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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sandhirpalak

Hi buddy😊you are a awesome writer. I think Kapil should replace you with Preeti and Neeti. I love your story😳. (Kiss I ko Batana mat😉)


hahhaaha...tht was a huge compliment ...thnks yra ,...plz ask kapil - main to kabse ho ready taiyar ...bs vo bula le 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hello frnds , thnku all for ur love and lovely reviews ...
Hope u all will like this part too , enjoy

Chapter - 5

Day 3
9:00 a.m
" dooriaa bhi hain zaroori , zaroori h ye dooria " track plays
Everyone wakes up and dances however kapil chooses to sit on his bed only , he watches sumona dancing happily with karan and other gang.
" vaah big boss , kya gana bajaya subh subh, aisa lg rha h mere par h has rhe ho ...hehehe(he fakes laughter) ...kahe ko zaroori h dooriaa ...mko nhi chahiye aisi dooriaa...hey big boss mata ye pita jo bhi aap h , aisa kuch dooria vala kaam mat dena mere or sumona ko , vrna meri bhi big boss k ghr se miloo k duriaa ho jyngi ...bhaag jaaunga yha se , pehle h bta rha hoon ...( he looks towards sumona ) or isko dekho kaise naach rhi karan k sath ...jaise yha DID chal rha ho ...huhhh...kl to bda bol rhi , kapil main apko chodkr karan k pass nhi jaoungi ( he mimics her in funny way) ...jhoothi " kapil mutters to himself ..keeping his voice as low as possible.
Sumo sees this and passes an enquiring look ...he fakes his broad smile to her (irritatingly)
Sumo gets confused but she ignores and again gets busy in dancing .
Music off.
Sumo heads towards her bed and asks kapil while searching for hand cuff.
Sumo- " kapil aap kyu nhi aye dance krne , sb kr rhe the"
Kapil - " kyunki main hritik nhi ho jo sb mere dnce se impress hote , tuu ...tuu kyu puch rhi vaise ...tune kon sa mujhe miss kia ...tu to busy h thi"
Sumona finds handcuff . she stands still folding her hand across her chest , looks directly into his for a minute with " like really !!!! main busy thi " look .
Kapil understood she didn't liked wht he said.
Kapil - " bs ghoor mat aise , vo mujhe dnce nhi aata"
Elli who was listening their convo joins in .
Elli - "aisaa nhi h kapil , tm khud ko underestimate krte ho ...yaad h bum bum pr kitna achaaa dance kra tha tmne...thoda tym lga tha sikhne me but tmne kr lia tha,"
Kapil - " srf maine nhi hmne achaa dance kia tha ,kyaa sexy dnce tha tmhraa ...or vaise khoobsurat ladkio k saath mera dance nikal jaata h isliye vo dnce achaa ho gya tha..u know na i m very talented bs koi talnt nikalne vala chahiye " he says in his typical flirt tone.
Elli - yaad h ahmad ne kaise tmhe sikhaya tha , kitne takes liye the tmne or vo mere baal baar baar phass rhe the vo turn me , ...kitna maza aaya tha
Kapil -" haa mujhe bdaaa gussa aya tha baalo pr kyunki main nhi chahta k hmare beech kisi k bhi baal aye ,main to apni chaati k baal bhi hatwa k aaya tha us din ..tmhe pta nhi h "
Elli laughs out loudly at this.
This whole convo irritates sumona to a great extent ...she wants to leave but she cannot as per rules. Kapil was about to speak up something else but she cuts off him in between .
" aaa..kapil muje brush krna h ,kafi der ho gyi h ,chale ??" She says in extra sweet manner and then she passes him fake smile.
Kapil - " arry ruk na yhi...ek din brush nhi kregi to tere daant kale nhi ho jaynge , ...or tre to vaise bhi kale h ...kya farak pdega , baith yhi "
Elli giggles at his remarks.
She now passes him very angry look .
" arry chal rha hoon pagli , main to mazzak kr rha tha , mereko bhi brush krna h ...tereko ptaa nhi h but meri battisii(smile) pr karodo(crores) ldkiaa fida h " he says while getting up .
Thy wear their handcuff .
She walks fastly deliberately . kapil experience sudden jerk ...he tries best to match her speed but dares not to hold her hand after that bathroom incident . thy reach to garden area ...kapil could no longer match up her speed so he stops . sumona turns nd says " kya hua chaliye " .
Kapil - " oyyee main thakk gya ...dekh kutte k tarah haaaf rha hoon " he takes her hand and places on his chest . however she immediately takes her hand down.
" main tera haath apne haath me le loon , plzzz??? "
Kapil asks sweetly
Sumo - " haath me kyu ...apne muhh me le lo "
Kapil - " muh me haath kyu loon , tu con sa sauce lgati k jo taste achaa hoga...or bhi bdi tasty tasty cheeze h tere pass vo de de...mtlb tera rosogulla ...kitna tasty hota h "
Thn she herself holds his hands
" chaliye ab , bhut ho gyi bkwass" she says and head to washroom area.
They finish their chores and come out in garden for a walk.
Kapil- " ek baat puchu "
Sumo- " hmmm"
Kapil - " main pehle bhi tera itna mazzak banata tha , tu pehle gussa nhi hoti thi ...ab main zara sa kuch khta hoon or tu bhadak jaati h ,...kya hua naraaz h kya mujhse "
Sumo- " naraaz nhi hoon kapil ,...aap pehle manju k mazzak udate the...vo ek show tha kapil "
Kapil - " ye bhi show h hai pagli , dekh likha h gate pr B I G B O S S( he spells it) - big boss , bada h famous h tune dekhaa nhi "
Sumo smiles at his reply But tries not to show him ...she actually enjoys khit pit with him .
Sumo - " kapil ...yr kya h aap "
Kapil - " ok thik h main nhi krta tang baba ...main to apna smjh kr krta hoon , but ab log shyad badal gye ,paraye ho gye h " he emotionally blackmails her .
Sumo- " aisa nhi h ,main to apki apni hoon" She winks at him
Kapil - " achaaa ,kitna apna smjhoo main phir tmhe ??"
Announcement -
"Big boss chahte h k aap sbhi contestant 2 min me hall me ikhata ho jaye ."
Everyone moves to hall.
"Big boss me ab wakt h luxury budget task ka , eizaaz aap store room me pade scroll ko laye or sabke samne pdhe "
Eizaz goes in , takes scroll and comes out.
" big boss house me ye apka pehla luxury budet task h .
Is task me 2 team hongi ...team A or Team B or 2 levels honge.
Pehle level me team k sare member perform krnge . dono teams me best pair select kiye jayenge jo level 2 pr ek dusre k khilaf compete krnge . jo bhi team vijeta hogi srf usi team k members luxury items ko use kr skte h .
Ab aap apni team khud divide kre 10 min me garden area me pahuche .

All the best
Big boss " He reads out .
Contestants divide their team . kapil choses to in opposite team as of karan . karan elli are in team A nd kapil sumona in team B .thy reach garden area.
BB
" contestants ab wakt h level 1 task ka -
" ball nikaal basket me daal " - hr ek pair me se ek member ko swimming pool se ball(table tennis balls) nikalni h nd apne partner ko deni h jo k ye balls samne rkhi basket me dalega . 2 min me jo sbse jada balls basket me dalega vo is task k winner hoga ...lkin shart(condition) ye h k isme aap apne haath ya pair ka istmaal nhi kr skte ...srf muh ka istemaal krna h , all the best "

(...Everyone was surprised , some were uncomfortable ...eizaz partner refused to do task. Meanwhile kapil was enjoying , he remembered his last night kiss and blushed . ...)
" waahh re big boss aapne to mri sun li...dooria mita di sari...ab to nazdeekiaa h nazdeekia...task bhi achaa h ...hmne to pehle h practice kr li h , hm h jeetnge isme to "
Kapil - chal sumona , aaj dikha h de duniya valo ko apne bde hoontho ka kamaal ,ek baar me sari pool k balls muh me adjust kr lena...tere me to space bhi bhut h "
" or ab to main iski gurantee bhi de skta hoon" he thinks.
Sumo- phir se shuru aap.
Task begins.
Team A performs first.
It is now Team B turn .
Sumo sits down ( kapil too sits on knees as thy r tied together )nd picks up ball using her mouth ...thn she turns to kapil
( she was little hesistant ...so she looked for a while )
Kapil - " sumo de naa ,task isi janam me khtm krna h "
He herself bends towards her ...takes ball from her mouth.( since ball's size ws very small , his lips touched her slightly ...she shuddered on tht feel , however kapil was jst enjoying effect he had on her...he ignored and continued his task)
Sumo takes another ball and gives to him ...lips touched again ...she could not concentrate on task .
Karan - " sumo common ...jldi jldi "
Kapil gets irritated by karan's cheering ...
" tereko maine kl comfortable kr to dia tha...tu kyu focus nhi kr rhi ...dekh main kitna enjoy kr rha , jaldi jaldi kr , focus sumona " kapil says
Sumo gets a bit motivated , keeps her feelings at side and focuses her on her task
She now collects ball very speedily and gives to kapil...
10 9 countdown begins ...sumo gets tensed and in hurry she bits kapil's lower lip by mistake .
Kapil -" ouuch"
" sorry !! Maine bhi apko comfortable kr to dia tha ignore " she says nd turns towards pool .
5
She collcts one more ball, turns to kapil.
3 2
Kapil hurriedly takes it from her .
1
Nd he puts it in basket .

Big boss -
" level 1 yhi samapt ( end ) hota h ...Team A se karan elli ne sbse jaada ball collect kiye . team B se 16 ball jama krte hue (there is pause for 4 sec ) ...kapil or sumona best performers bante h ( kapil side hugs sumo , and is very happy since he collected 1 ball extra compared to karan)
Aap dono jodio ko mubarak ...aap dono ab level 2 pr pahuchte h , level 2 10 min k baad start hoga "


Taa-daaa...hope u liked it .
Stay tuned to know wht happens on next level.


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Posted: 9 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: aashup

sharam aa rhi h😳hehehe...what a scene...mazzzaagya...bathroom romance ;) sumona teasing kapil...kapil ki shudden kiss...sumona damcing on bed...kapil ke dialogues, sumona ke dialogues...sb kuch sb kuch...too good🤣👏👍🏼luved it beabes...update it asap...❤️


hehehe...usne towel pehen to lia ...ab to mat sharmao ...
thnku yr itni tareef k liye ...i hope aage bhi aise h achaa lge sbko
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wait wait wait you are a human or an angel 😛 you know what it's wonderful dear. You are a wonderful writer love you yaar. I have no words to explain Angel. 😛 Ab itna accha compliment diya hai toh dusara Bhi aaj hi update karo na 😆 pls 😭 waiting for next desperately 😭jaldi




LOTS LOTS LOTS LOTS OF OF OF OF PYAAR PYAAR PYAAR PYAAR PYAAR PYAAR😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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ahem ahem...is kapil cracking double meaning jokes in this ff..am i getting it right, if he is doing so...babes than to i'm luving it 😉 you know i'm kind of naughty girl...nyway what an update...luved it...or kya aap kehti h that i am good at creating humour madam khud ko dekho...damn your kapil's dialogue 🤣...khair uddate the next part soon bby waiting eagerly
luv you :*
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sandhirpalak

Wait wait wait you are a human or an angel😛you know what it's wonderful dear. You are a wonderful writer love you yaar. I have no words to explain Angel.😛Ab itna accha compliment diya hai toh dusara Bhi aaj hi update karo na😆pls😭waiting for next desperately😭jaldi




LOTS LOTS LOTS LOTS OF OF OF OF PYAAR PYAAR PYAAR PYAAR PYAAR PYAAR😳


hahahaa i am human only babes , thnku for lots and lots of pyaar ...itna juth bolne k jarurat nhi thi...update vaise bhi mil jata 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: aashup

ahem ahem...is kapil cracking double meaning jokes in this ff..am i getting it right, if he is doing so...babes than to i'm luving it😉you know i'm kind of naughty girl...nyway what an update...luved it...or kya aap kehti h that i am good at creating humour madam khud ko dekho...damn your kapil's dialogue🤣...khair uddate the next part soon bby waiting eagerly

luv you :*


u got that absolutely right ...ab kappu sumo k saath thoda jada comfortable hai to uski andar k naughtiness nikal aati h ,
thnku thnku ...ab itni bhi tareef bhi na kro...mujhe sharam aa rhi h 😳
bas updating abhii 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello friends , thnk u all for lovely lovely reviews ,i m back with update ...hope u'll lyk this part too .
Enjoy:-)


chapter -6

10 mins later -
" karan -elli, kapil - sumona ab bari h leve 2 task - " patli galliyaan " k
Swimming pool pr 2 iron planks(those were about 9 inches wide ) rkhe hue hue . apko ko us pr barefoot khade rehna h , jo sbse jada time plank pr khada rhta h vo vijeta (winner) hoga "
Level -2 starts
Both jodis stand on plank .
1 hr passed
Planck becomes hot under sunlight . kapil could not bear that heat .he shakes his leg evry now nd thn .
Sumo - " kya hua "
Kapil - " abhi to kuch nhi hua, lkin thodi der me mere pair k naan bn jaynge ...kitna jal rha h "
Sumo - "ha mereko bhi , lkin aap hiliye mat gir skte h hm log "
Kapil - " main kr to rha ho na try ...nhi ho rha "
Sumo - " arry ...ek min " she thinks for while nd thn says " aap mujhe shoulder se pakdiye nd then ek ek kr k pair pool me daliye ...thoda thnda lgega"
Kapil did same as instructed ...
He feels relaxed now ...
" uuuhhh...aahhh...ab thoda thnda lg rha h, aisa lg rha h main thar desert se direct ladhak pahuch gya , chal tu bhi kr le "
Sumo holds him tightly and puts her feet in pool . she somehow loses balance and ws about to fall ...but kapil grabs her waist in meantime nd pulls her up .
" tere se ye bhi nhi ho rha ,dusra pair daal idhar araam se lkin " kapil utters .
She again dips her feet in ,this tym being more careful .
2 hrs passed more .
" kapil sumona ,karan elli ...ab ap logo ko apni position change krni h ...ab ek jodi k ek tym pr srf 2 pair plank pr ho skte . "
Karan immediately stands on one leg ...elli does same .seeing them kapil too stands in one leg.
" tu dekh kya rhi ...tu bhi kr ,main iss karan se harna nhi chahta " she says
"Kapil aap pair neeche rkhiye "she orders
Kapil refuses to do so ...but however puts his leg down on being further insisted.
Sumona moves close to him ...takes his free hand and puts on her waist .
" yeh dekho ...ldkio k bhi smjh nhi ata ...yha task chal rha or inko romance aa rha h " kapil thinks
Next she stands on kapil's feet clutching his tshirt tightly.
She looks up nd says- " dekho ek time pr srf 2 pair plank pr h hmari jodi k "
Kapil - " vahh re sumona ,tune dimaag kb khareeda ??"
Sumo - " jaise h aapne becha maine khreed lia"
Kapil - " vahh aise kitna araam h ...or vo dekho tera dost bandar bnkr khada h ...mri elli ko bhi bandaria bna dia "
Sumo looks at them and smiles.
Karan too changes his position aftr watching their strategy.
Kapil - " churaa lia, hmara tareeka chura lia tere dost ne...or dekh elli ko kaise chipak rha "
Sumo- "ye baat karan bhi bol skta apke liye "
Kapil - " ha to teri meri baat alag h , tu meri " he stops
Sumo understands it and smiles . later she keeps her head on his chest nd thy stand in same position .
1 hr later -

Kapil notices sumo who is shaking legs evry now and then . she looks tensed.
Kapil - " kya kr rhi h , dono girenge neeche"
Sumo looks up nd says in low tone - "kapil mujhe pani peene jana h , jaldi "
Kapil - " to pee lee ..itna sara to h "
He looks at her tensed face ...and her legs thn he understood wht she meant .
(It was signature dialogue of kapil whenever he needed to go to washroom .)
"Abhi" kapil says with concern .
" hmmm" she mutters .
Kapil twist his ankle ...which breaks their balance nd thy fall in pool.
Karan -elli hi five as thy win.
Kapil- " chal jldi"
(...Sumo understood he did this deliberately ...she was so touched to see his concern for her , she knew how badly kapil wanted to win from karan , but he did this jst to save her from embarrassment...)
Nd he takes her to washroom ...this tym being faster than her.
2 mins later thy come out.
Announcement -
" karan elli apko congrts ...aapne ye task jeeta h to ab luxury items team A use kregi . ...or kyunki aap dono vijeta h (winners) to apko 24 hrs k liye partner swap krne k permission milti h "
Karan - vaise to main elli k sath bhut khush ho but 1 din k baat h to main sumona k sath pair up hona chahta hoon .
Volcano burst inside kapil ...he was very angry .
Elli too chooses kapil
( sumona didn't liked it but somehow due to incidents tht happened between her and kapil ...her insecurities partially came to rest )
Sumo goes to karan , nd elli to kapil. Thy wear their handcuffs .
Sumo goes with karan to change . kapil too follows them . kapil stands outside her bathroom to make sure karan don't help her in case she needs any.
Elli - tm dusre vale bathroom me kr lo.
Kapil - nhi maine isi me krna h ...tu ruk na 2 min plz
Eli sits near karan , he mutters to her "ajeeb h ye ekdum "
Sumo comes out and kapil goes in to change.
Thy all come out , have dinner and chit chat sessions .
11 p.m Bedroom
Sumo is on karan's bed ...she is chatting with him. Kapil elli are on kapil's bed. They are chatting about the fun they had on set while shooting kkpk.
(However kapil was distracted by karan and sumo . his whole concentration was on to see if karan is too close to her or not , if he is holding her. ...bla bla...he looked them every now and then
Sumo could feel his intense gaze on her . ...she looked twice towards him but he turned whenever she looked , she then ignored ...she too wasn't happy seeing elli with kapil ...but what kapil did for her made her believe tht he cares for her very much ..and tht she needs to be insecure everytime..)
Lights off ...
Kapil instantly removes his handcuff and asks eli to sleep.
Elli leaves and moves to her own bed.
Kapil lies down and waits for sumona ,but didn't came. He sees karan elli and sumona chit chatting .
(...He wanted to ask sumona to come to him ...but couldn't say that so directly...)
He says - " soye or baakio ko bhi sone de "
3 of them got his taunt so sumo gets up and moves to her bed.
Sumo lie down .
"Good night kapil " she says
(He pretended to be asleep and didn't respond)
" kahe k good night ,sala isse achaa to din h tha " he thinks.
Sumo covers herself totally with blanket .
She quietly slides her hand to his bed , holds his hand and slides it back under her blanket .
She kisses his hand gently . "ab to good ho gyi na apki night " she speaks loudly enough for kapil to hear it .
Kapil smiles realising how well she understands him.
Kapil - "chal chal , night to meri good hogi h , meri patner aj itni sexy thi k mereko ko sapne bhi rangeen aynge"
Sumo - " achaa to jaiye usi k pass "
thy continue their tu tu main main ...and finally doze off later.

Taa- daaa , hope u liked this part too . next part is going to be full of ladai jgdha ...hope u 'll lyk that too.
Next part me thoda time lgega ...tb tk stay tuned .
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
Awww... read part 5 and 6 eeksath... uff awesome updates... lobed every kasu moment... and the tasks ☺️
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
Amazing chapters
Loved both 5th and 6th. I am in love with this ff

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