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Posted: 13 years ago
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Deepak and Shruthi have decided to take a break, but why give a break to Tamil and Thulasi?😉
Purely fictional. Not intended to hurt anybody's feelings!😛 More fiction
A BREAK
SCENE 1 (TT's house) :
Tamil, "THULASI! Nee panurathu seri illa! Nee ena sonalam seri, intha vishayathila nan solluratha nee kelu!"😲
Thulasi, "Enaga pesureinga? Avanga kalyanam pannitu antha veetla than valanum. Kalyani anga santhoshama iruka mata."😕
Tamil, "Nee ippo von mamiyar veetla ya iruka? Avangalum thaniya iruppanga. Avalothan. Simple"👍🏼
Thulasi, "Nenga nanaikirathu mathiri illa, love panni kalyanam pannuna athula evalo prechanaigal varamnu theriyatha thu mathiri pesureinga!"😕
Tamil, "Apadi na love marriage pannuna santhoshamai kadaiyathu, appidithana?"😕
Thulasi, "Apidi illa. Kashtangal athikom."
Tamil, "Oh. Oru love marriage ku nan prechanai irupeinu kannavula kuda nenchi pakala"😲
Thulasi, "Enna gah olaru rin gah?"😆
Tamil is broken down and almost lifelessly starts to go outside the house.😭
Thulasi, "Enagah!"😳
Tamil still moves out.😔
Thulasi, "Yo! nilu ya!"🤣
Tamil, "Eh" astonished opens his eyes ( you know in that cute way) and turns to look at Thulasi.😆
Thulasi with folded hands (looking bossy and cute)😉
Tamil, "Aama, antha prechanaika apparom suthama ena mathikirathu illa nu theriyum, ippidi solli than theriyanum nu illa"😲
Thulasi is astonished at what Tamil was saying.
"Amma thaiyai unaku oru kumudu. Enum ma nee ena sonnalum kekerein. Entha decisions layum kuruka varamatein.Von ishta padiyei sei. "😕
Thulasi, "Entha prechanaika apparom?"🤔(with querying eyes)
Tamil (doesn't know if he should be angry or not)😡, "Enaku naraiya vela iruku nan veliya poitu varein."
Thulasi, "Inaiku Sunday thana. Ena vela?"🤓
Tamil, "Ehm. Sathiyama yaraiyum kola panna pola."😲 (angry and walks out)
Thulasi (worried, angry, worried)😕
(To be continued...)

(Karpanaila kuda romance scene vara mateinguthu😛)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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ALAIPAYUTHEY
SCENE 2 (Thendral Park):
Tamil, "Machan, un valkaila ivalo prechana varumnu nan ethir pakala. Ippo ena panalam?"😉
Mohan, "Kalyani ya thavara vera entha ponnaiyum nan kalyanam pannika matein."😊
Tamil, "Superu! Ana Kalyani.."😕
Mohan, "Thulasi akka samathicha than kalyanam pannikiva athu matum illa enga veetla ellarum samathikanuma. Kalyani amma vera hospital a serious a irukkanga.😲 Epidi avuthu oru varathula ava kalyanam pannanum nu sathyam vera vangirkanga. Ippo ena panurathunei theriyala."😒
Tamil, "Mama ku ithula samatham.😊 Ana en aruma mamiyar suicide panikuveinu bayam paduthiranga.🤢 Athunala ok nu sonna Thulasi um No nu sollura😡😕..."
Mohan, "Akka no nu sonnathu nala Kalyani um no sollura"😭
Tamil, "Athu matum illa, nee enum padichu mudikala. Nalaiku unga kalyanam nadathathuna rendu perum santhosham a iruka matein ga nu Thulasi nenai kirathu thapu illiya."
Mohan, "Mama, itha kalyanam nadatha rendu varusham. Nan padipu mudikaruthu veraikum vena kashta paduvom ana athuka apporam life long santhoshama irupom"👍🏼
Tamil, "Athu ellam seri da, nee kuputa Kalyani vara mata la, illana unga akka va ethuthu nanein itha kalyanatha nadathi vechirupein."😒
Mohan, "Nee ga than epdi ya vuthu akka va correct panna num"😲😆
Tamil, "Ada pavi. Akka va correct pannuga nu akka purushanta sonna motha thambi nee than da.😛 Nee nala varuva.😆 Seri machan kavalaiya vidu. Ana ena ippo than un akka kita sanda pottu tu kovama veliya vanthein. Um..ena panalam. Machan pesama itha alaipaiyuthe style kalyanam panitu vetuku poidu. Von padipu mudja udana senthirunga. Ithu epidi iruku?"😕
Mohan, "Super mama. Ana ithuku Kalyani othuku valanu theriyala. Akka.."😲
Tamil, "Um..Akka va correct panniya akanum athana. Seri panirulam vidu. Anaikama ithuka apporam Poster ottura pasa enaku kedaikathunuthan nenaikurein."🤣
Mohan, "Uh? Ena?"😛
Tamil, "Onam illa. Free a vidu. Inaku von mamava ava vetuku porein."😆
Mohan, "MAMA!"🤣
Tamil, "Atha than da nanum sonnein."😆
Both laugh and leave.
(To be continued...)

(Thulasi missing la ? Sorry 😛)
Edited by Gisel - 13 years ago
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LOVE WAR BEGINS
Scene 3 : Back home
Tamil (entering his house), "Ena kuttima? Sandaya? En kitta pesamatiya?"😳
Thulasi (happy he is back and rushes from the kitchen)😊, "Apdi il..."(stops abruptly seeing Tamil talking on the phone and not to her)😲
Tamil (on the phone), "Sorry ma. Enuma daily phone panurein...Ada unaku illa tha kiss a?" Umah. Umah. Umah. and kisses the phone," seri kuttima bye! signal seri illa"😲
Tamil mockly stares at Thulasi and goes near her, really near and reaches out to touch her hair. 😉
Thulasi closes her eyes. 😳
She can feel his breath. ☺️
Tamil takes the phone charger behind her and walks away to his room.😡
Thulasi is confused but then gives a determined look and goes into the room. 😕
She takes up her phone and dials a call when Tamil looks upon mockingly.😕
Thulasi, "Hello Epidi irukira?.. Nee innaiku pannu nathu enaku konjam kuda pidikala. Unkita irunthu itha ethir pakala."❓
Tamil looks at her quizzically.😆
Thulasi, "Ena da chellam. Unakaga nan eppovumai free than"😲
Tamil gives a look like he hasn't noticed when he did!!!🤪
Thulasi, "Unaku von chitti veetuku varathuku ethuku von chittappa ta permission kekura?Kuttimaaa?"mockingly looking at Tamil.🤣
A minute of silence and both start laughing.😳
Tamil goes up to her and looks into her eyes and, "Why do I love you so much?"😳
Thulasi just smiles, " Neejamava? Da?"😆
Tamil, "Ama. Di."(stressing each letter)😆
Thulasi, "Enathu? di ya?" chasing and beating him.
Tamil (shouting for help),"Ambalakalugu oru satum, ponnugalukku ona?Aan pavam than"😛 Thulasi corners him near the cupboard.😉
Tamil in between the caging of Thulasi's hands. ( I am sure you can imagine that)😉
Thulasi, "Hm..Seri matter ku varuvon. I think I love you more than you."😲
Tamil, "No. I love you more." 😲
Now hands on hips, Thulasi glares back.😲
Thodarum...oho😲

(I really didn't mean to bring Charu back, looks like she just gets in)
Edited by Gisel - 13 years ago
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A BEGINNING
Scene 4 continues..
Tamil (kind of knowing what was coming up, vadivelu expression😆), "Seri. Oru chinna game. Yaru win panurangalo avunga mathavungluku punishment kudukanum."😊
Thulasi, "Hm..Ok! Ena game?"
Tamil, "Oru nimisham! Mothala punishment a decide pannirvon."😲
Thulasi, "Seri. Ena punishment?"😕
Tamil, "Ippo nan win pannuneina nan unaku mutham kudukanum, illa nee win pannuneina nee enaku mutham kudukanum. Simple."🤣
Thulasi, "Ooh! Ithu punishment? Correct than. Appo unga manasila iruka game a na sollata?"😛
Tamil, "Sollu kuttima"
Thulasi, "Oru nimishuthila yaru adathavungalukku naraiya kiss kudukiranganu thana? (folded hands and smiling)😆
Tamil, "Cha Cha"😕
Thulasi, "Illaya?" (mocking a confused expression)😛
Tamil, "One hour la"😲😆
Thulasi, "Ada pavi" (beating him)😳
Tamil, "Thulasi!" (shielding himself with his hands and then in lightening speed switches places. Now Thulasi is in between Tamil's hands)😳
Thulasi(in between breaths), "Ena. Panna. Poreinga?"☺️
Tamil, "Unum panna matein. Ama, oru chinna doubt kiss adikum pothu mukum mukum edichikuma?😳 Illa you know the angle, the distance, you might have studied in engineering and..um"
Thulasi holds his collars and kisses him in his lips. Eyes closed. Both of them. 😳
Tamil, "Wow!"😛
Thulasi all shy looks away😳 and then suddenly changes expressions.😡
Thulasi, "Mohanyum Kalyaniyum epidiyavuthu sethu vechanum ana chitti"🥱
Tamil(still not out of shock), "Huh! Ena?"😆
Thulasi turns to look at his shocked face and smiles. Then, holds his cheeks(amul baby styles), "Yen Kuttipa!"and hugs him.😆
Tamil hugs back😳 and in mind voice, "Nan thana ivala correct pannum? Script ethavuthu mari pocha?"🤣winks looking into the screen.😉
Subham!

(I hope they start showing TnT or you will have a bad time reading my stories😛)


Edited by Gisel - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Lovely beginning Gisel!!!👏 Nice to see T/T fighting so lovingly for once ... it's like watching a scene from Thendral ... waiting to see the next scene ...😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice one gisel..wow--CT cud have a cuple of advisors from here... waiting for scene 2...wish some mock fighting is shown by CTs as well...esp an issue as mohan n kalyani wud be good...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice part Gisel!😃
Ungande story with cute fighting is very nice.
With good matching photo of T & T
Waiting for the next part😍
Edited by Hollie24 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice job Gisel...waiting to read the rest!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Happy you are enjoying it! What is your analysis? Am I deviating from the characterizations?


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice Part Gisel.👍🏼
in your stories are all well described.
Your stories are very funny🤣 writing and I love this style very much.😆
Waiting for the next part...

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