and walks)

Edited by --unknown-- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wondeful update... :)

& congrats for #2 thread, very deserving ...! Edited by .SilentPrincess - 12 years ago
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very sweet part...
nice update...
 
congrats on the new thread...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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congrats for ur 2nd thread.
d updt was awesome.
love mayur.
they r made for each other.
love therir beach scene.
continue soon.
thanks for thepm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesum update👏loved mayurscene.benia and sajan were so cute😊 congrats for the new thread

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Congrats 4 new thread.
Lovly part.
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Awww so sweet update
mayur r really very cute and adorable
loved them a lot
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lovely update
luved mayur part