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P.s - hello frnds , frst of all sorry for late update i was very busy yesterday .
Thnku u all for lovely reviews .hope i could entertain u guys with coming parts too. This part is little dramatic .hope u'll like.
Enjoy :)
Chapter -7
Day - 4
Lights on , music on
"Tere sang yaara , khush rang bahara , tu raat baigaani main zaid sitara" plays
Kapil wakes up and sees sumona . he smiles seeing her sleeping peacefully .
" ohh tere sang yaara ,khush rang bahara ...main tera ho jaoon jo tu kr de ishara"
Sumona too wakes up.
"Vahh big boss kya shi gana lagaya h " he thinks
He too starts humming song " oh tere sang yaara"
He then sees karan and it is then it strikes his mind that sumo is no longer his partner.
" bhakkk , big boss kyaaa gana lgya (he says irritatingly ) ...kahe k tere sang , vo mere sang vali to kisi or sang , kisi or k mere sang ...ye sang sang k chakkar me mera tang tang ho gya h " he mutters to himself
Everyone is doing ball dance ...since song is romantic. Sumo gets up and joins too . kapil sees karan approaching sumo. He jumps in between them ...face towards sumo , takes her hand in his hand and starts dancing .
( sumo mentally smiles seeing him insecure )
" tu bula rhi thi na kl dance k liye , maine socha teri ichaa puri kr doon ")
He says while dancing .
Sumo wraps her hands around his neck .
Sumo-" ha lkin kl to koi keh rha tha k yha DID nhi chal rha jo vo dnce kre...kon tha vo...ummm...ohhh vo to aap h the "
Kapil- "tere jaise h insaan h mujhe pasand nhi h , arry dance dil se krna chahiye , DID ya CID dekh kr nhi "
Karan who was listening their whole convo says- " baba kapil k jai "
This irritates kapil and he stares sumo- " ye lichad tera h dost h "
Sumo giggles .
Song off .
Everyone moves towards their bed , wear their handcuff.
Kapil doesn't feel good seeing her with someone else .
10 a.m
Captain calls them in hall and allotes duties . kapil elli are given cooking duties and washing dishes is given to sumo -karan.
12 p.m
Karan sumo are sitting on bench in garden talking to each other. Kapil elli are in kitchen preparing lunch for all .
Kapil could see sumo through window . he is constantly peeping outside . "dekho kaise maje le rhi mausum k , pura ghar chodkr garden h mila baithne ko , or kyu nhi dil garden garden jo ho rha hoga , ...ruk beta karan tu toh ...tere hare bhare garden ko maine banjar kr dena h !!" He thinks
Elli- "kapil parantha jal jayega "
Kapil - " yha dil jal rhe tujhe parantho k padi h " (slowly he says)
Elli - kyaa , kiskaa dil
Kapil - kyaa dil ,...tel kha maine ...tel jal rha h sabzi ka ...daal udhar masale daal .
" kapil control kr...itne din se news se bach kr rha h ..aise react krega to pkka sab galat sochnge" he thinks.
he then concentrates on cooking , but time to time peeps out of window too , being not able to control himself .
2 p.m
Everyone eats lunch and it was now time for sumo karan duty.
Kapil deliberately sits in hall ,on sofa, facing kitchen area.
Elli - " kapil chlo garden me chalte h ...subh se andar h hai"
Kapil - " bahar kyu , bahar kitni dhup h ...tanning ho jayegi baby "
Sumo who is Washing dishes turns around hearing baby .
Kapil however agrees later and goes to garden with her.
20 mins later
Elli - kapil ,mujhe ye skirt me uncomfortable feel ho rha...mko chnge krna h , ek min chaliye andar , main lower le loon .
Kapil - hmm chal
They move in ,while crossing hall kapil sees something which made him boil in anger.
Sumo's hair gets stuck in karan shirt's upper button . karan was laughing and sumo was trying to free her hair. While doing so she opens his button . karan on the other hand was cleaning the soap foam from her hair.
(Kapil didn't saw her hair stuck in shirt as it was not visible from distance. He just saw sumona opening his button and karan wiping his hand across her hairs. And this was enough to make him angry ...he however did not reacted realising he is on camera ...)
Kapil - chal elli
They move to bedroom .
Kapil sits down and elli bends down to take her suitcase out , and she takes out her lower.
Kapil -mil gya?? chal washroom
Elli - arry yhi kr loongi , no need to go to washroom .
Kapil widens his eyes in shock and stands up instantly.
Elli laughs out at his antics .
Elli - arry maine shorts pehne h ...mujhe srf upar se lower dalni h .
Kapil gets relaxed .
Kapil - hmm
And he again sits .
Since their hands are tied up she trips and holds kapil for support .
Kapil holds her from shoulder . and elli wears her lower .
Again this was all watched by none other than sumona . She wasn't that much insecure until now but this scene right infront of her eyes made her hell angry . tears formed in her eyes.She however controls and moves towards sofa to rest as she and karan were tired .
Eizaz goes to kitchen and comes with bowl in his hand .
Eizaz - sumona ji , aapne shayad apna kaam shi nhi kia , ye dekhiye isme abhi bhi kuch lga hua h.
He used sweet words but his tone was quite rude and loud.
Karan - ohh bhai , galti ho gyi...aap udhar rkh dijiye ...hm baad me saaf kr denge.(he speaks softly)
Eizaz- baad me kr denge matlab , ...pta nhi kitne aise gande dishes honge...ye kitna unhygienic h , sare bartan dubara saaf kriye ...abki baar shi se., main abhi captain se bol kr aata hoon.
This didn't go well down karan .
Karan - ha ja kr de complain ...aise kya dhamki de rha...bola na galti ho gyi hmse. Eizaz- tu kyu itna bhadak rha h ...maine tere se baat h nhi k ...main to sumona ji se kehne aaya tha.
Sumo- ha eizaz , main kr doongi ...sorry maine dhyaan nhi dia
Kapil elli too come to hall by this tym.
Eizaaz- haa ji ...apne dhyaan pr zaraa dhyaan dijiye...zada h bhatak rha h...apse na task ho rhe na h ghar k kaam ...aayi kyu h yha
Sumo - dekhiye aap
Kapil - kya h be , tu hota kon h usko order dene vala...ha big boss tera tauu (bade papa ) lgte h kyaa. Tere ko kya vo kaam kre ya nhi .
Sumona turns to kapil , and tries to stops kapil
Sumo - kapil plzz ...ladai mat badhaiye , aapko ko kya mere ko kuch bhi khe , aap enjoy kriye bs jo aap kr rhe the
(Kapil was surprised by her attitude , however he ignored)
Eizaz - lo aa gye mia ji biwi k liye bolne
Kapil - ha to tere ko aag kyu lgi h , mujhe jo bolna h main bolunga
He steps close to eizaz
Sumo tries to push kapil backwards.
Eizaz - ik to inka mia biwi ka natak h nhi khatam hota...
Sumo finally turns to eizaz ..he was standing very close to her back. While turning ,her hands hits eizaz such that he fells down on floor.
Eizaaz stands up and starts screaming in anger.
Eizaz - dekh lijiye big boss yha ye log haata pahi ( violence ) pr utar aaye. Mujhe nhi rehna yha , aap darwaza kholiye ...main ja rha hoon , aisi insult hone k liye nhi aya main yha.
" big boss aise hinsaa (violence ) k ghor ninda krte h , hinsa big boss k ghar k niyamo(rules ) k saaf khilaaf h , sumona apko aisi hinsak gatividhi( violent act)
K liye saza milti h , aapko 1 din k liye bahar garden me jail rhna hoga , aage se aise vahvyaar(behavior) k liye apko sakt se sakht saza ho skti h , ...ir big boss apko btana chahte h ab partner swap hue 24 ghnte ho gye h to karan aap elli k sath vapis ho skte h , or kapil aap ab free h "
Sumona goes to jail kept outside in garden .
1 hr later
Elli karan sits near jail.
Karan- " to sumona apne kbhi socha tha k aapko kbhi jail me jane k mauka milega "
Sumo laughs out loudly
Sumo- " nhi maine kbhi nhi socha tha , it's like dream come true...main iske liye big boss ko bahut bahut shukria khna chahoongi. "
Thy all r laughing and chatting.
" dekho to badi hasi aa rhi h , or mreko bol rhi thi k main enjoy kr rha hoon , khud ko dekha h.. .karan k saath kaise batteesi nikal rhi h , mann kr rha mukka maar k bateeesi sujha doon dono k " kapil thinks who was in garden too, but since he was angry at sumo so he didn't go near jail .
Sumo can feels kapil staring her ...but she too didn't looked towards him even at once.
It is snacks time in evening . everyone is drinking coffee and having snacks .
Sumo is sitting at corner of jail silently as karan elli were inside and there was no one to talk . kapil notices no one gave coffee to her. He moves towards her jail.
Sumo sees him coming but turns away her face other side.
" le pee le coffee, karan ne di h tere liye , tu to mana bhi nhi kr sakti ab to "
Kapil says .
Sumo ignores . she knew karan didn't gave it .
Few minutes later
Karan -elli come with snacks .
Karan - chal sumo khate h
He sees kapil standing there so he calls him too .
Elli - ha kapil aao .
Seeing elli calling sumo feels jealous..
Sumo - ha kapil , aayiye ...aapke bina nashta kaise kr skte h hum log
,she says "hum log" Specially pointing towards elli.
Kapil - nhi elli Darling mereko bhukh nhi h .
he says looking towards sumona in extra sweet manner.
He goes in and doesn't come out . sumo kapil ignore each other totally.
Lights off
Kapil goes to washroom and sees sumona washing face .
He clutches her arm and drags her to bathroom.
Sumo - aaahhh...kapil chodiye .
Kapil locks door .
Kapil - kyaa nakhre kr rhi subh se
Sumo - maine kyaa kia
Kapil - kyaa kia.??? Ye bhi btana pdega...shaam se ignore maar rhi ,ek din k liye karan k partner k bani ...itna kya chipak rhi thi usse .
Sumo- mind ur language kapil , chipak rhi thi ?? Kuch bhi keh rhe h , mujhe chodiye...
She tries to free her hand.
Kapil - mind ur language kyaa??? Main kyu mind kroo language ...main apne mind ko mind kroonga , or kya galat keh dia maine ...jo vo tere saath kr rha tha use chipkna h khte h ...tu bhi full line de rhi thi...kuch to sharam kr , camera pr shirt k button khol rhi ...chiii
Sumona - enough kapil ...main kuch bhi kroon , camera k baat aap kr rhe hain, kam se kam main kapde to nhi chnge krva rhi thi...Or haa aapko kyu itna farak padd rha h...boliye ...itna kyu gussa kr rhe ...kyu kisi or k sath dekh kr apko bura lgta h ???
Kapil - kyunki main tujhse ...nd he stops.
Sumo - aap mujhse kyaaa kapil ??? Boliye
Kapil stands still and leaves her hand.
Sumo - dekhaaa apke pass koi jawaab nhi h naaa , mujhe pta h , ...pehle bhi nhi thaa or ab bhi nhi h ...ya shayad jawaab to h lkin aap use private rkhna chahte h ...kyunki agar keh dia to apki personal life public ho jayegi ...isi baat k darr h naa ?? , pehle bhi dar gye the aap or aaaj fir se darr gye...
With that she leaves , comes to jail . she sits in corner , brings her legs close to chest , puts her head down and starts sobbing.
Few minutes later kapil too leaves to bedroom. sumo's words echoed in his ears. He covers himself with blanket . tears escaped his eyes as he remembers his fight with her aftr which they for 6 months behaved liked strangers ...before coming here.
Taaa---daaa
I hope u liked it.
I know this update was not of kapil's style and humor was missing but thoda draama bhi zaroori h mere dost.
Vaise only 2 -3 parts remaining more fir story khatam.
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