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Maisha007

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Posted: 15 years ago

hi guys.....this is a ff...please do comment.....

part=1

characters: ARMAAN MALNHOTRA:a cool hot dude 27 years old doctor who has just completed his internship n now is a senior doctor in sanjeevani.loves his brothers very much...

MAYANK MALNHOTRA:younger brother of armaan..25 years old guy going to start his internship in sanjeevani..loves his brothers very much.want to be a good doctor but he is not serious to anything except his work n brothers.favourite pastime chatting in computer

SAMRAT MALNHOTRA:twin of mayank n loves his both bro's n obey's them very much.want to be like armaan.he is waiting for his dream angel.he is also going to be a new intern in sanjeevani.favourite hobbies basketball n bikes..

RIDDHIMA SHARMA:the eldest daughter of shilpa sharma....a succesful senior doctor with armaan..who aims to be one best doctor of sanjeevani..her mom's son n the shine of her sisters...

NUPUR SHARMA:the chulbuli bubli girl who is fully filmy type...waiting for her hero of life..new intern with nher younger sister in sanjeevani.loves her family...

GUNJAN SHARMA:the ladly of her mom..sweet adorable beautiful as a rose....can do anything for her family..loves her family more than anything......new intern....

part one

a boy is saying to somone:

guy=aap esa kaise kar sakti ha nurse??? aap janti ha na ke iss patient ki tabbayat thik nahi thi..phir bina kisiko inke under rakhe aap washroom kaise ja sakti ha???

nurse=doctor..woh..ma to sirf do minute ke lie gayi thi....

guy=do minute???? aap janti ha ke in do minute mein uss patoent ke sath kya ho sakta tha????

a girl enterns....

girl=armaan...calm down..woh patient abhi thik ha rite???/

armaan is shown...in cool shirts n lab coat...

a=riddhima please..agar kuch ho jaata????

r=hua to nahi na??? tum positive kyu nahi sochte????

a=par riddhima.....

r=par war kuch nahi.....sister aap jayiye aur agese dhyan rakhiyega..

n=ji doctor..sorry doctor armaan...n she leaves....

r=armaan....

a=riddhima please.......tum janti hona ke patients mere lie kya hai????

r=janti hu baba...ke woh tumhare lie kuch zyaada hi apne ha...tum unhe apne family ki tarah mante ho....

a=manta nahi hu...woh hai mere lie.....aur kisibhi wajase unhe taklif pouche mai ye nahi sehen kar sakta.....

r=janti hu....aur isisliye doctor armaan ne aj tak kisibhi surgery mein kisibhi patient ko nirash nahi hone dia....

a=aur mere jiteji..hone bhi nahi dunga....

r=tumhari ye lagan m,ujhe npasand hai....

a=tum mujhe ek baat batao riddhima ke tumhe ye kaisa ata hai????

r=kya????

a=yehi..jabhibi mai jitna bhi gussa hu tum mujhe kaise hasati ho????

r=karleti hu.....par abhi tumhe apne iss gusse par aur bhi kabu rakhna parega....kyuki ward boy aur nurse ko chodke aur bhi bohot sare galti karne wale arahehai....

a=kaun????

r=ye lo phirse bhul gaye na......kal naye interns arahe hai.....

a=are hai...phir to meri jaan chale jayegi...

r=esa kyun????

a=kyuki in naye interns mai mere dono chote bhai bhi hai.......

r=tumhare bhi?????

a=kyu tumhare bhi bhai hai????

r=nahi nahi..meri choti behena join karrahi ha.....

a=accha?? woh!!!!! magar unhe zara samjha dena ke hum duty ke....

r=waqt sirf doctors hai aur kuch nahi....aur apne personal life ko professional life se dur rakhe rite???

a=ha....

r=chinta maat karo...hum hai na??? milke karenge ok????

a=ok......

we see a big house n there a girl is watching ddlj's last film........another girl comes there....

g2=di.....mumma bula rahi hai....

g1=are gunjan disturb mat karna.....dekhan ddlj ka last scene hai mera favourite scene........mom ko bol mai 2 minute main arahi hu.....

g=lekin di........suno na....

g1=gunjan please......

then gunjan comes out of the room.riddhima meets her..

g=di tum agayi???

r=ha...aur humari jhansi ki rani kaha hai????

g=aur kaha ddlj dekh rahi ha......

r=phirse????

g=ha...

r=thik hai usse dekhne do hum niche chalte hai.....

g=chalo di....both come down n sit with their mom(shilpa)

s=ajao mere paass betho...

r=mama..kal apki in ladlioka sanjeevani mein pehla din ha

s=jo bohot accha jayega ha na???

g=apka ashirwaad ha to zarur mama....

s=mera ashirwad to humesha tum donoke sath hai beta....

"aur mere sath mama????"said nupur....

s=tere sath bhi......

r=nupur...tune kitne baar ddlj dekha hai ?

n=di aap to janti ho na ke ye meri favourite film ha to jabhibi dikhata hai ma dekti hu.....

g=aur dika hero bhi to ayega hana di????

n=gunjan tu mera mazak urarahi ha kya???

r=ok ab tum dono shuru mat ho jaana....

s=kaal tum donoka hospitaal mein pehla din hai...mera ashirwad tum teeenoke sath hai....

all 3=thank you mama......

precap:mayank n samrat are shown........first day of internship in sanjeevani.....sajan met for the first timee.....

please guys....comment..

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Posted: 15 years ago

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ok here goes part 2.........

part=2

malnhotra mansion.....

we see a boy sleeping....in sleevless shirtss..beside his bed there is a photo of the three brothers..the room is tidy up..then the alarm ringss..the boy switches off the alarm.armaan enters..

a=sam..chal uth jaa.....then samrat's face is shown......

s=(in a sleepy tone) bhai plsss sone dona....aj sunday hai....

a=abe idiot aj sunday nahi monday ha..aur aj tumhara internship ka pehla din hai..remember????

s=kya????????????????/// he gets up from his bed...oh god mai to bhul hi gaya tha.....mai 10 minute mai tayyar hoke aata hu....he goes to the bathroom but turns n sayss...

s=bhai ma to uth gaya....par abhi aapko kisi aur ko bhi uthana ha....

a=janta hu..ja raha hu...

s=best of luck....then there is shown another roon of a guy who is sleeping n his room is very untidy.....there is also a family photo in his side table n a laptop on his bed....

a=mayank..uth ja......no response.....

a=mayank(more louder)....

m=bhaiya pleasee..aj to sone do.....har din to jaldi utha deto ha.....

a=har din???? ratko agar 3 3.30 baje tak chatting karta rahega to kya nind puri hogi duffar????

m=janta hu...bhai..par pleasee...ap to doctor hai na aur aap jante hai ke insaan ke lie nind kya hai????specially mere lie....

a=abe nautanki karna band kar..n for your kind information aj se to bhi doctor hi kehlayega kyuki...aj teri internship ka pehla din hai......yaad ha na????

m=ha yaad hai.....

a=to uthta kyu nahi????

m=thori der baad..

a=thik ha..tu math uth to tere birthday ke lie mane jo laptop kharida hai..ma woh samrat ko de dunga ok??

m=nahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii gets up immediatly..........nahi bhai..bhai please esa mat kihiye dekhiye ma uth gay hu....

a=very gud..ye hui na baat......ap chalo jaldise tayyar ho jao..aur 15 minute ke andaar niche ajao ok????

m=ok...

sharma house......riddhima is serving breakfast

r=gunjan..nupur chalo jaldi ao nashta lag gaya hai.......

both came down gunjan is wearing a white salwar kamiz with churidaar n nupur a t-shirt with a waist coat(like anjali)

both=gud morning di......

r=gud morning.....kya nupur nind puri hui????

n=ha di.....

g=woh to puri honi hi thi kaal rat QSQT jo dekha.....

n=ha to?? meri favourite film ha....

r=janti hu..chalo ab jaldise breakfast karlo humhe hospital jaan ha..

g=di mama kaha hai???

r=mama ko office mein urgent meeting thi isiliye unhe jaana parha....

n=mama bhi na umesha kam kam kam....

r=vase main tum donoko ek baat clear kar deti hu....

g=kya di???

r=yehi ke ghar pe mai tumhari di hu par hospital mein tumhari senior doctor....isiliye waha mujhe dr riddhima ya ma'm bulaana ok???

n=ok di......

r=aur ha hospitaal mein ma tum donoki galtiya ghar ki tarah maaf nahi karungi so dhyan rakhna...

g=hum pura dhyan rakhenge......

r=ok then let's go......

malnhotra mansion

s=bhai....ye mayank bhai kaha hai???

m=yaha hu...hi sam......

s=hi bhai....

a=ok...ab ye hi bye chodo aur suno.....hospital mein mujhe tum donoke khilaaf koi baate ya complain nahi sunni ha....koi galti nahi....kyuki hospitall mein mai tumhara bhai badme senior dooctor aur supervisor pehle hu..so dhyan rakhna mayank specially tum!!!

m=don't worry bhai hum dono apko promise karte hai ke hum aapko shikayaad ka ek bhi moka nahi denge....

s=ha bhai.....

a=mujhe paata ha..then 3 of them hug..amy in between n sammy n mayu both side....

sanjeevani.....

a car enterns..riddhima n gunjan came out off the caar...

n=di mai car park karke aati hu...gunjan tu mere lie andaar wait karna...

g=thik ha di....

r=nupur jaldi aana....

n=ha di.....riddhima n gunjan goes in n nupur wents to park the caar...

then another car enters..

s=bhai kalse main apne bike mai aunga....

a=ok....