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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -SupriyaluvsMN-

part 15 n 16
awesum updates dear!
felt bad 4 nups... bt.. finally she realisd her luv 4 mayu...😳
omg.. karwachaut...šŸ˜
cant wait 4 d next update
continue soon!
thnx 4 d pms!šŸ¤—

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mayurlove

AWSOM update and thanks for pm😊.Eagerly waiting for next one.Hope we will have some romantic mayur momentsšŸ˜

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: tukun2009

awesum updatešŸ‘šŸ˜Š pls continue soon.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
here is my next part surely main maroongi
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Posted: 14 years ago

part 17

Shilpa-hello mayu kahaan hain tu ab tak nahin aaya

M-mom meri flight abhi land hua hain abhi thode der main aaraha hun

Shilpa-jaldi aajaa nupur tera intezaar kar rahi hain agar tujhe late hua toh use bhuka rehna padega

M-maine bhi kuch nahin kaaya hain mera bhi wohi haal hain par kya karun yeh rasta nahin kat raha

Shilpa-tune bhi vrat rakha hain nupur ke liye kabhi mere liye toh aise nahin kiya nupur ke liye

M-mom please chidaana band kijiye

S-mom nahin karegi main karoonga

M-sam tu tu mujhe chidayega

S-haan chidaunga waise bhabhi aapke intezaar main bekaraar hain

M-sab kuch teri wajah se teri girlfriend ko teri mangetar banana ke liye mujhe meri biwi ko chodna pada

S-maine nahin kahaan tha aapko jaane ke liye aap hi jaana chahte the bhabhi ko sataane ke liye

M-tujhe kaise pata

S-pata chal jaata hain

M-nupur ne kaha kya iske muh main koi baat nahin tikti

S-bewajah bhabhi ko kyun dosh de rahe hain usdin aapne hi toh kahaan tha aap bhabhi ko apne saath nahin lejaana chahte tabhi main samaj gaya waise aapka plan kaafi had tak successful hain

M-hona toh padega aakhir mayank sharma ki planning hain

S-waise jaldi aajaiye warna bhabhi ka pata nahin kya hoga

M-tujhe main aane ke baad dekhloonga

S-jaldi aana bye

M(to himself)- I think mujhe nupur ko surprise gift deni chahiye roses leke jaata hun pucca khush ho jayegi hope is baar bhi I love you ka matlab nahin pooche(he smiles for himself)

G-main kaise lag rahi hun

S-hot

G-koi sundar kehta hain hot nahin tumhein ache se baat karna bhi nahin aata

S-main tumhein nahin us ladki ko keh raha hun she is very hot

G-tumhein toh (she starts beating he catches her hand and brings her closer)

G-sam yeh kya kar rahe ho sab ke saamne

S-koi problem nahin hain tum meri fianc ho

G-toh chodo warna

S-nahin chodunga

G-mom

(he turns back she runs )

S-tumhein main baad main dekhloonga

G-try karna bye

Nupur was waiting eagerly for mayank to say him her feelings but he doesn't come. All of them were waiting for mayank

S-bhai ne kahaan tha airport se nikhal chuke hain 3 gante hue ab tak nahin aaye aur phone bhi nahin uta rahe

Shilpa-ek baar phir try kar

S-hello bhai

(he drops the phone from his hand benji takes it)

B-what

Shilpa 'kya hua samrat mayank kahaan hain

(he becomes stone tears come from his eyes)

Shilpa-sab teek toh hain na tu ro kyun raha hain

B-mom woh bhai ka accident hua(he was having tears in his eyes)

(listening to that everyone is shocked nupur felt like her heart stopped beating)

They leave to hospital

Sanjay-doctor ab woh kaisa hain

Doc-aap kaun hain

Sanjay-main uska father hun

Doc-unki situation bahut critical hain abhi kuch kahaan nahin jaa sakta

Shilpa was crying badly sanjay hugs her

Shilpa- yeh sab kuch achanak kaise hua usne todhi der pehle hi baat ki

Sanjay-use kuch nahin hoga woh teek ho jayege

(he tries to console her )

Benji was also having tears but more than him sam was broken he was not talking not even rying just looking at mayank from glasses

(benji puts hand on sam's shoulder)

S-bhai woh (he hugs him and cries)

B-sam rona band kar bhai teek ho jayenge hum sab hain na yehaan

S-main bhai ko aise nahin dekh sakta hamesha mujhe satate hi ache lagte hain

Gunjan was also crying badly dia was consoling her

D-gunjan rona band kar woh teek ho jayega use kuch nahin hoga

G-di mayank ko kuch hogaya toh

S-bhai ko kuch nahin hoga woh aise humein chod ke nahin jaa sakte

No one noticed nupur but the person who was suffering the hell was she she just felt like dying she just stood there like a wall

G-nupur tu t eek toh hain na]

N-gunjan mujhe mayank se milna hain usse baat karni hain woh mere saath aisa nahin kar sakta mujhe andar jaana hain

G-nupur tum andar nahin jaa sakti

N-par kyun nahin jaa sakti mujhe andar jaana hain

G-nupur samajne ki koshish kar

N-mujhe kuch nahin samajna mujhe mayank se milna hain

(just then doctor calls them inside)

Mayank was suffering a lot his whole body was covered with bandages even his face was covered with bandages doctor was trying to save him but his situation was critical

Doc-sorry we cant save him

S-aap aise kaise keh sakte hain mere bhai ko kuch nahin ho sakta

Doc-hum aapka pain samaj sakte hain par hum kuch nahin kar sakte

Nupur goes near him

N-mayank uto tum mujhe chod ke nahin jaa sakte tumne hamesha mere saath rehne ka promise kiya tha na phir achanak aise kaise chod diya tum apni promise nahin tod sakte mere mom dad ne bhi mujhe akela chod diya ab tumne bhi meri kya galti hain tum sab mujhe chod ka raise kyun jaa rahe ho main bhi tumhare paas aajaongi (she fall on him and was crying badly)

ab sab mujhe maar daalenge main jaa rahi hun

part18

Edited by --unknown-- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
omg.. accident... I can't believe Mayank ka accident hogaya. I thought from now onwards the story will take a happy turn...par yahan toh Nupur ko aur uljhano ka samna karna par raha hain...
Nice update cont. soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
oye hello...yeh kya tha...BY GOD...sach mein nahi chodongi tujhe...
next update jaldi karna...
wanna know what happens next...please happy ending chahiye...
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Posted: 14 years ago
oye, ye kya hai ??? huh😔
i dnt like it.
i cnt imagine mayanks accident..
so, just made everything ok on next update.
its better for u.
warna😈
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey olzzz...mayank ko thik kar do ...
update soon...

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