IIPyaar Ki Ek DastaanII KaSu FF - Part 3 & 4 UPDATED - Page 3

Oohhh... kya garma garam mulakat h 😉 dno hi ek dusre ko galat samj rhe h... koi nhi aage aage dekhte h kya hota h

Originally posted by: mansi_as18

Oohhh... kya garma garam mulakat h 😉 dno hi ek dusre ko galat samj rhe h... koi nhi aage aage dekhte h kya hota h

Okay, when she said Mein nayi aayi hoon and all that I thought he would snap back or something but he was calm I really liked that. I love the simplicity in it and ofcourse their inner selves waley talks are the highlight until they get comfortable with each other. The story is going lovely with hatred towards love and I am sure this is gonna be THE amazing pyaar ki dastaan. I hope we get to read some super cute moments and some jealousy ;)

Lovely work Urja ! More power to you :)

Lots of Pyaar

Originally posted by: Kappumyfav

Okay, when she said Mein nayi aayi hoon and all that I thought he would snap back or something but he was calm I really liked that. I love the simplicity in it and ofcourse their inner selves waley talks are the highlight until they get comfortable with each other. The story is going lovely with hatred towards love and I am sure this is gonna be THE amazing pyaar ki dastaan. I hope we get to read some super cute moments and some jealousy ;)

Lovely work Urja ! More power to you :)

Lots of Pyaar

Originally posted by: UrjaLuvsWahi

I can understand why you expected Kapil to snap back but I purposely did not show him that way because it's too unrealistic..Kapil asal zindagi mein bhi aisa nahi hai ke kisi ne kuch keh diya aur woh uske upar chad jaye..isiliye showed the thinking portion instead..Haan filhal toh bahut kuch hona baaki hai..abhi toh bas shuruwad hai..aage its gna get more interesting.. ;) thanks darling :*

Iseliye he is THE KAPIL SHARMA ⭐️ Such a brilliant personality :) Thats impressive that you took care of minor details ! Waiting for the update!!!!

Originally posted by: Kappumyfav

Iseliye he is THE KAPIL SHARMA ⭐️ Such a brilliant personality :) Thats impressive that you took care of minor details ! Waiting for the update!!!!

I know I am late but I'm back with the third chapter...Hope you guys like this part.. Im a little unsure about it..

Hae kapil kinna genuine banda h yaar... ur sumo 😆 kitni khush ho gyi... we too dont want to see kapil with other then sumona... 😉

Originally posted by: mansi_as18

Hae kapil kinna genuine banda h yaar... ur sumo 😆 kitni khush ho gyi... we too dont want to see kapil with other then sumona... 😉

This one is long...but I hope you guys like it..

PART 4

"After Sumona, I don't want to see you with anyone else" This line kept running through Sumona's head...She was confused as to why she was constantly thinking about this...Sumona thoda aaram karle warna tu pagal ho jaegi...pata nahi kya ho raha hai mujhe..baar baar yahi khayal..it was just a comment made by the judges...why does it even matter? *Shakes her head to come back to her senses* With that she went to sleep...

NEXT DAY

Kapil keeps pacing back and forth annoyed...Yeh ladki kaha reh gayi..abhi tak nahi pahaunchi...humhe rehearse bhi karna hai...

Suddenly..Sumona barges into to the rehearsal hall...

K: Kahan thi tum?

S: Kapil..

K: Aaj itni late agayi?

S: Meri baat suno

K: 15 min se main tumhara intezar kar raha hoon yahan..

S: Kapil..CHUP!

Sumona's stern tone makes him still..he freezes up and stays quiet

S: First of all..main late isiliye aayi kyunki mujhe waqt chahiye tha iss bare mein sochne ki..samajh nahi aa raha tha kya karoon..lekin maine decide kar liya hai..

Kapil gives a confused look not being able to grasp onto what's going on..

S: *Extending her hand* Mr. Sharma...Mujhse dosti karoge?

K: Sure..

Sumona, being too distracted, did not hear his answer..she went on..

Dekho main jaanti hu jabse main aayi hu tumne ek baar bhi mujhse theek se baat nahi ki..par hum koshish toh kar sakte hai na dost banne ki? *Shumona maine kaha yes..* Haan haan jaanti hu ke shayad tum mere saath dosti nahi karna chahte..pehle din se tumhe mujhse problem hai..mujhe toh yeh samajh main nahi aata ke tumhe mujhse problem hi kyun hai..aur *with a sudden realization* Kya kaha tumne??

K: Dekho main bhi bahut dino se soch raha tha iss bare mein..mujhe bhi lagta hai ke jab tak hum ek dusre ko nahi samjhenge hum as a team kaam nahi kar paenge..aur main jaanta hu ke maine bina soche samjhe tumhare saath aisa bhura behave kiya..but main bhi kya karta..jab se main iss show main aaya hoon, meri partner badalti jaa rahi hai..mushkil hota hai mere liye sab kuch khud manage karna..mujhe laga tumhara bhi experience nahi hai aur pehle kuch dino tak tumne bhi kuch khaas acha nahi kiya tha..isiliye maine socha tum bhi replace ho jaogi..but you have been putting in your efforts lately and I have realized ke mujhe tumhe ek chance deni chahiye and I know I was wrong..I'm sorry..

Sumona was trying to digest what he just said..after a few seconds...

S: *Extending her hand once again *Toh...friends?

K: Giving her a smile...grabs her hand..Friends...Chalo humne bahut time waste kar li..ab kaam karein?

S: *Giggling* Chalo..

They went on to rehearse...Sumona was improving day by day and this did not go unnoticed by Kapil..He was quite impressed by her sudden dedication to comedy..

After a successful rehearsal..they both went to their respective homes...

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S: Sharma ji...aur kitna time lagega??

K: Sorry baba bas pahaunchne hi wala hoon give me 2 mins..

She hangs up the phone..Sumona was at the cafe..waiting for Kapil to reach there..

They had been friends for 2 months now and Sumona was well aware of Kapil's habit of always being late...but still..she was starting to lose her patience..

"Waiter..one caramel latte please"

Waiter: Sure ma'am.

S: Thank you.

Just then..Kapil reached the cafe..

K: Sorry sorry..I know main phir se late ho gaya na..*with a smile* chal koi nahi..order karte hai..

S: *rolling eyes* Maine apna order de diya..tum order karlo..

K: Waiter..one chai for me..

Waiter: Coming right up Sir.

K: Thank you..

S: Kyun baar baar aisa karte ho tum...kabhi toh punctual ho jao..aajkal toh rehearsals pe bhi tumse pehle main pahaunchti hu..

K: Arre main jaan bujke thodi na late aata hu...it's a genetic default...*chuckles*

S: Ha. Ha. Ha. Not funny. *rolling her eyes*

K: Tujhe pata hai na main aisa hi hu..ab tak toh tujhe aadat pad jani chahiye...Sorry na..

Waiter arrives with both of their orders..Here u go your caramel latte and your chai..

K: Yeh kaise kaise ajeeb naam hote hai Latte...mukka...oh..mocha..cap...cappuccino..naam bhi liya nahi jaata mujhse..mere liye toh chai hi theek hai..

Sumona bites her lips from the inside to stop herself from laughing..She always found him and his antics to be the funniest...itna late aaya hai thoda bahut nakhre karna toh banta hai..

Kapil did not like seeing Sumona in a bad mood...Shumona tera coffee ho gaya???

S: Hmm ho gaya.

K: grabs her hand...chal ab..

Kapil takes Sumona to the ice cream stall...he knew that when Sumona will see the ice cream she won't be able to resist it..it was her favorite..

S: *Excited* ICE CREAM?!!!!

Kapil smiles..

S: Bhaiya ek mango ice cream dena..turning to Kapil..tum khaoge?

K: Nahi main theek hu..

The man hands over the ice cream to her to which she immediately takes in her hands...she quickly unwraps it and slowly eats the ice cream..wanting to taste every bit of it...she turns and offers Kapil some..Kapil leans to take a bite..Sumona quickly takes and eats it herself..she laughs her heart out...

S: Acha sorry..lo..

K: Nahi mujhe nahi chahiye..looks to the other direction..

S: Arre lo na..jyada bhav mat khao..Theek hai phir...

When she's about to take the spoonful of ice cream away from Kapil's mouth..he immediately eats it...

They both bursted out into laughter...

Your feedback please! I really hope you guys liked this one...I didn't think last chapter was good enough so tried to make this one more interesting...