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Posted: 15 years ago
#81
so nice yaar. keep it up. nupur is mayank's arm. so sweet. kuch to shuru huya.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#82
wow i really love your 11 and 12 parts plzz contuied soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#83
part=13
r=ok..ye file dr mayank ko dedo..are tum log jaraheho.....
a=ha yaar....hum bohot thak gaye ha na...ghar kjake thora rest karenge....
m=lekin humne raatka programe banaya ha....
r=kaisa programe????
ra=yehi ke hum aj raat sablog tumhare ghar par gettogether karenge....
a=issi bahana teri behenose bhi millenge....
r=ok..great idea.....
a=ok ridzy hum chalte ha..bye!!!!
k=bye riddhima...
r=bye ma'm apna khayal rakhna....
after they leave armaan came to her....
a=so party ha????
r=ha..mere ghar par....
a=ok...
r=armaan tum araheho na????
a=ha..par agar tum nahi chahti to ma nahi aunga....
r=nahi...mera matlab mane esa kab kaha ke mat ao?????
a=matlab tum chahti ho ke ma au????
r=ofcourse armaan ye bhi koi puchneki baat ha?? then she realized what she told..
a=sach???
r=ab..mujhe..jaana ha..bye...
a=ab to mujhe bhi party ka besabrise intezaar ha.....
cafe....
s=uff aj bohot kam hogaya hana????
g=ha...bohot thak gayi.....
s=well abhi phir duty ha????
g=nahi abhi ghar jaungi......
s=ma chod du?????
g=nahi...aj di ke sath jaungi......
s=oh..koi baat nahi phir kabhi.....
n=hey guys.....
g=di..maine suna ke dr riddhima ne tumhe bohot daata...????
n=....woh....nahi...actualy...
s=nupur hum tumhare dost ha humhe bata sakti ho.......
m=ha..nupur....hum tumhare dost ha....bolo na...nupur gives him a angry look....
n=zarur mayank.....tum sab mere dost ho ma apni problems tumahare sath nahi share karungi to kisse karungi..hana???
s=to phir bolo na.......
n=woh kya ha na guys ke mane apna pager locker ma bhul gayi thi....
mayank was shocked to see that she didn't tell the truth
g=di..itni laparwahi..ab pari na daat????
n=koi baat nahi gunjan dubara esi galti ma nahi hone dung..n she smiles at mayank....
m(himself)=isse kya hua?? isne sabse sach kyun nahi kaha????
n=guys ma chalti hu mujhe i.c.u. me jaana ha.....she gets up n comes near mayank n slowly tells him...
n=mayank...tumne socha ha ke ma sabko sab bata dungi????? nahi.....ma tumhari tarah nahi hu...... n she leaves from there....
sharma house...
all 3 of them arrive at home...
r=tumlog fresh hoke jaldide tayyar hojao....
g=kyu di?? kahi jaana ha???
r=nahi..gharme log anewale ha....
n=woh kaun di??? apke woh purane dost????
r=ha....aur sath armaan samrat aur mayank bhi.....
n=mayank????
r=ha..so now get ready.......
malnhotra mansion
m=what??? nupur ke ghar bhai please mujhe nahi jaana ha...
a=kyu??? tujhe ma usse shadi karneko nahi bol raha hu..bas uske ghar janeko bol raha hu.....
m=bhai.....
s=comeon mayank..chal na party ha ....
m=tujhe bari jaldi ha uske ghar janiki......ha ha hogi to..gunjan jo ha...
a=gunjan??????
s=bhai kuch nahi..please mayank chal na...
m=ok fine.......
a=20 minute bad yehi par milenge......
s m=done!!!!!!
sharma house....
n=lo ma to tayyar hogayi..(she was wearing salwar kamiz which she weared when mayank was leaving..pink one...
g=di..hum bahar nahi jaarhehe kiki shadi me....(she was wearing white salwar kamiz of khabar nahi)
n=par party to ha na??? par riddhima di kaha ha???
r=ma yaha hu....both turned n were amazed to see her...riddhima was wearng a sauce wala laal salwar kameez..open hair...
r=lo ma bhi agayi...kya hua??? tum dono mujhe ese kyu dekh rahe ho????
n=di ap aj mast lagraheho....
r=nupur!!!!!
n=sorry....
g=di...aj ap sachme bohot khubsuraat lagrahiho..koi apko dekhegana to woh to fida hojayega....
n=kaun????
riddhima winks her not to tell.....
g=sab;log......
n=ha...
r=ab chalo...sab tayyaria karte ha....
n=ha...
after sometime everyone was there.......
a=nupur..paata ha tum bilkul mere jaisi ho..ekdom mast....
n=mujhe paata ha.....
r=ma'm ap kuch le nahi rahiha????
k=ha....
m=bydaway ye armaan aur uske bhai kah ha????
three bikes enter..n then one by one....armaan mayank samrat..... n it divides into three parts...
two sides sajan n mayur n between ar.......
precap:ladki kyu najane kyu.......nupur locks mayank in men's loo n he couldn't reach to surgery in time......then she talks too him very badly........
Edited by maisha.hossain7 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#84

it's so nice.pls cont soon

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Posted: 15 years ago
#85
heyy
nice update
so bad that she will take revenge like that
but lets see wat happens
plzzz continue soon
thanx for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#86
very nice one..........stiill have to wait for song..............not good.............continue soon.........tc.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#87

hey!!!

nice part...

what is cooking in nupurs mind????

AR were cute,,,update soon

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Posted: 15 years ago
#88
wowowow tht was cool iam also wondringg whats cooking in nupur mind i think its really bad for mayank.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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part=14
all of the boys came in....riddhima opens the door n just stares at armaan..asmani tune starts to play where both stare at each other...
s=bhai..no response....mayank chal hum chalte ha....
m=cool....
ar=basket??? no response...
ar=basket..ridhima!!! he moves his hand infront of her....
r=oh...sorry..hi!!!!
ar=hi....aj ma itna accha lagrahahu?? jo tum mujhse nazre bhi nahi hata parihiho??? r=ab..nahi..sorry.....esi koi baat nahi ha..
ar=matlab ma accha nahi lagraha hu???
r=nahi nahi..lagraheho..bohot acche lagraheho....
ar=mujhe pata tha...wase tumbhi bohot acchi lagrahiho....sauce wala laal jo pehna hai....
r=thanks...
ar=tum aur bhi kuch pehenti tabhibi acchi lagti......
r=par mane ye tumhare lie pehnaha..tumhe ye bohot accha lagta hana??? isiliye.... armaan was amazed how she said that...
r=ab mu band karoo aur chalo.....
ar=ha.....
everyone was enjoying the party......
a=nups...mere lie zara pani laogi????
n=kyunahi..abhi layi..... she went to bring water n crushed with maaynk....
m=oopsss...i'm sorry.....he saw that it was nupur n he looked at her from top to bottom..
n=koi baat nahi tumhare sath takrana to mera kaam ha....jab tak na takrau din shuru aur khatam nahi hota.....
m=kya????
n=kuch nahi..now excuse me....
m=ha....iske kehneka matlab kya tha????
n=bohot jald paat chal jayega..... samrat was talking to rahul when he noticed that everyone was there but gunjan was not there....
s=ab..nupur..ye chashmish kaha ha???
n=woh kitchen ma ha.....samrat tum please uski thori help kardoge????
s=sure...
n=thanks....
everyone is enjoying gossiping with each other....
kitchen...
g=uffo.ye di bhi na sab kuch ulta pulta kardeti ha....she hears someone entered the kitchen she thought it was riddhima but it was samrat.....samrat was totally shocked to see her looking so pretty in a white suit looking like just a fairy....
g=di...accha hua tum aagayi.please help kardona..
s=sure....ma to yaha ayahihu tumhari help karne....she turns around n finds it samrat....
g=oh hi samrat.....
s=hi....
g=tum yaha????? sorry mujhe laaga ke di ha...
s=koi baat nahi..woh mujhe nupur ne kaha tha tumhari help karneke lie...
g=oh.thanks....
s=wase,.,,mane ek chis notice ki ha....
g=kya???
s=yehi ke jab tum koi kaam kati ho.to pure man aur laagnse karti ho.chahe woh hospitaal ka ho yah phir ghar ka....
g=ha..lekin ye complement tha ya phir tarif????
s=without any fullstop tarif.....
g=thanks....
s=insabka ek gudluck sine ha....
g=kya????
s=ke tum ek bohot acchi housewife bhi bansakti ho.....now she blushed....
g=abhi sariraat yahi baate karniha yahphir bahar chale???
s=ha chalo...
outside....
everyone was chatting with other.....
a=woh.aj kitne dinoke baad hum ek sath hue ha na????
m=ha yaar..jante ho guys hum pehle kitna larte the....baat baat pe boys vs girls ya phir girls vs boys...
r=jisme hum boys humesha jitte the...kyu armaan???
ar=ofcourse.....
r=kya ofcourse?? hum girls humesha jittethe....
a=exactly.....tum boys r the loosers..humesha bb me humse harte the....
s=tab the..abhi nahi....
g=samrat tum to chup hi raho...tum sare ladke larke ek jaisehi hote ho.....
r=bilkul..aur armaan tum ye kaise bhul sakte ho ke tum mujhse bb matches me kitni bar hare the????
ar=riddhima tum..they began to fight!!!!
ra=are yaar..ye to phir shuru hogaye......
m=guys......suno...
k=armaan riddhima....stop...but they were fighting like kids....then mayank n samrtat shouted!!!!!
sm=STOPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP
both stopped...n looked each other..(kash jhagra tune was playing)
n then nriddhima lef from there in anger......
ar=girls humari tarah kyun nahi ha?????
ar=ladki kyu najane kyu ladko si nahi hoti......riddhima turned n saw armaan smiling n heaading towards her...maaynk n samrat gave each other high five....
ar=sochti ha zyaada kammu samjhti ha...dil kuch kehta ha..kuch aur hi kartii ha....
ladki kyun najane kyu ladko......
ladki kyun.......si nahi hoti.....
m(pointing nupur)=sochti ha zyada kammu samjhti ha...
s=dil kuch kehta ha..kuch aur hi karti ha....
all 3=ladki kyun....si nahi hoti.....
riddhima was talking to anjie....
ar=pyaar usse bhi ha magar shuruad timhise chahe....khudme uljhi uljhi ha par baloko suljhay....
m=sabse alag ho tum ye kehkar paass tumahre ayee.....aur kuch din me tumme alagsa kuchbhi nah usko paye....
ar=ek ha kehnoko kitna tehlatiha....
s=thak jate ha hum woh jee behlati ha....
m=bato bato me..tumhe phasiti ha..pehle hasati ha..phir baara rulati ha...
all 3=ladki..kyu...si nahi hoti.....
armaan was dancing with his brothers when riddhima came in middle....
r=eye itna hi khudse khush ho to piche kyu ate ho???
g=phul kabhi to hazar tofe akhir kyu late ho????
nupur now coming towards maynk....
n=bikhra bikhra be matlab sa tuta phuta jina..aur kehteho alagse ha hum tan ke apna sina....
g=jineka tumko dhang sikhlati ha...
n=tumhe janowarse insaan banati ha...
riddhima holds armaan's hand..
r=uske bina ekpaal rehna sakoge tum...
gunjan putting her hand on samrat's shoulder...
g=usko paata ha ye kehna sakoge tum...
n=isiliye ladkiye ladko si nahi hoti...
all 3=isiliye..si nahi hoti......
ar=jane kaun kaunse din woh tumko yaad dilaye..pyaar ko chahe bhul bi jaye taroikhe na bhulaye...
1st march ko nazre milaye....
4 april ko ma milne ayi..
21 may ko tumne chuya tha...
6 june mujhe kuch hua tha....
r=ladko ka kya ha kisibhi mor pe woh mur jaye..a
n=abhi kisike ha..
g=abhi kisi aurse woh jur jaye....
ar=ek ha kehneko kitna tehlati ha..pointing riddhima
m=thak jate ha hum wo ji behlati ha.....
r=woh sharmati ha..tabhi chupatiha...
s=ladki jo ha kehde usse nibhati ha....
all3=isiliye.......nahi hoti....
all3=na na..ladki kyun najane kyu......then nupur started to fight with mayank...samrat rying to convince gunjan n ar were in the middle staring at each other.....n atlast nupur in the fight fall in mayank's arms.. samrat held gunjan's hands n ar were lost in each other......rest of them stood up n clapped....
precap: mayank is locked in men's loo...he couldn't reach his surgery..nupur des in his replace.....they have a big conversation.......
guys.sorry for late update...please do comment n enjoy...
Edited by maisha.hossain7 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#90
Very nice part.......awesome song....continue soon

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