Making Memories Of Us (MayUr) Last Part (23.6.10)

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Characters :

Mayank as Vivaan - A handsome young guy, his deep blue mysterious eyes , he is known for his anger all over in the university .... everyone is scared of him ... but no one knows that behind that anger is a golden heart ... hidden from everyone apart from her ....

Nupur as Nisha - A beautiful young girl, her sad chocolate eyes , the new entrant in the university with full of innocence and a very introvert kind of girl .... everyone bullied her but no one knew that behind this shy girl was hidden a strong will-powered girl who was not hidden from him ......

Another fresh year at Oracle University, the beautiful campus with a forest near by ... far away from the noise of the city ... engulfed in the peace of the nature .... where all the students live in a combined hostel ... a strict environment where mobiles etc. are prohibited and where going out of the campus is punished as if it's a sin ... As Nisha enters the premises she never wished to enter ... she grabs attention of everyone againt her will ... her life becomes one nightmare she never thought of seeing ... but his first sight makes it easier for her to stay for the rest of the time .... Vivaan an old student ... whose silence and anger are famous ... for whom every girl drools but her never gives them a first look because he hates the feeling of love ..... As they meet .... her heartbeats increase and his blood boils .... will her love and innocence be able to stand against his hatred and anger ......



Index:-

Introduction and Character Sketch - Page 1

Oracle - Page 2

Fear - Page 2

First Sight - Page 3

Beginning - Page 4

Feelings - Page 4

Drenched - Page 5

A Song -Page 5

Words - Page 7

Friends - Page 8

Turmoil - Page 9

Fire - Page 10

Virgin Intimacy - Page 11

Vague - Page 12

Flames - Page 14

Gaze - Page 19

Phoenix - Page 20

Zephyr - Page 23

Weakening - Page 25

Forlorn - Page 27

Splintering Barriers - Page 27

Confession - Page 33

Veracity - Page 36

A New Life - Page 41

Bolt From The Blue - Page 43

Scrutiny - Page 46

Eternity - Page 49

Soliloquy - Spirit Of Life : Page 50

Soliloquy - When The Sun Sets And The Nightfall Begins : Page 51


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Edited by sonam961986 - 13 years ago

interesting concept dear!

yaay...2nd to comment...awesome concept dear..but its juz a suggestin dear..pls make their names as mayank and nupur itself other than vivaan and nisha...bcoz its very diifficult to imagine them with other names....its juz a suggestion dear...avoid it if u dont like......

hi aswathy ..... the thing is tht their names signify something tht will come later in the story .... so sry ...

thanks favouriteofall and aswathy .... 😊

oh dear..i was not knowing it....so sorry 4 it  and pls update soon dear,,..................

lovley cs
soon update and pm me too

hello everyone .... okey i m going to post the first part today ... so before tht whoever wants pm for the updates plz like this post and send me ur buddy request ...

Edited by sonam961986 - 14 years ago

Oracle

A new beginning for her awaited at the Oracle University Campus. After what happened in the vacations, her parents decided to send her far away from where they lived .... though she was their only child ....
She was not happy with what was happening but had no other choice as she couldn't refuse her father. Somewhere in the bottom of her heart even she wanted to go away from the place that gave her so many pains and wounds which would be difficult to heal ....

Flashback

Dia - Nisha!!!! Jaldi karo late ho raha hai .....
Nisha - Bas do minute!!!

Nisha and her friends - Dia, Uday and Benji were having a day-out. They had just passed their first year of college .... they always needed an excuse to party together .... they were friends since, since .... as they put it in front of everyone .... Nisha came down in a white knee-length dress with bell-sleeves and her hair tied in a bun ....
Nisha - Chalo ....
Bneji - Tum ladkiyaan itna time kyun lagaati ho?
Dia - Aey! Not me huh .... ye (pats Nisha) Nisha hi itna time lagaati hai ....
Nisha - Haw!!
Uday - Acha ab chale, ki yahin pe day-out karna hai ....
Nisha - Nahi nahi, Uday tum chalo ... ye dono to humara day-out kharaab kar denge ....

They go to a water park and have a wondeful time enjoying themselves ... Later they go for a dinner and were returning home late at night .... Nisha's parents knew Bneji,Dia and Uday since they were in grade 2 so they didn't have any problem if Nisha returns late with them .... but that night was different .....

In the Car :-
Uday (driving) - Guys ... chalo na kuch khelte hai ....
Nisha - Kya khelein?
Dia - Truth or Dare ...
Benji - Pagal hai kya ... car mein t&d khelenge?
Dia - To kya hide and seek khelein?
Nisha - Uff! tum log phr chaalu ho gaye ....Uday main tumhaare paas aa rahi hun ...
Uday - Aa jaao ... in paagalon ke saath mat baitho ....

They were all singing songs and irritating Uday who was the eldest and wisest of them all ....
Uday - Arrey o! mumbai ki local train ke bhikari bhi tumse acha gaate hai ....
Nisha - Mujhse bhi acha?
Uday - Main tumhaari nahi ... in namunon ki baat kar raha hun ....
Nisha - Haan ab theeke ..
Benji - Kya theek hai ....
Both Benji and Dia start tickling Uday .... as they did always ....

But this night was different ... it was darker than usual .... the light of the moon and the stars was weak in front of the darkness .... and then it started raining ......

Eventually, Nisha and Dia slept while Uday and Benji were talking ..... Nisha's head on Uday's shoulder while Dia's head on Benji's lap ....
Their car was on the highway when the car lost it's balance .... and the brakes failed .... the car went out of control ....
Bneji - Uday kya ho raha hai?
Uday - Pata nahi ... achanak brakes fail ho gaye aur barish mein car control mein nahi aa rahi ....
Both the girls got scared ...
Nisha - Uday kya ho raha hai?
Bneji - Daro mat ....
Dia - Mujhe bahut dar lag raha hai .....
Suddenly the car took a U-turn .... as Nisha's seat belt was open ... she got thrown away from the car ...

Nisha - Uday!!!
Uday (tried to hold her) - Nisha!!!!

The seat belts of others got jammed ... and as they were on a highway ... a truck came and squeezed the car from it's front ....

Nisha who was thrown away from the car ..... saw the whole horrendous sight in front of her ...

The steering wheel went inside Uday who died there and then
Benji & Dia - Uday!!!!
As the car squeezed, Benji and Dia got stuck and due to the truck's push .... the car rolled and it's oil tank burst ..... and it all happened in just 10 minutes ..... and Nisha saw it all .....

As horrifying as the accident was .... what was more shocking was that Nisha didn't even have a single scratch on her body apart from a wound on her hand which was bleeding ....

She saw all her best friends dying in front of her in just 5 minutes .... just 5 minutes before she was in the car with them ... and now she saw the burning ... she fainted on the road ....

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As her parents were driving her to the University ... her window was open and air was blowing on her .... she slowly opened her eyes which were wet as she remembered that night ..... she opened her hand bag and took out a picture of the four of them together ....
Nisha (in her thoughts) - I miss you guys ....
A tear rolled down from her eyes .....

Dad - Nisha beta .... chalo tumhaari University aa gayi ....
Nisha suddenly came out of her thoughts ......
Nisha hugged her parents on the gate .... and slowly went inside ......

A place she never wished to come ..... she felt trapped in the University .... the next two years she would not move out of this prison ..... as she entered ... the gates shut behind her .... her heartbeats increased .... she wished that the night that changed her life forever ... 2 months ago, hadn't come at all ..... she was wearing a black knee-length dress with a round-corner with a knot and bell-sleeves .....

Oracle University had it's own rules and regulations :-
1) No contact with the outside world.
2) Cameras were installed in every nook and corner ....
3) Students were allowed to wear whatever they wished to ... but in black or white.

Nisha took a deep breath and stood in the reception area .....

oh GOD...that accident part was a horrifying part........poor nupur...she lost all her best friends..thats is something unbearable...i hope mayank will help nupur to come out fro her traumaa...........great update yaar...continue soon..........