OS: CHARU A NEW BEGINNING Last Part @ pg.6 - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
#31
You should be in the director's team!
Good job!
Loved your way of explaining things!
Beautiful piece of work!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32

As Tamizhan has predicted ... will the album be edited ... or ... will Charu get the shock of her life ...

Stop biting your nails in suspense friends and ... Read Part VI 😉

PART VI ... Blossoming

Gokul gives a warning look at Charu's father ... and says ... "It is alright uncle ... I have brought the album as Charu wanted to refresh her memories of our engagement day..."

Meanwhile an excited Charu, unaware of the intensity of the drama around her, pulls the album from Gokul's hand and turns the pages with trembling fingers to look at the photos ... yes it was just like what she had remembered ... how beautiful she looked in her blue sari ... here was a picture of her mummy all decked up and that of her father looking smart in a blue shirt ... here was her periamma, periappa and Nitish ... and at last here was one of her fiance...

Charu sighs out dreamily ... "Gokul you look so very handsome in your pink shirt and dark brown trousers ..."

Instantly Charu's father unable to believe his ears turns his head towards her ... and both her parents approach her quickly ... and peep over her shoulders to look at the photo she was pointing out ... and sure enough it was Gokul's face in that photo and in every photo ... Amazing!!!! Gokul had photo shopped the entire album!!!

Charu's Dad shakes his head in amazement ... and gives Gokul a quizzical look ... Gokul just shrugs his shoulders and smiles calmly ... now relieved Charu's parents once again happily bid both of them goodbye and leave for their home ...

Gokul sees them off and then turns to watch Charu ... Charu is fully engrossed in turning the pages of the album and looking at each photo with rapt attention ...

Gokul gets attracted to the way Charu's dark eyelashes curl on her silken cheeks ... how her soft pink lips are half open showing her pearly front teeth ... then his eyes move down to watch her long shapely fingers turning each page and touching a photo here and there ... just like a butterfly flitting from flower to flower ...

Gradually Charu feels Gokul's eyes on her and she looks up and murmurs ... "Gokul!" ... Gokul lifts his eyes ... both their eyes lock ... and they are drawn to each other ... the room is now charged with electricity ...

Then slowly Gokul approaches her bed ... his eyes are brimming with love ... he leans forward and holds out his hand and says "Charu ... can I now tempt you with this gift to take your mind off that album and the past and to look at me and the present world?"...

Charu laughs nervously and looks down at his hand ... she sees the box with the diamond earrings ... Charu's breath catches in her throat at his nearness ... she can even see the medallion on the chain dangling from the open "V" of his shirt ... her heart flutters ...

Charu lifts her hand and tries to remove the dangler from her left ear with her trembling fingers ... the earring refuses to budge ... Gokul sees her struggling ... he keeps the box of earrings on the bed ... bends closer and pushes her hand aside ... he tucks a strand of silky hair behind her ears ... then gently removes the danglers from her ears ...

She can smell his cologne and aftershave lotion ... the feather-light touch of his fingers tickles the sensitive skin behind her ears ... and sends a shiver to run up and down her spine ...

When he feels her trembling ... Gokul moves back ... the smell of her jasmine is driving him crazy ... he feels like loosening her braids and running his hand through her silky thick black hair ... Gokul cannot hide his desire any longer ... Gokul picks up the box of earrings and thrusts it into her hand ... and gets up abruptly ...

Charu looks confused for a second ... but his admiring eyes meet hers ... and she opens the box and carefully puts on the earrings ... then she looks up at him ... smiling shyly she asks ... "Gokul how do I look?"

Gokul replies in a suddenly husky voice ... "Oh Charu! Do you need to ask? You look so lovely..." ...

Charu blushes and nervously pushes a strand of hair out of her face and stutters "Th... Thank you Gokul!!"...

Gokul stands transfixed for a moment and then he steps forward to stand in front of her ... he gently and slowly lifts her chin with the tip of his finger, until her face is uplifted towards his ... Charu feels her skin tingle under his warm breath ... her eyes search his in breathless anticipation ... her heart beats faster and something deep within her quivers in response to the feel of his warm touch ...

(Thodarum 😉 Part VII - page 5)

Edited by thendralfan007 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice piece of writing again, Esther. It was a good trick by Gokul. The way you have shown Gokul's tenderness to Charu is beautiful and natural. Whatever be Gokul's motive, from this part one can see he is tender and understanding to Charu.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very nice one ..
love it reading
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
thanks. waiting for the next twist ..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
Nice chapter Esther😃

Your emotions are lovely and great😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Yes ... Gokul's tenderness towards Charu is beautiful and natural ... but is his love reciprocated by Charu ... for after all the entire love story is a creation of Gokul's mind ... what will happen when Charu regains her memory ...

To learn more ... Read Part VII 😉

PART VII ... Revelation

Hearing quick footsteps in the corridor ... Gokul lifts his head ... drops his hand ... and quickly straightening himself ... he steps back ...

The dietary pushes the door open and places on the side table a covered dish containing some hot soup and some rotis and side dish for Charu ...

As soon as the dietary leaves ... the door is again pushed open and the Chief doctor comes into the room on his routine round ... he exchanges pleasantries with Gokul ... examines Charu and says "She's much better now. I think we can discharge her in a day or two." ... Gokul thanks the doctor and goes outside to see him off ...

While returning to the room Gokul mentally scolds himself ... "Stupid fellow ... Charu's parents have left her in your care and she in now your responsibility ... it is your duty to take care of her as she is still weak ... she does not know where her love lies ... keep away from her by keeping yourself busy... "

When he enters the room Gokul finds Charu lying on the bed with her head resting on a pillow against the headrest ... "Are you tired Charu?" he asks apprehensively ...

"No Gokul ... I am very excited because the doctor said that I can go home ... I'm waiting to take a real shower and wear some decent clothes ... you take me for crazy, don't you?" she inquires quietly ...
Gokul chuckles "No, No! It's just that ... I understand ... when I return home from my work at the hospital ... the first thing I do is just shed my clothes off and rush into the bathroom to take a quick shower ... but now it is time to strengthen you up with some healthy soup and food ... "
Gokul removes the foil from the soup bowl and then starts feeding Charu ' first the soup and then the rotis and side dish ... Charu drinks a glass of water ... and while Gokul clears the table ... Charu visits the restroom ... and gets into her bed ... Gokul goes outside to keep all the dirty dishes on a trolley in the corridor ... and comes back ...
He sees that Charu has ensconced herself comfortably on the bed and gradually drifted off to sleep ... no doubt exhausted from the evening's excitement ...
Gokul covers Charu with a bed sheet ... pulls the chair and sits next to her bed ... his mind keeps replaying the events of the evening ... he smiles and keeps watching her tenderly ... till his eyes close in blissful sleep ...
The next two days pass off swiftly ... and though Charu and Gokul are not given another chance to be alone together ... they share a lot of laughter and get to know each other ... likes, dislikes, joys, fears, childhood, etc., ... Gokul makes up stories about how they met and fell in love ... how he had proposed to her and how their parents had arranged their engagement ... each day brings them closer and closer to each other ...
Finally Charu is discharged from the hospital ... Gokul feels as though he has been waiting for this for ages ... The previous day Charu's mother had packed all her things in a small bag ...
and as Charu's parents had already left to attend an important wedding ... Gokul picks Charu from the hospital and takes her home in his car ...
As soon as they reach home ... Charu runs up the stairs to her room calling out eagerly "Gokul I will quickly take a shower and come down ... and then we can probably go to the mall and have our lunch." ...

Gokul laughs and says "Okay Charu ... it is your choice ... and take your own time to shower ... I will just be sitting here and reading this newspaper."

Charu hurriedly throws open her bedroom door and enters in ... she is so thrilled ... and now to get dressed in a pretty dress that will make Gokul gaze at her as adoringly as he had done "the other evening" ... Charu giggles bashfully at her naughty thoughts ...

She quickly opens her cupboard and ... "Oh no!" all her clothes come tumbling down ... "Oh no! Dad has made a mess of my cupboard ... all my clothes are in such a disarray ... "

Quickly Charu takes a bundle of clothes and placing it on the bed, she starts folding them neatly to rearrange her shelf ... she goes back to the cupboard and takes another bundle ... and suddenly something flutters and falls on the floor ...

Charu drops the bundle of clothes on the bed ... and bends down to pick the piece of paper that had fallen down ...

It is a photo!! ... She turns it over and ... sees a handsome young man sitting next to her ... she is dressed in her blue engagement saree ... her head starts spinning ... she feels a piercing pain ... there is a blinding flash in her eyes ... she moans and looks again at the young man in the photo ...
"It is ... it is ..." suddenly the name flashes in her memory ... tears pour down her cheeks ... and her trembling lips sob out "Tamizh!" ...

And slowly the past events flash back in front of her eyes ...

Click link to see Charu's flashback :
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CNkZ6c5urQc[/YOUTUBE]
(Thodarum 😉 Part VIII - page 6)
Edited by thendralfan007 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
It was nice to read again, Esther. The description of whatever went on between Gokul and Charu was nice and finally Charu getting revelation has added more suspense. The question is how after this revelation of TA how it is going to be a happy note in Part 8.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
Thanks Esther for part VII...OMG ! charu memory back ?😲😲eagerly waiting to see her reaction...😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40
thanks. happy she remembers abt thamizh .. now she needs to move on and understand gokul's love for her.

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