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Posted: 13 years ago
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Yes it was sad that Gokul had such a very small role to play in the serial ... so I have given him a hero's role in my OS ... though I wish he was a little taller ...
Here is my Part III 😉

PART III ... Awakening
Charu's mom and Dad recognize Gokul as the man whose marriage proposal Charu had rejected when she was crazily in love with Tamizh ...
Charu's Mom distracts Charu by calling out loudly to Charu's Dad "Please take our mapillai out while I make Charu more presentable..." ... Charu's Dad quickly whisks Dr. Gokul outside ... 😲
Gokul is simply astonished ... "What is happening Sir? ... Why is Charu calling me mapillai? ... How did she land up in the hospital with memory loss?" ...
Charu's Dad quickly narrates how Charu had tried to take her life and explains how he had to hide from her the fact that she had committed suicide by saying that she had been involved in an accident ... and how she has lost her memory but only remembers her engagement ... and when she kept demanding to see her fiance whose face she does not recall and wante to know his name ... how he had blurted out to her that her fiance's name was Gokul ... Charu's father pleads with Gokul to understand his predicament ...
Dr. Gokul is amazed to hear the events in Charu's life which led her to commit suicide ... he tells Charu's father that he had already warned Charu's periappa and Tamizh about her unstable mind ... but he had never realised that Charu would come to the final stage of taking her own life ...

Gokul feels guilty that as a doctor he had not been more insistent in convincing Charu's Periappa to take her for treatment ... after listening to everything Dr. Gokul at last nods his head that he understands and agrees to play along ...

Meanwhile Gokul says that as he is the specialist who has been called to examine Charu's condition now he has to do his duty as a doctor ... and he re-enters Charu's room followed by Charu's father ... Gokul requests Charu's parents to wait outside ...
Charu's heart is beating fast while she feasts her eyes on Gokul ... a single tear slowly trickles down her cheek ... Gokul looks at her with piercing eyes and then slowly sits on the edge of the bed and gently wipes away the tear with a forefinger ... Charu lifts her hand and grasps his hand tightly and suddenly puts her head on his chest... "Hold me please Gokul. Promise never to leave me again..." Gokul catches his breath ... and he whispers "Yes! Yes, I promise."

Then gently Gokul disengages himself and looks into her eyes ... her eyes are so frightened and transparent like those of a child ... Charu says brokenly ... "Gokul ... I was so frightened ... I felt like a spirit with a vague past ... the only clear memory I had was that I was engaged to someone whom I love very much ... and when you did not come ... I thought that even that moment in my life will fade from my memory ... and then ... slowly ... I will disappear from my memory without any trace..."

Gokul listens silently and feels her pain and fear and rushes to assure her "There is nothing to fear ... I am here now and gradually you will get your memory back ... little by little you will remember every lovely moment we had spent together ... so cheer up and give me a smile." ...

Charu gives a tremulous smile and then playfully asks him to narrate how they had met and where ... how they had fallen in love ' when and how he had proposed ... how had she accepted ... how did their engagement take place ... etc. etc. ...😊

Gokul laughs out loudly and tells her that he is going to spend a lot of time with her ... so now he will examine her as her doctor and then come again tomorrow evening and talk to her as her fiance ...

As he is examining Charu and asking her questions, Gokul notices that she is finding it difficult to keep her eyes open ... so he tells her that all this excitement has exhausted her and he gently pushes her back on the bed and covers her with the bed sheet and turns to leave the room ...

"Gokul give me a kiss before you leave..." Charu whispers sleepily ... Gokul turns back stunned ... stares at her wordlessly ... not knowing what to do ... Charu smiles sweetly and slowly lifts her hands up towards him ... Gokul forces himself to bend down and plants a light kiss on her forehead ...

Charu whispers "Next time when you come, bring me our engagement album ... please" ... and before he can formulate a suitable reply, Charu closes her eyes and goes to sleep with the smile still on her lips ... 🥱

(Thodarum 😉 Part IV - page 3)

Edited by thendralfan007 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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It is really nice to read the third part, Esther. Beautiful touching scene with understanding from Gokul's side. Also you are maintaining the suspense making us curious for looking forward to what is to happen in the fourth part.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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WoW its very nice...
loved reading it ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#14
Super OS Esther👏

So good to involve Gokul and nice that he understood the situation.😃
Waiting for other parts😉
Edited by Shamz. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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another brilliant chapter .. what's g gonna do abt the album..??
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Oh! nice story esther...👍🏼

very interesting to read😉...waiting for next chapter😍...ingaiyum album ma?🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
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good job...waiting for part 4 😉

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Yes you are all right ... Gokul is so understanding!!! But what could his motive be ... is he going to take revenge on Charu for rejecting his proposal ... or does he have any other ulterior motive ...

Read Part IV to learn more ...
😉
PART IV... Declaration

Dr. Gokul closes Charu's door noiselessly and comes out looking very thoughtful ... Charu's mother quickly goes back into Charu's room ... Charu's father stays back to inquire Gokul about Charu's health condition ... Gokul assures him that Charu is slowly improving in her health and will surely be on the road to full recovery ... Charu's father is very happy with the diagnosis ...

Seeing Gokul's concerned expression Charu's father probes
"What happened Gokul? Did Charu ask any embarrassing questions?" ...
Gokul nods his head "Yes Sir. She asked me to bring our engagement album when I return tomorrow evening. Is the album still with her Sir?" ...
Charu's father nods his head sadly "
Yes! ... it is at home in her bedroom. But if she sees the album then we will be in trouble and so will Tamizh and his wife Thulasi ' Charu will start meddling in their life again and she may even become more violent than before ' Oh I don't know what to do!!?? I don't want to lose my daughter again'" Charu's father breaks down and sobs brokenly ...
Gokul comforts Charu's father and tells him not to worry ...
"Just get me the album as soon as possible and I will take care of everything ' don't worry Sir."
...
Then Gokul takes his farewell and walks away to go on rounds to examine his other patients and to have a word with the Chief doctor ...

Charu's father enters Charu's room and quietly tells Charu's mother that he is going home to bring some change of clothes and he will be back in the evening with some fruits and food too ... he tells her to rest and take care of Charu ...

Charu's father drives home ... tells the cook to make some simple food ... climbs the stairs to Charu's room ... takes the engagement album from under Charu's mattress ... he pulls out some change of clothes from her cupboard and stuffs them in a bag ... goes out to the market to buy some fruits ... then he returns home ... has a quick shower ... and then he dresses ... picks up the tiffin carrier ... puts everything in the bag ... and drives back to the hospital...
On the drive back Charu's father keeps wondering what plan Gokul has regarding the album ... what they are going to do to bring Charu back to a healthy mental state ... for now everything looks so gloomy and unfathomable ...

Slowly he shakes his head of all the negative thoughts ... No! ... he has put his whole trust in Gokul and Gokul being a doctor will not let him down ' Gokul sounded very confident ... so everything will work out well ... with these positive thoughts Charu's father parks his car and re-enters Charu's room ...
Charu is still asleep ... so after handing over the bag containing the clothes, fruits and tiffin carrier to Charu's mother ... Charu's father takes the album and goes in search of Dr.Gokul ...
Gokul is still in deep discussion with the Chief Doctor ... when he comes out Gokul finds Charu's father sitting in the visitor's chair ... fast asleep ...
Gokul gently shakes him awake and Charu's father wakes up with a start ... "Sorry Gokul! I don't how I fell asleep ... anyway here is the album ... as you can see Tamizh is present in every photo ... and if Charu sees this ... she will know that we had lied to her ..."
Gokul again reassures him "Don't worry Sir! Just leave it with me and I will bring it when I come to see Charu tomorrow evening. "
Charu's father unburdens his heart to Gokul "Oh Gokul! If she sees that ... then everything will be lost!!! I don't think I have the strength to see my cheerful Charu become once again depressed and miserable ... I think I would rather die than see my child in that condition again ..."

Gokul says consolingly "Don't torment yourself so much Sir! Just relax! God has given me this second chance to help Charu to overcome her weakness and I will not let her down ..."

Gokul adds on ... "I also want you to know Sir that I admire your daughter for her courage and tenacity in love ... I am also in love with her Sir ... and my intentions towards your daughter are honourable ... Just give me some time to make your daughter recognize and reciprocate my love for her ..."

Charu's father's eyes well up in tears and as he holds Gokul's hand tightly and pats his shoulder gratefully ... "Thank you Gokul ... thank you for being our source of strength and ray of hope during this darkest period of our life ... "

Gokul shakes Charu's father's hand reassuringly and informs him ...
"Tomorrow evening I will stay and take care of Charu ... you and your wife can take a break, go home and take some rest ..."
(Thodarum 😉 Part V - page 4
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Edited by thendralfan007 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice piece of writing, Esther. Gokul now inducing stength and optimism to Charu's dad. Still suspense is there on how Charu is going to react when she sees the album or how Gokul is going to take care of her when she sees the album.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice part Thendralfan🤗. Waiting for the next part😍

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