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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: SujaLuvsMayur

nice update.

love mayur convo.
poor nupur...wo meaning puch rahi thi aur mayak ko laga k wo leg pull kar raha hai!
so, now gang going to delhi to search nupur.
they are really cool.
nice bonding of this gang.
waiting for update.
continue soon.
thanks for thepm.

woh kya cheez hain bahut jald pata chalega
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: preety88

Awesome update...cont soon

thanks dear
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thankyou
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thank you dear
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Originally posted by: -Faria-

Wow its really very interesting story
totally different 👏👏
i loved it dear
and u now what- i m quite afraid of nupur
i hope she is fine-- btw Nupur insaan hain na?? koi voot - foot tou nehi hain na????
plz update next part asap
i m eagerly waiitng for next part

yeh ek normal kahaani hain with most beautiful relationships which are not possible in real life
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ok guys bahut bahut shukriya mujhe itna inspire karne ke liye ab story thodi filmy hogi par uske baad jo hoga woh aaj tak aapne kahin padi hogi nahin suna hoga Nupur is just a normal girl she is not at all abnormal but her problem is what you will get to know soon aaj mera update aapko hila ke rakh dega but haan aisa relation kahin dekha nahin hoga is relation ko kya kehte hain mujhe toh nahin pata story sunne ke baad aap hi decide karna yeh ek mayur ya sajan ki love story nahin balki ek ladki ki kahaani hain jiska naam hain nupur maine rakha hain
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Part 4

(dia's ring falls from her finger)

D-meri gold ring

B-dia tum bhi na ab is jungle main use kaise dunde

M-yehi aas paas padi hogi ache se dundo

(they keep searching)

B-mil gaya

S-mujhe bhi mil gaya

G-mayank iska dimaag kharab ho gaya hain yeh jungle hain koi magic place nahin jo ek ke do ring milenge

S-main ring ki nahin ghar ki baat kar raha hoon woh dekho bunglow

G- mayank tum ise maar daloge ya main maar daloon woh normal logo ki rehne ki jagah nahin tumhare jaise abnormal logo ki jagah hain

M-shaanti main use baat karoonga(to sam)tumhari problem kya hain aate waqt tumhare dimaag ko chot toh nahin lagi

G-bachpan main lagi hogi isiliye aisa hain

S-tum apna muh band rakhoge bhai ho sakta hain woh ladki usi bunglow main rehti hogi

B-tu kehna kya chahta hain ki woh ladki nahin bhoot hain

G-mayank ka dimaag itna kharab ho gaya ki woh insaano ko chodkar bhoot se pyar karega

 M-gunjan

G-main nahin sam aiise soch raha hain

S-kamini tujhe toh aaj main nahin chodunga

M-use baad main dekhlena pehle main tumhein dekhloonga

S-bhai aap bhi usiki side le rahe hain ek toh main aapki help kar raha hoon

M-bahut bada help kar raha hain ek toh sunsan jagah lekar aaya upar se bhoot bunglow main ladki dundne ko keh raha hain ab chup chap chal yehaan se

(gunjan smiles)

B-mujhe aise places bahut pasand hain main dekh kar aata hun ki aakhir yeh bhoot bunglow hoti kaise hain

D-mayank tumhare dono brothers ko kuch ho gaya hain isiliye itne ajeeb behave kar rahe hain

M-mujhe bhi yehi lag raha hain

B-mujhe kuch nahin hua main bas dekhna chahta hoon ki bhoot bunglow main booth hote ya nahin

S-nahin honge

B-tujhe kaise pata

S-jab bhoot khula gum rahi hain toh bhoot bunglow ki kya zaroorat hain(looking at gunjan)

G-tumhein toh main

S-main bhi tumhare saath chalta hun is bhoot se wohi bhoot better hain

M-samrat (in anger) tune use phir se kuch kahaan toh teri pitaai hogi

S-acha sorry (he leaves with benji)

After sometime

D-mayank kya sach main wahaan bhoot hote hain kya

M-aisa kuch nahin hota yeh toh bas ek purana bunglow hain

D-mujhe dekhna hain ki kaisa hain

M-tum akele nahin jaana hum bhi tumhare saath chalte hain

G-main nahin chaloongi mujhe bahut darr lagta hain

M(he puts hand on her shoulder)-main hoon na tere saath darr kis baat ki

G-tum mere saath hi rahoge na

M-haan rahoonga kuch nahin hoga chalo

G-toh teek hain

(sam and benji tries to go inside a man shouts from somewhere)

Man-tum log yehaan kya kar rahe ho jao yehaan se

(they neglect)

The man stands in front of them

Man 'tum logo ko kahaana yeha se jaane ke liye samaj nahin aaraha kya

S-jaa rahe hain bas yeh batao yehaan kaun kaun rehta hain

Man-koi nahin rehta jao yeha se

B-bhai saab gussa kyun kar rahe hain jaa rahe hain chal sam

They leave

S-pata nahin kaisa sadu hain andar bhi nahin jaane diya par woh is bunglow ke andar kya kar raha hain

B-koi paagal hoga

on the way they meet mayank,gunjan and dia coming in their way

M-kya hua tum log wapas kyun aaye

S- kuch nahin wahaan koi gunjan se bhi bada paagal tha andar nahin jaane diya

G-tum

D-guys see there

(all turn and see a car stops in front of the bunglow)

The man who shouted at sam and benji and a girl in red dress enter into the car

S-isne toh kahaan yehaan koi nahin hain phir yeh ladki kaun hain

B-kahin yeh woh ladki toh nahin

M-oh shit (they run towards the car but by then the car leaves)shit we missed her

(they go inside to know about her they find an old man and a young lady tied inside they free them)

Man 'kaun ho tum log

M-hum us ladki ko dundte aaye hain

Man 'kahin tum mayank toh nahin

(all are shocked at that moment)

M-tumhein mera naam kaise pata

Man- main tumhein woh sab baad main bataonga pehle tum mere saath chalo mujhe tum logo ki madat chahiye us ladki ko bachane main

M-kya hua us ladki ko

Man-uski shaadi hone waali hain

All are shocked-kya

Man-haan humein kuch bhi karke shaadi rokhni hain warna us ladki ki zindagi barbaad ho jayegi

M-par kaise

Lady-kyunki use jo ladka shaadhi kar raha hain woh mera boyfriend hain usne mujhse pyar ka joota naatak kiya ab mujhe dokha dekar us ladki se shaadi kar raha hain

M-tum us ladki ko sab kuch sach sach bata sakte ho na

Man-koi faida nahin hain use in sab cheezo ki samaj nahin hain

M-par kyun

Man-main tumhein sab baad main bataonga pehle tum log mujhe wahaan le chalo

M-acha chaliye

(they take them in car )

 

The lady asks them to stop car at some house which is fully decorated with flowers and lights for marriage

Lady-yehi hain uska ghar humein kuch bhi karke is shaadhi ko rokhni hogi

S-hum kuch bhi tab karenge jab humein pata chalega ki yehaan ho kya raha hain agar us ladki ko shaadi nahin karni toh sab log uspar jabardasti kyun karenge

Man-woh ladki shaadi ke liye mana nahin karegi kyunki use shaadhi ka matlab bhi nahin pata

Lady-aur woh ladka jisse uski shaadhi hone waali hain woh bahut badtameez kisam ka ladka hain jisne mujhse pehle aur bhi ladkiyon ko dokha diya hain

B-hum tum dono par yakeen kaise karle ki tum log sach keh rahe ho

Lady-tum logo ko yakeen dilaane ka time nahin hain aur toh aur agar hum jooth keh rahe hain toh yeh boliye ki koi humein room main baand kar kyun rakhega

M-police ko bulayenge kaun galat hain wohi batayenge

(just then mayank receives a call)

M-ek minute main abhi aaya

(he goes aside to talk just then he hears someone talking)

Girl-tum mujhe dokha dekhar use shaadi kyun kar rahe ho

Boy-main use shaadhi sirf apne dad ki khushi ke liye kar raha hun ek baar shaadhi ho jaaye phir us ladki ko room main daal denge aur tum aur main saath main enjoy karenge

Girl-lekin

Boy-samja karo sweetheart tumhein mujh par barosa hain na

(she hugs him)

M-matlab woh log sach keh rahe the yeh log uski life ke saath khel rahe hain

(mayank reaches the gang)

M-indono ne jo kuch bhi kahaan sach hain humein kuch bhi karke us ladki ko bachana hain

(they call the police)

Inspector-tum log jaante bhi ho yeh kiska ghar hain he is a police commissioner

(all are shocked)

M-ho sakta hain ki woh police commissioner ho par uska beta ek dokhebaaz hain please sir we need your help yeh ek ladki ke life ka sawaal hain

Inspector-acha teek hain tum logo ki baat agar jooth nikli toh tumhein jail main daalna padega

M-we are ready for everything hum kisi ki life aise barbaad nahin kar sakte

They go inside girl is in the mandap her face is covered with goonghat. On the mandap

Commissioner-inspecter patil aap yehaan acha hua aap bhi aa gaye

Patil-main shaadi attend karne nahin kisi aur kaam se aaya hun in logo ne complaint kiya hain ki aap ke bte ne is ladki ko dokha dekhar us ladki se shaadi kar raha hain

Commissioner 'aap yeh kaise baatein kar rahe hain mera beta us ladki ko jaanta tak nahin

Lady-sir yeh jooth keh rahe hain

Dulha-yeh ladki paagal ho gayi hain main ise nahin jaanta

Commisioner 'aap shaadi main guest ki tarah aaye hain toh acha rahega agar inspector banker mere bte par ungli utai toh mujhe aapka senior official ki tarah action lena padega

Patil-I am sorry sir mujhe inki baat maan kar yeha tak nahin aana chahiye tha

S-sir aap yeh kya kar rahe hain ek inspector ho kar ek ladki ke saath nainsaafi hone deraahe hain

Patil-jab us shaadi karne waali ladki ko problem nahin hain toh main kuch nahin kar sakta

Old man-sir us ladki ko nahin pata uske saath kya ho raha hain aapke aage haat jodta hun us bachi ki zindagi bacha lijiye

In mayanks mind all the words he heard are going on

Main is ladki ko aise kua main doobne nahin de sakta mujhe kuch bhi karke ise bachana hain main iski zindagi barbaad hote hue nahin dekh sakta ek hi raasta bacha hain ise bachane ke liye

(he takes the mangalsutra and puts it in the girls neck leaving everyone in shock it was a complete silence after a sudden disaster what happened no one expected )

Commissioner-tumhari himmat kaise hui aise karne ki main tumhein nahin chodunaga tumse pehle ise nahin chodunga tumhein zinda isliye rakha tha ki tumhari shaadi meri bte se kar sakoon lekin ab jab tum mere bte ki nahin hui toh main tumhein zinda nahin rehne dunga(he shoots her )

After that the commissioner is in jail the girl is in hospital.

He is sitting on the hospital bench completely confused with what happened in the last few hours. His life was normal till the morning and now suddenly he is married that too a girl whom he hasn't seen till now .he doesn't know what will happen next. His parents are coming after knowing the whole story how will he face them, what answer should he give them. What about the girl how will she react will she accept him or not. Is she the girl with whom he talked a few days before or not. Many questions no answer.He looks from the icu glasses the girl is in pain surrounded with machines even she is unable to breathe properly which is making him more uncomfortable might be because she is his better half now or because he cant see anyone in pain. He was known for his perfection who never made a mistake in his life and now he is responsible for all these . He might have stopped that marriage in some other way but why he choosed only that way is it his faith or luck or what . Who is this girl who changed his life like this it would have been better that he married the girl my parents choosed but no he rejected her and married an unknown girl .Why was that girl living in the forest and why that man tried to kill her .who is she (he catches his head in frustation)

Mayank's parents come there . both of them are angry on him and sanjay gives him a tight slap

Sanjay-tujhe dia se shaadhi nahin karni thi maine kuch nahin kahaan par yeh kya kiya tune tumne kisi ladki ki zindagi barbaad kar diya tune shaadhi karne se pehle ek baar bhi kisi ke bare main nahin socha ki tu jo kar raha hain uski wajah se tere saath uski zindagi badal jaayegi

S-par dad isme bhai ki koi galti nahin hain situation hi aisa tha

Sanjay-samrat chup tu beech main nahin bolega mayank tum chup kyun ho main tumse kuch pooch raha hoon

What will he say when he himself doesn't know the answer

 

ab tumhare bahut questions hain jiska ek ek karke answer doongi par next part main

Ab mujh par gussa mat karo

Agar tum logo ka bas chala toh right now mera bahut bura haal hota aise time main story ko rokh diya

But sorry I will give you a good option guess the story behind the girl and how many will match my thoughts. Sabko pata hain ladki kaun hain usmein koi badi baat nahin hain woh chod kar kuch aur bolna hain toh bolo.Jaanti hun yeh story bahut filmy ho gayi but it was necessary for my story

Bye take care

part5  

Edited by --unknown-- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice...👏
waiting for the next part
continue soon
Thnx for pm
~jiya~
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome!👏 Lovely work...!👍🏼 Quiet Shocking update... 😲 
Continue Soon!! Thanks for the PM
 
~~Nivriti~~
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow - its awesome story dear
i really really loved this story-its very interesting
filhaal meri demag main kuch nehi chal rahe--- but i want to read it more
plz update asap... agar ho sake tou - aj he ek update de do...pilishhh
Edited by -Faria- - 12 years ago