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yippie............ first one to comment........... thoda aur likhna chahiye tha na......... twas awesome...........
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continuing.....
outside armaan's cabin...
m=nupur..nupur meri baat suno...everyone was looking at them....
n=mujhe kuch nahi sunna ha..she went to the locker room n mayank followed her...he then holded her arm n turned to himself...
m=kyu?? kyu nahi sunna ha??? ma janta hu ke ye sab tumhine kia ha....mujhe to pehlehi lag raha tha ke kuch ajeeb ha tumhare behavior se..mujhe tabhi samajh jaana chahiyetha...kyu kia tumne esa nupur??? she was telling nothing..just looking at him..
m=bolo kyu kia esa???? mane tumhare bareme jaisa socha tha tu bilkul vasehiho...ghamandi..nakchari.baddimag aur battamiz ladki jo kabhi dusroke bareme nahi sochti!!!! n=BASSS....BASS MR MAYANK MALNHOTRA she moved his hand mayank was now silent...
n=bohot bollia tumne..ab ma bolungi aur tum sunoge..ha mane hi ye sab kia ha...manehi tumhe lock kia..taki tum surgery me na pouch sako...par tumne kya kia?? mera pager hata dia taki ek masoom nirdosh patient ki jaan chali jay???
m=what???? ye kya bakwass karrahiho tum???
n=huh..bakwass???? very gud..tumhare lie woh kuch nahi ha hana?? tumne mera pager hatalia taki dr riddhima mujhe page kare aur ma time pe na pouch sako immergency me hana?? thik ha tumne kia...par kya tumne ek baar bhi nahi socha ke tumhare ese karnese kisi patient ko takleef yah phir uski jaan bhi jaa sakkti thi?????
m=ye tum kya kehrahiho???
n=wahi jo sach ha..tumne mera pager to hata lia aur dr riddhima ke page karnepar bataya bhi nahi..tumhare is na batanepar...pata ha kya ho saktatha??? uss patient jiskelie mujhe page kia ja rahatha uski jaan ja sakti thi....mayank was shocked..
n=ha mayank..ha...ek bilkul norlam.safe patient ki halat itni bigaad gayi agar thori der aur hojati to uski jaan chali jaati..kyuki woh sirf mera patient tah..uski dawai..reports case sirf mujhe pata tha usse kab kesi takleef hotithi sirf mujhe pata ha aur kisiko nahi usdin jab dr riddhima ne mujhe page kia..tumhe kya lagta ha wo ek patient ke lie mujhe itna kyu bulayengi??? kyuki unko uss case ke bareme kuch nahi pata tha....kuch bhi nahi..woh to ye bhi nahi janti thi ke usse hua kya ha....phir woh kaise unhe handle karti??? woh mera aur dr khanna ka case ha...par woh yaha nahi ha..tumhari mujhe na bataneki wajase ma waha time pe nahi pouch payi.....mayank uski pulse ruk low horaha tha..saas nahi leparah tha woh...ek bilul normaal patient ko normaal attack aya isiliye usse oxygen dena para...aur woh itna critical hogaya ke usse i.c.u me shift karna paara....agar ma waha hoti to esa kuch nahi hota... mayank was feeling guilty....
n=ma tumhe kya baatu mayank ke mujhe kaisa laga jab mujhe uske bareme pata chala??? woh to dusrehi din discharge hone wala tah par ab.....agar dr riidhima ne dr armaan ko is bareme bata dia hota to kya hota??? tumhare manki iccha to puri hoti par mera career pure 3 saal ki mehnaat mom ka sapna sab adhura rehjaata.....she was now crying....
n=kyuki dr armaan to mujhee sanjeevani..se...bahar..i....she wiped the tears
n=isiliye mane ye saab kia taki tumhe ek sabak sikha saku ke khudpe kya bittihe jab khudpe ye guzarta ha.....aj to tum sirf surgery pe late hueho..par ma to kiki jaan bachaneme late hogayi thi na....surgery karneke lie to bohot log ha..par us patient ko bachaneke lie sirf ma thi....aur ye baat tum mujhse zyaada acchese jante ho ke dr armaan kisiki vajase patienko takleef ho to wo usse kabhi maaf nahi karte..mayank tumne mera pager to hataya tha..par kamsekam mujhe koi ishaara to dete jab tumhe pata tha ke kitni baar mujhe page araha..tumne nahi samjha ke koi immergency taki ma waha galtisehi sahi ja paati...mujhe tumne sabak to sikhaya hi par sath me ek begunaki jaan bhi khatreme daal di...esa kyu kia tumne??? aaj...mane ye isiliye nahi kai taki ma tumse ussdin ke lie baadla le saku...isiliye kia taki tumhe ek sabak mil sake....mujhe is baat ka koi afsoss nahi ha jo mane aj tumhare sath kia....he was also in teray eyes...n feeling very guilty....
n=mujhe jo kehna tah..meri safai me mane kehdia..abhi tumhe jisse bhi jobhji kehna ha tum kehsakte ho..mujhe koi farak nahi padta..she turned to leave n headed towards the door..n again turned..
n=aur ek baat..ayindase esa kuchkarnese pehle 10 baar sochna...ke isme kisi nirdosh ka hath na parjaye...n then she lefy from there...mayank stood in the locker room n all nupurs answers kept him disturbing..he artleast fell on gis kness n started to cry
m=ye..mujhse kya hogaya????..oh god..mujhse itni baari galti kaise hogayi????
reception
g=mm sister register layiye...mujhe sigh karnaha...
s=ye lijiye doctor
g=thank you...
g=are di..ma ahirahi thi..
r=ab gunjan tujhe aj ghar akelehi jaana ha...woh mujhe night duty pe rehna ha...par nupur 2 ghante baad ghar ajayegi..tu chinta mat kar...
g=koi baat nahi..di ma chali jaungi gud nite....
she went outside....n met samrat at the parking..
s=hi chashmish....
g=oh hi...
s=ghar jarahiho?? riddhima kaha ha???
g=woh diko nite dutype rehna ha aur nupur di ko aneme der hogi..
s=oh..chalo ma tumhe chod deta hu....
g=nahi nahi..koi bat nahi ma chali jaungi...
s=chashmish koi baat nahi..wase bhi tumhare gharke rastesehi to jaunga so come'on
g=nahi...samrat thank you par ma chali jaungi....
s=tum iti formalities ky karti ho..sidhe se beth jao varna godh me bitha lunga...lu godh me...
g=nahi..nahi..ma beth rahihu...she sat on n both headed for gunjan's house...
armaan's cabin...
riddhima came to his room
r=armaan?? she saw standing in the window...she went to him n put her hand on his shoulder...
r=kya baat ha armaan???
a=kuch nahi..
r=jhut maat bolo
a=koi baat nahi ha riddhima...
r=mujhse bhi nahi kahoge??? he looked at her n turned...
a=riddhima..mayank esa kyu karraha ha??? woh apne kampar dhyan kyu nahi deta?? mujhe yesab accha nahi lagta roz roz usse datna..ma manta hu ke hospital me ma thorasa strict hu par woh mera bhai ha..kya ma nahi chahta ke wo meri tarah ek accha doctor bane?? samrat ko dekhlo...woh bhi masti karta ha par kaam ke time kaam...shayed ma maaynk ko nahi sambhal paaya..mom dad ke jane ke baad mane un donoko sambhalneka jo vaada kia tha khudse woh pura nahi karpaya...
r=nahi armaan esa bilkul nahi ha....mayank dheere dheere sikh jayega...jaise hum sikhe the..yaad nahi jab tumne join kia tha kitni shetani kartethe...usne baas apni internship shuru ki ha abhi usse support...care..aur sath ki zarurat ha phir woh sab samajh jayega...aur sach batau??? jaise tumne apne bhaiyoko sambhala ha vase koi nahi sambhalpayega....kyuki tumhare jaisa koi nahi ha armaan....
now there was a smile on armaan's face....he holded her hands n both were just looking at each other...
sajan...
samrat was driving the bike when gunjan...
g=samrat bike roko...
s=par kyu???
g=roko........he immediatly stooped the bike....
s=kya hua chashmish...
g=woh...dekho..pointed to a ice-cream car..mujhe ice-cream khani ha....
s=kya??? abhi aur is mausam ma???
g=ha..please samrat chalo na....she got off the bike n took him with her...
g=bhaiya ek loli dena...
b=aur apke lie???
s=loly...
they got ice-cream....n started to eat..gunjan was eating like a child...
s=chashmish tum pehli baar ice-cream kharahiho kya???
g=mm..nahi par bohot dinoke baad isiliye...
s=dikh raha ha...they were chatting with each other when samrat saw a small chind on the middl of the road n a truck was coming that way....the child didn't notice that but samrat did.he dropped his icecream n went to the child..
g=kya hua samrat???? he ran to the child n as soon as he holded tha child...
g=SAMRATTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT...............................................
precap: nupur is upset at home n mayank also...gunjan explains nupur to forget everything...mayank tries to apholigies to nupur but she does'n't pay heed...
guys hope u all will enjoy n the part n do comment...
Edited by maisha.hossain7 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

hey!!

tath was cute,,,

liked sajan,,,

loved the way sam tease armaan...

wow nupurs plan is on...

hope armaan jyada ghusa na ho.....koi bat nahi ridz sambhal legi,,,

AR were amazing loved them...

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Posted: 15 years ago
twas the best................. you are awesome blossom,,,,,,,, no words................. well thanx for the pm...
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Posted: 15 years ago
hiiiiiiiiiiiiii
really nice part yaar
mayank definately needed to learn a lesson
plzzzzzzz continue soon
n thanx for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago

Awsome, superb, amazing, nice, fantustic. jitna bhi kaha jaye kam hai. keya ab shuru hogi mayur ke bich pyaar? pls update soon. i cant wait.

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Posted: 15 years ago
part=17
gunjan was freezed to see to see the truck coming towards samrat..she closed her eyes n then opened n found samrat on the other side of the road with the child.she ran towards him....
s=beta..ap thik to ha na???
g=SAMRAT....tum thik to hona???
s=ma thik hu chashmish...then the childs mother comes...
cm=shukria saab..apne mere bacche ki jaan bachali...
s=are nahi nahi..koi baat nahi...it's okay..agese dhayn rakhiyega...
cm=ji..then she takes her child..
g=ma to daar hi gayithi......tum bhi na...
s=chashmish ma thik hu baba..ab chale???
g=ha..both sat on the bike n goes to gunjan's house...
armaan's cabin...
ar r staring each other holding their hands....when armaan's desk phone rings...they come to sense n leave their hands...
a=hello?????? what???? riddhima is tensed....
a=kya?? abhi..accha aplog tayyaria kijiye....aur 10 minute me sabkuch hojana chahiye...he keeps the phone..
r=kya hua armaan???
a=ek immergency ha...abhi abhi accident hua ha...aur admitt kia gaya ha..mujhe jaana ha...
r=par armaan...suno...to..he leaves...
sajan
s=so chashmish..agaya tumhara ghar...
g=thanks samrat.....
s=mention not..kaal milte ha
g=ok..she turns to leave but then she sees sam's elbow bleeding badly...
g=samrat..ye kya...dikhao...
s=chashmish uch nahi ha..mamulisi chot ha ...thik hojayegi.....
g=mamulisi??? kitna khun behraha ha?? aur tum..chalo andaar ao..ma first aid kardeti hu....chalo...
s=uski koi zarurat nahi ha gunjan...
g=kya zarurat nahi ha..tum chup chap chalo mere sath n she takes him forcelly inside..
g=betho..ma abhi ayi...she comes with some ice,ointment,wool,bandage n cream...
s=ma keharaha hu na...
g=chup chap betho..then she starts bandaging the wound...
s=aaaaaa.......
g=oh..sorry.....pehle to itna bahaduri karte ho aur phir...tum doctor ho par khudki sehetka koi dhyan nahi????
s=sss....chashmish,..jaal raha ha..
g=thora to jalega hi...ruko she starts blowing on his wound....
s=tum bhi na..he looks at her n is lost at her.how she is taking care of him.....her hair is flying on his face...he feels all his pain was gone..then he slowly puts back her hair..gunjan looks at him lovingly he comes closer n closes his eyes..when he heards someoone calling him...
g=samrat...samrat.....
s=ha.....kya hua???
g=wahi to ma puch rahihu kya hua?????
s=kya hua??? he realizes that he was imagining....
g=hogaya
s=kya???
g=first aid...
s=oh...ab ma chalta hu..bye...
g=are par....
s=kaal milenge chashmish..bye thanks...he leaves from there in a hurry....
g=isse kya hua???
s=ye mujhe kya horaha?? lagta ha mujhe chakkar arahaha..chal yahase....he leaves for home...
ot..
armaan comes out...
a=inhe abhi room mein leayiye...
ridhima comes...
r=kaisa raha???
a=mm..thik ha..khatrese khali ha...waise tum abhi tak ghar nahi gayi????
r=woh..duty thi....abhi ja rahithi...
a=ruko....
r=huh???
a=ma bhi jaunga..chod dunga..
r=nahi..it's ok
a=koi baat nahi kahogi..ma abhi aya...
nupur reaches home...
g=hi di....
n=hi....
g=bohot der kardi????
n=ha..kaam tha....
g=acha tum fresh hojao..ma khana
n=gunjie mujhe bilkul bhook nahi ha..plsssss
g=ok di..par sari raat bina kuch khaye???
n=ek cup coffee leya
g=abhi layi.....
mayank..
he is still lost in the words which nupur told him.....
m=maine itni baari bhul..i'm scrud up man....kaal usse sorry to bolna hi parega....
nupur
she is sitting on the bed n lost in her thoughts....gunjan comes with coffee...
g=di..tumhari coffee.....di..
n=ha..oh sorry...
g=kya hua di?? sab thik ha na?? jabse ayiho gumsumsi ho....koi pareshani????
n=ma ye soch rahihu gunjan..jabse ma sanjeevanime gayi hu tabse lekar mane mayank se sirf jhagrahi kia ha...jiska assar mere kaam par laga ha...
g=di..tum usse baat maat karo....usse dur raho..phir koi pareshani nahi hogi...di tum uske sath sirf professional ki baate karo phir koi problem nahi hogi
n=tu sahi keh rahi ha gunjan..ab mera mayankse koi nata nahi ha..sivay kaam ke
g=di..sab bhul jao..aur nayi shurruad karo...
mayank
m=kaalse meri aur nupur ki dostiki nayi shuruad hogi....
then it shows two parts mayur nupur sad n mayank happy...
ar
a=lo riddhima.agaya.....he sees riddhima is in deep sleep....
a=riddhima......basket..she is sleeping n looking like an angel....
a=lagta ha...phirse isse lejana parega...he comes out of the car n takes her in his arms armaan remebers when he tooked her in his arms in the jungle....in hospital...then he rings the bell...
gunjan n nupur oopens the door n both r mouth open...
gn=di...di kya hua?????
a=ssssssshhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh woh so rahi ha....
n=kya di so gayi???
a=to tum logoko kya laga ma usse kyu utha laya???
n=mujhe laga ke...
g=di.chup raho...armaan ao na..he tooks her to the room n lies her on the bed...
g=thank you...
a=no problem...ma chalta hu...
n=ok...gud nite....he leaves...
next day....
gunur r in teh locker room....
n=are..di se to puchnahi bhul gayi....
g=kya???
n=yehi ke kaal raat woh kya sachme soyi thi ya phir armaan na...
g=di tum bhi na....the sayank comes....
s=hi guys...
n=hi...she sees mayank n her smile goes....
g=hi good morning...
s=same...
n=gunjan chale???
g=ha chalo..all leave but mayank stops nupur....
m=nupur..please please meri baat suno...
n=mujhe kuch nahi sunna aur vase bhi briefing ke lie late ho rahi ho....she leaves from there....
m=lagat ha ye esse nahi manegi..koi baat nahi...jab tak mana karegi tab tak iska picha nahi chodunga...
precap:nupur finds flowers in her locker...mayank says sorry n she forgives him..both becomes friends....
guys i'm really sorry for late update......but enjoy this part n do comment...
Edited by maisha.hossain7 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
gret update dear...👏............. hmm so nupur is showing attitude..😡.........,,,,,,, mujhe nahi pata tha ki gunjan itni buri advise degi,🤢,,, she is an intelligent gal,,,,😉,,,,,, but any ways the update was as usual too gud,,,😛,,,,👏,,, keep updating.😛..😉
Edited by pari.theprinces - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hello Maisha,
i m a new reader of ur FF.
And its awesome,lovely,fantastic,mind blowing, super-duper.
Just loved it.
Keep it up and plz PM me.
F@ri@----------------------------------------------------------------------------

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Posted: 15 years ago
Very good update......sam was dreaming about gunjan......wow...waiting for mayur patch up..waiting for next part....continue soon

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