**A Lone Star** (AR) Part 2 12/6 - Page 4

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Posted: 15 years ago

The part was perfect Nij. The way you described their emotions...especially Riddhima's emotions....it was done so beautifully and i could feel every moment of it. But its sad how she never got any love...and Mrs. Puri, she too is a sweetheart but her granddaughter, daughter not living with her...humph...thats so mean...but yeyyy!!! now Rima and pu will live togethor..haha....and she working as a RJ...WOW....

So ya i loved the  part and it was done perfectly (i sound repetitive, i know...told ya will learn some new words soon)...you described the emotions very well and anyone who would read this would be able to feel all the emotions come alive and am still curious to know as to why Riddz leaving...you are taking this brilliantly and am loving it.
Looking forward to more.
 
Love ya
Kratz
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Posted: 15 years ago
hiya missy(i dnt no ur name,so thot of calin u missy)
hope u dnt mind...
it ws reli gud one..
boring??it ws emotional n all bt stil it ws so wel ritn...
borin no wy..it ws a gr8 start..
luking 4rwd 2 ur parts
hope u cont soon
thx a ton 4 de pm
luv u lts
ashu
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Posted: 15 years ago
~Reserved~ will get back :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
great update & I don't think it was boring
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Missy nice emotional part but definitely not boring.... I enjoyed reading it.... Plzz continue asap.... 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
'woooow grt part pls continue sooon
tnx for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: swetha10

WOW one more FF... the concept looks very interesting.. i'm sure it would b fun to read it.. Plzz continue asap.. n do add me onto ur PM list..😊


Originally posted by: swetha10

Hey Missy nice emotional part but definitely not boring.... I enjoyed reading it.... Plzz continue asap.... 😊


thx swetha!!glad u like d concept!! yeh i thot d 2nd part was borin..lol!!
will update soonnn!!:D

nijal

Originally posted by: KaSh_4_eva

great ff

plz continue


Originally posted by: KaSh_4_eva

great update & I don't think it was boring


thx dear!! gud u didnt find it as borin as i did...lol!
nijal


Originally posted by: samijan

sounds really gd. continue soon!


Originally posted by: samijan

gr8 pt. continue soon.


thx samija...will update vry soon ;)
nijal

Originally posted by: mar-

woow grt start pls continue sooon


Originally posted by: mar-

'woooow grt part pls continue sooon

tnx for the pm


thx mar! will doooo soonn!!
nijal





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Posted: 15 years ago
AYYYYY NJJJJJJ!!
 
Iam here!!! Ur regular reader oh yea hunny! Honestly its mindblowin. love every detail. waitin 4 more<33
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Posted: 15 years ago
Nij! πŸ€— Big Hug from me to you!
 
It wasn't boring at ALL! I loved it in fact...I loved seeing how Ms.Puri and Ridz bonded..I loved the way you described how in less time, they found love in each other...That was super sweet!
 
You described everything so beautifully and I wonder why Ridz is leaving the place...Hmmm..God Nij, your just like NJ--building up suspense for your readers..LOL...
 
She felt the twinge like she was being squeezed amid two heavy rocks.
 
I loved this line...Ouch, that must HURT!
 
Continue soonnnnnnnnnn!
 
Love ya
Anita
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Posted: 15 years ago
Wow Nij how could you say boring I thought it was spectacular, I almost cried picturing Mrs. Puri crying and asking Ridz not to goo it was so sweet of her to let Ridz stay.
 
Ridz coming back from the flashback was a jolt, so sad I miss Mrs. Puri I could almost see her look when Ridz left and wow Ridz only 18 and on her own like that.
 
Great job Nij and thanks for the Pm will await the next update :-)