Making Memories Of Us (MayUr) Last Part (23.6.10) - Page 5

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Posted: 14 years ago
#41
Update was really good
Evn i thk Vivaan cares for her but jus behaves lil saduly😆😆
Their dance was fab
Sam n Grace talk nicely to each other
Adam is getting to coozy wit Nisha
Hop Nisha jus shouts him back once for touching her
Wats did Sara ka chakkar yaar
Will be waiting for update wit lots more Vivaan n Nisha😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
#42
heyyyy  sonal
😍awww loved vivan n nisha's dance
i was just imagining them dancing so perfectly so gracefully
m in love with ur ff seriously
do continue soon
n thanx for pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#43
awesome....
The dance description blew me over....

I can't describe how awstruck i was when i read it......

Ah! I am still in another world!

Superb job dear...

Terribly eager for the next update but do enjoy your holidays...

Loads of love,
Akansha
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Posted: 14 years ago
#44
25th 25th 25th 25th 25th 25th !!!!!!!!!!
abhi 23 hi hui hai and i m hyperventilating!!!

thanks akku for recommending this ff!
its so.... different and interesting
you write gr8 dear!

lovely ff......
i m not having any probs with this vivaan and nisha names.... i m actually liking it
do contiue soon
plz 25 ko hi post kar dena
plz..................

will wait impatiently for ur update:)

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Posted: 14 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: Dpkavasudeva

25th 25th 25th 25th 25th 25th !!!!!!!!!!
abhi 23 hi hui hai and i m hyperventilating!!!

thanks akku for recommending this ff!
its so.... different and interesting
you write gr8 dear!

lovely ff......
i m not having any probs with this vivaan and nisha names.... i m actually liking it
do contiue soon
plz 25 ko hi post kar dena
plz..................

will wait impatiently for ur update:)



@Dpkavasudeva....Dekha maine kahan tha naa its an awesome FF..

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And yeah..Sonam Di (I checked your profile and i realised this should be the way i should address you. Can i call you that?)

Even i am waiting desperately for the update..

Please do update soon..

Love,
Akansha
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Posted: 14 years ago
#46
i just caught up with your story..!!
Very awesome..! I love the atmosphere that's created in it...
The dance looked very passionate...
can't wait to read what happens next...
do continue soon
plz add me to the PM list
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Posted: 14 years ago
#47
hey
        just read all the parts of ur ff
          i must say ur a superb writter
         plz add me to ur pm list
                                                                                  luv Marium
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
hello guys i m back!!!!!!!!!!! i had loads of fun with my hubby and frnds .... and so i have a treat for you all ... 5 Parts of the story i m updating right now!!!!!!!! yes i wrote them in my long journey .... so enjoy guys!!!!


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Posted: 13 years ago
#49
hi sonam
nice ff i readed all d parts
plz pme wen u update
thanks
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Posted: 13 years ago
#50
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Nisha gazed at the view Grace pointed at and she stood dumbstruck. Sara was close dancing with Ronald whereas Vivaan was nowhere to be seen. She couldn't understand what was happening and wanted some time to gulp it. She left Grace, who was smiling seeing Nisha falling for Vivaan. Nisha went to the drinks section and in the process of calming herself ended up drinking wine. It started showing effect and in no time she 'almost' lost her senses and started wandering in the hall in search of Vivaan to make him realise that the girl he loves is actually not worth his love and trust. Grace and Sam were discussing about the party when Nisha bumped into them.
Sam - Nish, you alright?
Grace - Crap, she is drunk!!!
Sam - No ... what to do? Hey, why don't you just drop her to her room ...
Just then Mrs. Danielle called her ...
Grace (in hurry) - You drop her, i can't ....
And without any further conversation she left ... Nisha had her head on Sam's shoulder who was feeling very awkward ....
Sam - What the hell! I don't even know her room number!!!
Vivaan noticed Sam holding Nisha ....
Vivaan - Dude??
Sam - Vivaan .... ahm ... she is drunk and Grace didn't tell me her room number and told me to drop her ....
Vivaan - I'll tell you .....
Sam (interrupting) - Great! You are a savior!! you drop her ... i know you won't refuse ...
Vivaan - But ....
Sam left, Nisha lost her balance and fell on Vivaan. Her head on Vivaan's shoulder and was totally depended on him. Vivaan had to hold her, his hands on her bare back ...
Vivaan (sarcastically) - Tum mera peecha nahi chodogi ....
Nisha (childishly) - Kabhi nahi ...
Vivaan (balancing her) - I knew it ....
He made her stand on her feet, his hand around her waist, her head on his shoulder ... both together walked towards the building ....
He took their room keys from the counter where every Saturday the keys are deposited before going for the night....

She was humming all the while and highly irritating him ....
Vivaan - Shut up! Shut up please ....
Nisha - You shut up!
Vivaan widened his eyes and ignored her....
Vivaan - Main sochta tha, ki at least tum to yahaan ki ladkiyon jaisi nahi hogi ... par tum bhi ....
Nisha (sheepishly) - Tum mere baare mein soch rahe the ....
Vivaan - Mera wo matlab nahi tha you fool ...
Nisha (frowning) - Fool! tumhe main fool dikhti hun! jaao mujhe tumse baat nahi karni (pointing her finger towards him) tumhaari wajah se meri ye haalat hai. okay!
Vivaan (rolling his eyes) - Right ...
She tried to free herself from his grip, he tried to hold her back ...
Nisha - Chodo, chodo mujhe darinde!
Vivaan (screaming) - Shush!! Nisha, bilkul chup, munh band aur chalo .....

Both finally reached her room quarrel ling all the way, but now she was in his arms, of course forcefully ... with a lot of effort, he managed to open the door ... he slowly put her on the bed ...
Vivaan - Ab chup hokar so jaao ...
Nisha - Tum hamesha chillate kyun ho?
Vivaan - Kyunki, main kahin bhi jaaun tum wahan aa jaati ho, ab good night ...
She pulled his hand, he lost his balance and fell on the bed, on her ..... She was innocently staring in his eyes ... tears rolling out ....
Vivaan - Kya hua? Ab ro kyun rahi ho?
Nisha - Mujhe ye jagah achi nahi lagti ... mujhe ghar jaana hai ... koi yahaan mujhse pyaar nahi karta ....
Vivaan - Aisi koi baat nahi hai, ab so jaao ... good night ...

He left her in tears and came out of the room, exhausted entered his room ... slowly pulled out his clothes and had a shower .... came out in a white pyjama and sat on his study table and started working ......

Next morning, as Nisha woke up with a strong headache she couldn't remember what happened the night before ... she couldn't make out how she was in the same gown and why her cheeks were so dry .... she slowly got up and went to have a shower ... her head still paining ... she came out in a white full sleeved, knee-length dress with a boat neck .... as she was drying her hair, there was a knock on the door ... she opened it to a surprise as Grace and Sam were standing together ...
Sam - Hey girl! You alright now?
Grace - Of course, look she looks so fresh ....
Nisha - Guys, what you talking about ... already my head is spinning ....
Grace and Sam smiled at each other .. as the three of them entered the rom ... Sam shut the door behind him and pulled the chair to sit as the girls sat on the bed .....

Sam - Okay! listen, ypu were drunk last night ...
Nisha (shocked) - I was what?
Grace (calminh her) - Yes, you were drunk ....
Nisha - What rubbish! I have never been ....
Sam (interrupting) - But yesterday you did, that's why this headache!
Nisha (understanding) - Really, oh ... i would have made a fool out of myself .... how did i come back?
Sam - Vivaan brought you here ...
Nisha - What?
Grace - Yes ...
Nisha - Oh, i must thank him ...
Sam - Yes, but before that, have this coffee and this medicine please ...
Nisha nodded and drank the coffee and took the tablet ....
Grace - Okay, now what?
Nisha - I'll go and search Vivaan ...
Sam - I'll ...
Grace (cutting him) - Yup, ans Sam and I go to the hall to clean it up, right Sam (staring) ...
Sam - Yes, i promised to help ...
Nisha - Ahm ... okay, bye ....
Sam & Grace - Bye, all the best .....
And the three of them came out of the room ....