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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: aashup

Okay if this is because of us than I want pat on my shoulder😉wah kya heera dhunda h hmne bt no babes its your talent we just enjoyed your writing that's why we told you to write to basically we are lalchi you see😉now coming back to your story i swear even I was thinking of this same idea serously i am not making this up but I don't watch bb so do not have much idea how it goes but I think you do watch it dialogues se lag rha h vese it's a bit difficult plot but I am sure you'll rock... tumse better is story ko koi likh hi nhi skta you know what I like most about you... Your punch lines they are just out of the world... So basically tum to cha gai... I am luving this story and eagerly waiting for next update

Luv you girly :*

ufff so much tareefs of mine...i can't handle ...thnku dear thnks a lot...ha hmne bb dekha h but koi season pura nhi dekha ...khi thoda thoda dekha h to bs usse idea le rhe ...yes ab ye plot difficult lg rha h bcoz i wnt to potray big boss properly ...jaisa vha hota h ...uske chakkar me boring ho jata kbhi kbhi ...but i trying ...hope u'll lyk this part too
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Posted: 9 years ago
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P.s : hello frnds , thnku so much for encouraging me . ignore grammatical mistakes , there will be many ... I think ye wala thoda boring ho gya but hope u 'll lyk this part too , enjoy :-)

Bb house Day 2
9:00 a.m
Dil ab yaaro ka ho gya paro ka plays loudly ...lights gets switched on ...
Contestants wake up lazily ,but later on thy all dance madly ...karan notices kapil nd sumo still sleeping . he and elli go to sumo's side to wake her up and see that kapil is holding sumo's hand while sleeping . he smiles seeing the scene ..."in dono ko shi me shaadi kr leni chahiye " he thought .
Elli - ye dono kitne cute h
Karan - hm bhi ho skte h agar tm chaho to ...he winks and then makes puppy face
Elli smiles at his antics . "nhi rhne do " she says
Karan sits down on sumo's bed nd shakes her
She wakes up with eyes still half shut she greets " good mrng karan elli "
She tries to rub her eyes but is not able to move her right hand ...thereby she opens her eyes only to find to kapil is holding her hand ...she immediately frees her hands off . however it is too late by now as karan elli already noticed that ...nd thy are smiling idiotically ,teasing her eyes to eyes.
Sumo - kya hua tm dono ko ?? Kapil to so rhe phir kisne joke suna dia , itna has rhe ho dono ...
She is really irritated by those teasing glares she received .
Karan - arry sharma ji me itni power h k vo sote sote bhi hassa skte h ...isiliye vo comedy k king h .
Sumo understood wht he meant .
Karan - vaise kapil ko uthaa do ...kapil k biwi ...agar time pr nhi uthe to ghar k rules k ulanghan ho jayega
Kapil wakes up himself listening so much noise ...nd first thing he notices is karan sitting on sumo's bed .
" hey bhgwan subh subh kiski shakl dekh li ...aj kya keher ane vala h " he thought .
Elli- bas chlo ab sb uth gye h...now get up ready fast .
Sumo kapil wear their handcuff, kapil as usually holds sumo's hand to counter balance their speed .
Everyone divides duties among themselves and performs there chores perfectly.
6 p.m
Announcement -
Big boss chahte h k aap sab log activity area me 2 min me pahunche
Kapil - ek to ye big boss chahte bada h , pta nhi kya chahte h
Thy all laugh at his remark and rush towards activity area .
"Karan big boss chahte h k jk scroll apke samne pda h use padhe ...or hone vale task k jankari de "
Karan takes scroll and reads loudly
" priya contestants
Aap sbka big boss k pehle nomination task me swaagat h .apke samne kuch chits pdi h ... jin 2 jodi k chit nikalti h unke beech muqabla hoga . jeetne vali jodi 2 hafte k liye safe hogi or harne vali 1 hafte k liye nominated hogi .
Ab aap chits nikal skte h .
Good luck big boss"
Eizaz takes out 2 chits and reads : kapil sumona and karan - elli .
Big boss-
" kapil sumona aap dono samne chair pr baith jaiye "
Thy both move forward nd sit on chair which is kept there .
1 man enters from another door in activity room with one box .
He keeps thing on side table.
Big boss -" kapil sumona "
Both - "ji bb"
Bb- "ye task sumona k liye h , vo is task ko aap dono k liye perform krengi , aap vapis apni jagh pr jaa skte h "
(Kapil relaxes "chlo badhiya mere se vaise bhi nhi hote task vask " He thought.
Kapil - chal sumona , tu task kr (he taps her shoulder) main aram krta hoon .all the best. (with that he stands to leave and about to take off their handcuff .)
" sumona apke samne table pr 1 design pda h ...apko apne haath pr big boss ka tatoo krvana h "
Kapil again sits listening announcement .
Sumo stands up , moves towards table , picks up design and comes back to her chair.
It is BiG bOsS tatoo
Tattoo is approx 6 4 inches in size ...it is quite big enough.
Kapil gets shock seeing tatoo's size . he holds her hand tightly.
(He didn't wnted to see her taking any pain for sake of game nd nominations)
K- nhi ...mana kr de ...ye sab krne k koi jarurat nhi h .
Sumo - lkin main ye kr loongi . maine pehle bhi tatoo krvaye h . ye task h kapil ...hm dono nominate ho jaynge remember ?
Kapil - ha bda remember( he said making irritating face )...maine kha naa nhi krna ...nominate ho jayenge ek baar kuch nhi ho rha,
Sumo - lkin kyu jb main kr loongi .
Kapil - maine tera ehsaan nhi lena zindgi is liye . vaise bhi tu paagal h ? Teri body se bda ye tatoo h ...dhak jayegi puri k puri . or tune jaada zid k na to yha se niklne k baad teri puri body khud tatoo chapoonga ...vo bhi injection se .
He says " big boss hm dono ye task nhi krna chahte "
Big boss " kapil ye baat sumona ko khud kehni pdegi k vo task nhi krna chahti "
Sumo knows there is point of arguing with him so " i quit big boss , main ye task nhi krna chahti "
Big boss " sumona aapka ye final decision h ??"
Sumo - " ji bb"
Big boss " kapil sumona aap dono ab is week k liye direct nominate hote h ...or kyunki aapne blackout kia h to aise case me karan elli is proyigata h vijeta bnte h or 2 hafte k safe hote h ...karan elli congrts "
Karan - elli " thnks bb"
Evryone cngrts karn elli and thy head to hall .
Sumo looks to kapil with corner eye .
Kapil -aise kya dekh rhi ...aise gale lga legi ( and with that he hugs her)
Sumona - chodo mujhe chodo ...she jerks him ...main kr leti na vo hm nominate nhi hote aise .
Kapil - ja tu marr jakr fir ...bna le tatoo , fir pura din dard me rona .
he leaves her hand .
( she understood tht it was his concern and that's y he didn't wnted her to do task)
Sumona - achaa sorry ...nhi kr rhi ,aise kya naraaz ho rhe .
She tries to hold his hand which he generally holds but he resists ...
S- " arry bola to sorry " she then grabs his hand nd holds it tightly and passes him smile .
9:00 p.m
It's time for sunday night with salman .
Everyone properly dressed in beautiful attire sits in hall in front of tv and wait for salman to come .
Salman - namaskaar sbko ,kya bat h aj sb bhut khoobsurat lg rhe ...
Contestants- thnku
Sallu - to kaisa rha ap sbka pehla din
C- vry nice , sbne enjoy kia ...
Eizaz - ha bhai bs raat ko thoda distrb hua ...kuch awaaze aa rhi thi ( he said this deliberately to blame kapil for distrbnce)
Salman- hahahahaha...raat ko aisi awaaze to normal h vaise to ( he winks ) but yha bb house me nhi chlega ...vaise mai apko bta doon k ye awazze kapil sumona k thi .
Ha to aap dono se main jan na chahta hoon k itni raat ko ap aisa kya kr rhe the k aisi awwz aayu jisse eizaaz distrb ho gye .
Sumona looks towards kapil ..she gets very embarrased by sallu's question . kapil understood tht .
Kapil - hm pakadam pkdai khel rhe the bhai , vo mereko maar rhi thi ...mereko neend nhi aa rhi thi to hm log bahar baith gye ...fir hm log subh vpis gye room me.
He clears everything so that their be no doubt on thm .
(..No one knew this fact tht thy were not in room whole night so everyone ws surprised ...)
Sallu - ha vaise bhi tm dono mia biwi ho privacy to chahiye hoti h naa ...eizaaz aage se koi awaaz aaye to apne kaan bnd kr k so jana . Everyone laughs out loudly ( sumo however ws embarrassed naturally )
Sallu - to kapil aapse dusra question , aj k task me apne sumona ko kyu mana kia jbk unhone ye saaf saaf kha tha k vo task kr skti h
Kapil - main nhi chahta tha k vo ye sb kre srf ek task k liye
Salman says aggressively - " srf ek task , yha ek ek task bahut important hota h ...aap aise hukum nhi chla skte kisi pr , aap jitne popular h shayad vo utni nhi h ...agr vo vote out ho gyi to fir aap kya krnge ...(he pauses for a second) ya aap k planning thi ye sab ek honhaar contestant ko nominations me bhjne k "
(...His statements didn't get well down with kapil he was very angry on salman for accusing him of saazish ...he was about to react but...)
Sumo holds his hand and signals him to stay calm .
Kapil - " nhi aisa kuch nhi tha , vo sumo bhi janti h " he says calmly .
Salman - or sumona aap !! Aapko dekh kr lgta h k aap abhi bhi kapil k biwi mode me hai , is game u hve to play individually , u hve to take decision for urself , ap kisi k upar dependent nhi ho skte ...kyunki y big boss h yha to log rishtedari , dosti sb bhula dete h ..or ye main apne bb k experience se keh rha hoon . hope apko smjh aa gya hoga.
(Sumo didn't wanted to argue with him so)
she says - i can gurantee hmari dosti itni kamjor nhi h ... ..yha se niklne k baad bhi vaise h rhegi. Thnks for advice sir , i 'll follow them .
Salman - good !!
He talks to other contstnts too before bidding bye !!
Evryone gets busy in there own wrk , some head to kitchen , some to garden and others to bedroom . kaSu r still there sitting on sofa .kapil is lost in his thoughts (sumona knew kapil was angry so she stayed quiet )
Sumona - kapil washroom
Thy get up and move towards washroom area sumo takes of handcuff , mike and was about to shut door .
Kapil - tujhe bhi lgta h maine janbuz kr tujhe roka task krne ko ...tu sach bta tujhe kya lgta main kbhi aisa kr skta hoon ???
(..Kapil was deeply hurt by salman statements, he didn't wnted his nd sumo frndship to get spoiled bcz of this show...)
Sumo - kapil mujhe pta h aisa kuch nhi h , main sapne me bhi aisa kuch nhi soch skti .
Kapil takes out his mike and enters in same washroom . he locks door .
Sumo - ye kya kapil ??
Kapil - agar tu janti thi to tune ek baar bhi kyu nhi kha salman ko .
Sumo- achaa main kya kehti ?? K kapil mra bura nhi kyu nhi soch skta ?? Kyu vo meri itni care krta h ?? Boliye kya bolti main ... ...main kisi ko kyu kuch bhi clarification doon ...Main kuch bhi bolti us wqt salman phir aage or kuch bolte ...fir kya bolti main ??
For minute thy stay quiet
Kapil understood wht sumo ws trying to say there was no point of arguing back then as matter could have become more complicated then .
Sumo- one thing i want to say ...i like to independent in all fields but i m with u i don't mind being dependent on u . i absolutely don't mind following ur orders mre sharma jii ...she smiles
Kapil finally relaxes aftr hearing this ...she understands him more than he himself does . he hugged her tight .
Tears of joy escape from sumo's eyes .
Sumo - kapil ...chlo bahar jao i have to change ...pta nhi bahar sb kya soch rhe honge ...ik to pehle se badnaam h ab or ho jaynge
Kapil - (grabs her from waist pulls her close to him ) kyu isme badnaami kaisi ...mia biwi khte h sb hme itna to bnta h .
( he bends down and slowly reduces distance between their faces. Sumo first gets nervous but then she relaxes .she knew hr hero don't hve guts to kiss yet .)
Sumo puts her hands around his neck and locks them .
Sumo - achaa to chliye bahr garden me chalte h ... ..."khullam khulla pyaar krnge hm dono " she sings
Kapil - baap re !!! Tu mere se bhi jada bhari padi ...main ja rha ...mrko apni izzat bhut pyaari h ...he says so crossing his hands around his chest .
And then comes out .
(...Karan and elli were too in bathroom . thy were both assuming their own stories about wht was going on behind close door ...
Karan - hey bhgwaan !! Ye kyaa kyaa dikha dia mujhe ...ye logo ko kya ho rha ...bathroom me !! Chiii chiii chiii...
Elli - hahhaaha...kaltuk aa gya h karan
Karan- haiiinn kaltuk ????? ...kalyug h elli ...)
Kapil comes out and sees karan elli laughing .
" iski shakal dekhi thi tbhi ye sab hua aaj ...manhoos insaan ...ab baith k yha has rha h ...marr kyu nhi jata tym nikaal kr ...uff kya romantic mood tha sb bekaar kr dia isne " he thought .
Karan elli - ahemmm ahemmm
Kapil comes out of his thought .
Thy pass teasing glares which irritates kapil and he sits on sofa avoiding thm .

Taaa- daaa
Hope u enjoyed this one !! Stay tuned to see wht happens next .








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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hahaha pta h mujhe kya soch k hasi aa rhi h hm dono ki story m bechare karan ki lag rhi h🤣 vo baat alag h dono k karan alag h:) by god kamal... I luved this part, the best line bb chahte boht h 🤣
Wow yaar i'm very much keen to know ki ab aage kya hoga
Please do update it soon or don't worry bilkul boring nhi hogi ye story... balki I think you are making it interesting with every chapter 👍🏼

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Posted: 9 years ago
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That was such a nice update... aww dno ko ek dusre ki kitni fikr h... karan ur elli... 🤣 dno koi mauka nhi chhodte h kasu ko tease karne ka...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Yeh kapil bhi na..ittu sa bhi guts nahi hai ke kiss hi kar de hahahaha..im looking forward to what happens next..they shld take off their mokes more often 😉😉😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thoda sa wait Kishmish. In a hurry right now. Will come back, Read it again & then comment karungi :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: UrjaLuvsWahi

Yeh kapil bhi na..ittu sa bhi guts nahi hai ke kiss hi kar de hahahaha..im looking forward to what happens next..they shld take off their mokes more often😉😉😉


krega urja krega...abhi bichara haath pdkne me ghabra rha tm kiss k baat kr rhi, waise tm aashirwaad do hme ...fir dekhna kappu ko with family bahar nikalenge .
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kappumyfav

Thoda sa wait Kishmish. In a hurry right now. Will come back, Read it again & then comment karungi :)


jlddi aao i m waiting for ur comment ...lovely comments honge hme pta h 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: aashup

Hahaha pta h mujhe kya soch k hasi aa rhi h hm dono ki story m bechare karan ki lag rhi h🤣 vo baat alag h dono k karan alag h:) by god kamal... I luved this part, the best line bb chahte boht h🤣

Wow yaar i'm very much keen to know ki ab aage kya hoga
Please do update it soon or don't worry bilkul boring nhi hogi ye story... balki I think you are making it interesting with every chapter👍🏼


ha true ...dono taraf se kapil karans k bjaa rha ...thnku yr for alwys being so encouraging, luv u for this ...i'll update it soon pkka
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: mansi_as18

That was such a nice update... aww dno ko ek dusre ki kitni fikr h... karan ur elli... 🤣 dno koi mauka nhi chhodte h kasu ko tease karne ka...

hahaha 😃 ...fikar se bhare pde h dono ...ha karan elli k rkha h hai tease krne k liye ...
thnku for lovinn it ..

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