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Posted: 15 years ago
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nurse station
r=gud dr nupur...apne time pe apna kaam pura kia ha....
n=thank you ma'm...
r=ayindase dhyan rakhiyega...is baar dr armaan ke gusse se aplog bach gaye..par agli baar nahi bach payenge...
n=ma'm mai ayinda se dhyan rakhungi...
r=gud..abhi ap jayiye general ward ka kaam khatam kar lijiye.....
n=yes ma'm...she turned n saw mayank coming....
n=ab ayega maza!!!!!! mayank was coming to riddhima n nupur was leaving from there..when mayank came beside him nupur put her leg infront of his way n he fell down!!!!
n=YESSS!!!! she quickly escaped from there n hid behind the wall...
r=dr mayank...apko dikhai nahi deta.....ye hospital hai...
m=sorry ma'm....mujhe dikhai nahi diya..paat nahi kaise???
n=bechara mayank....
r=ayindase dhyan rakhiyega....
m=yes ma';m.....ma'm woh reports....
r=thik ha..ap abhi ready hojayi......1 ghante me mujhe ot me milna ap[ mujhe operation me assist karrahe ha..
m=yes ma'm....
childrens ward.....
g=gappu...ye kya phirse chocolate?????
ga=wo didi.....
g=kisne dia?????
ga=woh..didi.....woh...
g=gappu sach bolna...
ga=samrat bhaiyane..
g=samrat!!!!! she walks to samrat who is talking to minni....
g=samrat.....
s=ha chashmish...
g=tumne gappu ko chocolate kyu diya?? tumhe pata ha na ke usse khana mana ha????
s=ha..par sab baccho ko dia tha isiliye....
g=samrat....usse chocolate se jitna dur rakha jaye....aur tum hoke......
ga=didi chodo na ek hi to khaya tha....
g=tum chup raho.....tum sab ladke ek jaise ho..ekki galti chupane ke liye dusra uski tarafdari karte ho....
s=chashmish....tum....
g=tum to chup hi raho.....
m=didi apne bilkul sahi kaha.....
s=mini tum bhi???? tumto meri patient hona????
g=to?? to kya hua??? gappu bhi to mera patient ha par taraf dari o woh tumhari karraha ha na????
s=oh ma to bhul hi gaya tha..tum girls to ek hi jaise ho na.....
g=matlab?????
s=matlab yehi..ke tum log akele kuch nahi kar sakte..isiliye to dusreka sahara lete ha........
g=kya kaha????? she started to ran after him...
s=chahsmish kya karrahi ho???
g=samrat ma tumhe nahi chodungi......she kept running..but there was a toy on the floor gunjan's foot slipped over it..she fell over samrat..samrat turned n holded her n both fell on a bed.....
both were just staring each other....(sajan bg tune when gunjan hugged him in the court started to play)
riddhima's cabin
armaan..anjie....kirti rm were gossiping....riddhima came in a hurry...
m=oye..ridzi tu kya karrahiha???
a=ha yaar hum aye ha aur tu.....
ar=riddhima kya hua itni jaldi ma????
r=armaan..woh me badme milti hu meri ot surgery ha.....bye.....she leaves from there...
all of them look at armaan that how much he cares for her..after sometime he noticed that....
ar=kya hua guys????
r=ye to hum janna chahte ha armaan ke tumne riddhimako wo bataya????
ar=ab...kya????
m=oye ab humse maat chupa..tera ye ghabrata aur pyaar bhara chehara sab bol raha ha.....
ar=abe muski kya bol rahi ha ye sab????
a=armaan..don't lie yaar we knoe that you love yaar...
r=ha yaar.....pyaar kia to darna kya......
ar=nahi...wo..
k=armaan....jab tum usse pyaar karte ho to usse chupao mat..kyuki pyaar chupay nahi chupta..jase tum nahi chupa paye.usi tarah riddhima ka chehara bhi humhe yehi bolgaya ke woh tumse pyaar karti ha.....(asmani tune started)
m=ha yaar isse pehle ki late hojaye.....usse bol de......
ar=don't worry yaar armaan ke hote hue esa kuch nahi hoga....
ot
r=gud job dr mayank....
m=thank you ma'm.....
r=resume your duties.....
m=baki sab to thik ho chuka ha par uss nupur ka kya karu??? kuch na kuch karke usse to sabak sikhana hi parega....after sometime...
m=IDEA!!!! YESSS......
childrens ward...
after sometime samrat got up..then gunjan also got up....
s=umm...i'm sorry....
g=nahi koi baat nahi....
s=mm..mini chalo..tuhari medicine ka waqt hogay hai....
g=aur gappu no chocolates ok...
ga=ok didi....
cafe.....
n=yaar...ye coffes aur sandwiches lane me kitni late????
sajan comes....
s=hi...
n=hi sam!!!!!!! hi gunjie..beth na...both sit...
s=mayank bhi agaya.....
n=agaya......
m=hi guys......
g=hi mayank..he sits beside nupur.....
n=ma apna order leke ati she gets up......
g=oopsss mera page..badme milti hu.....
s=ma cofffee leke ata hu....
mayank was sitting alone....then he saw nupur's labcoat on the chair...
m(yehi sahi time ha) he slowly took out her pager.....n kept in in his pocket....
then nupue came back n sat opposite him.she didn';t get that her pager was not with her.....
general ward...
a nurse is calling riddhima....
n=doctor....doctor jaldi ayiye...
r=kya hua????
n=dr is patient ki halat kharap ho rahiha...
r=oh my god..iska to pulse low horaha hai....iska incharge kaun hai???
n=dr nupur....
she quickly paged her but as t was with mayank he saw it n took the full advantage...he did'nt tell her....
r=oh god...dr nupur ha kaha???? sister oxygen.....jaldi....ye to saas bhi nahi le paraha hai....ward boy dr nupur jaha aha unhe yaha le ayiye..announce kar dijiye...
wb=yes ma'm.....
cafe...
n=guys ma ati hu....she leaves from there.....
s=kya baat ha mayank bohot khush ho?????
m=dekhte jao.....
nupur was walking when she heard the announcement.....
n=mujhe??? par kyun??? she rushed..on her way a nurse also told her that...
n=ha jarahihu....
general ward...
r=thank god..ap sab thik ha....par dr nupur kaha ha????
n=ma'm...kya hua?????
r=dr nupur...kya ma jaan sakti hu ke ap ap tak kaha thi???
n=ma'm ma to cafe me thi.....
r=accha aur apka pager kaha ha???
n=ma'm mere pass....she puts her hand....n finds not her pager.....she is shocked....
precap...
nupur is scolded by riddhima n when she come sto no about mayank..red in anger...
paty at riddhima's place.....
guys do comment......
dipu thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#72

hey!!!

that was nice yaar..

sajan were cute,,,

and hope armaan will do something soon,.,..

ohh eger to know nups reaction on mayanks prank...

and ya wating for th party too

plz update soon

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Posted: 15 years ago
#73
Hiiiii
Nice update
Mayank is definately in a big trouble
Nupur is not gonna leave him
Plzzz continue soon
N thanx for the pm
mohit_aggarwal thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#74
very nice &lovely part
it was fulll of fun
Angle. thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#75
so nice update yaar. pr mayur ke bech pyaar kab hogi. i m waiting
Maisha007 thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#76
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r=yes dr nupur?? apka pager kaha hai ap mujhe batayengi????
n=ma'm woh...ma'm....actually....
r=ma sun rahihu dr nupur...boliye......
n=ma'm paat nahi kaha hai...shayed locker ma rehgaya jab mai change karne gayi thi.....
r=very gud dr nupur!!!!!!!! i'm really very happy ke ap kitni responsible doctor hai......ek doctor jo apna pager tak nahi sambhal sakta woh patient kya khak sambhalega????
n=ma'm woh....
r=JUST SHUT UP DR NUPUR!!!!!!!! ap janti hai apki itnis laparwahi ki wajase is patient ki jaan jaa sakti thi??? points to the patient...
r=ye app hika patient ha na????
n=ab..ji..i...m..a'am....
r=rite...aur rules ke mutabik incharge doctor ko pehle ana ha aur senior doctor ko badme???
n=ji ma'm...
r=aur mai yaha apse pehle ayi kyuki ap apna pager locker mein bhul ayi..aur aapke absence me is patient ki pulse low horaha tha...sase nahi leparehe the ye....inhe oxygen ki zarurat pari thi....aur app....apse mujhe ye bilkul umeed nahi thi.....
n=ma'm i'm sorry....i'm really very sorry ma'm.....
r=shukar kijiye ke dr armaan ko is bareme kuch nahi paata nahito apko woh humesha kelie suspend kardete aur aptak yahape board ki meeting hoti....
n=nahi ma'm please esa mat kijiye.....please ma'm dr armaan ko maat batayi....
r=thik ha..mai unhe nahi batungi......lekin apke scorese 5 marks cut!!!! nupur is shocked....
n=par..
r=apne jo galti ki ha uske lie to apke 10 marks katne chahiye..shukar kijiye ke sirf 5 katrarhe hai....dubara hui to.... n=nahi ma'm.....nahi..please...
r=sister is patient ko icu me shift karneki tayyari kijiye....
n=i.c.u????
r=ji ha..inki halat bohot kharap ha....isisliye..ap apna pager leayi aur i.c.u. me ajayi....
n=ji ma'm...
riddhima's cabin..
k=ab humhe ab chalna chahiye.....
a=ya..kafi late hogaya ha..aur thak bhi gayi hu....
ar=tumlog thehre kaha ho???
r=dr kirti ki ghar me.....
m=oye ek kaam karte hai..aj raat hum sab ek sath milte ha kya khayal hai????
ar=cool....kaha mere ghar????
a=nahi ridzy ke ghar...issi bahana uski sis se bhi millenge suna ha ke woh dono is baar internship join ki ha???
r=are ha armaan tere bhai bhi to join ki ha hana????
ar=ha yaar.....
m=so to phir aj raat ridzi ke ghar ok????
ar=ok yaar.....
locker room.....
n=pata nahi kaha ha mera pager??? yaha to nahi ha...
m=isse dhund rahi ho?? giving her the pager....
n=thanks kaha mila??? then she sees that it is maaynk....
n=oh..to ye tumhari harkaat thi....mujhe to samjh jaana chahiye tha!!!!
m=well...kafi cool tha rite????
n=huh!!!! tum nahi jante ke ye karke tumne khudko kitni bari mushkil me daala ha.....
m=oh really????
n=ha..just watch out......tumne nupurse panga lia ha...thora mushkil to hogahi....
m=ok..i'm waiting....
n=you should be!!!!
m=fine....
n=fine....(mr mayank..ab tum dkho...ke mai kya karti hu??? tumne mujhe di se daat khilwayi ha na?? ab dekho..agar mane tumhe tumhare h bhai armaan se daat nahi khilwayi to mera naam nupur nahi!)
both smile at each other.....
precap: party at riddhima's house...boys n girls sing ladki kyun na jane kyu????
nupur makes a full proof plan for mayank.....
guys i'm really very sorry for short update..i'm very busy but still updating.....till then enjoy n do comment...!!!!!!!! n to see mayur love scenes you have to wait...cause picture abhi baki ha mere dost!!!!😉
Edited by maisha.hossain7 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#77
promo....
ar=sochti ha zyaddaa.......
m=kammu samjhti ha..pushing nupur...
ar=dil kuch kehta hai.... pointing towards riddhima...
s=kuch aur hi karti ha.....
r(holding armaan's hand)=uske bina ek paal rehna sakoge tum....
g(coming towards samrat)=usko paat ha ye kehna sakoge tum....
n=isisliye ladkiya ladko si nahi hoti...... atlast we see ar staring at them...nupur is mayank's arms..n sajan r holding each other's hands.....
wait for the part....
Edited by maisha.hossain7 - 15 years ago
seemamittal thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#78
nice update yaar
bechari nupur
bina galti ke dant khani padi
but anyways lets wat is she going to do
n waiting for the party
plzzzzzzz continue soon
n thanx for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#79

hey!!!

part was cute,,,

mayur were cool....

now its time for nupurs plane..(by god)

and prono is supercool...

eger for next part....

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Posted: 15 years ago
#80
nice part and exited for next part........means for party... :P

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