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Posted: 9 years ago
#71
Phele Kappu Sumona ki hasi wapas laaya aur phir uske parents aur sumona ke beeche ki doori khatam kar di Aww Kapu is really sweet😳
Last chapter was really emotional😭. I liked the way Kappu made Sumona understand about her parents feelings. It was done beautifully👍🏼

Awesome update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#72
Chapter 14

And here I introduced the small pack of cuteness- Aruhi urf Mamu ki jaan :)

All of them were back from shopping and it was 7 Pm which meant its play time for mamu and mamu ki jaan.

Aruhi - 3 yrs old little girl was sitting on the marble floor in her mamu's room all the toys surrounding her but none made her happy but just one call did.

"Mamu ki jaaannn " Kapil called slowly opening the door and entering the room.

As soon as she saw him the first thing she did was run and hug his leg making her smile brightly.

"Hey baby !" He lifted her up in his arms and sat on the bed.

He kissed both her cheeks making her giggle cutely. With one more kiss on her nose he said " Sorry mamu ki jaan mamu ne aapko itna intezaar karwaya na aaj "

She patted his cheeks with both her little hands and said in her kiddish voice "it otay (its okay)"

He smiled.

"Aapko pata hai aapke mamu kitne acche tutor hai ! Pucho kyun ?" He questioned titling his head to side and she copied him saying
"Tyun ?(kyun)"

"Kyunki aapke mamu ne aapki honewali mami ko ab tak muskurana, Hasna aur enjoy karna sikhadiya ! Yaaay! " He lifted his hand for a high five and she actually high fived and then clapped happily.

"Yaaayyy mamu " She said almost jumping on his lap.

"Theek hai theek hai beta baith ja India World Cup nahi jeet gaya aur nahi Virat ne six mara hai jo tu cheer leader ki tarah naach rahi hai" She just stared at him blankly. She understood half of his words but the others for her were meaningless but still she gave a huge grin playing with his watch.

"Bas ab woh pyaar karna bhi seekh jaye iss baar mein na ek agreement sign karwalunga ke iske baad no break up and no distances aur mujhe kabhi chodkar bhi nahi jayegi" He said looking down at the floor though aruhi was busy playing with the watch she heard him understood nothing still replied.

"Otay (okay)" And he chuckled tickling her.

After some more of laughter and play aruhi rubbed her eyes with her fist and yawned widely an indication that now she needs some sleep. Before she could start her loud cry and shake the entire house he made her rest her head on his chest and patted her back.

"Soja mamu ki jaan soja. ." He said and she started sucking her thumb with her eyes slowly shutting down but when she heard him she took the thumb out and repeated.

"Toda mamu ti daan toda. . " Making him let out a small laugh before he kissed her head and lied down on the bed with her on him for a peaceful sleep.

A/N

I hope u all loved the mamu and his jaan's relationship =) Mami bhi jaldi se aajaye cause Aruhi would love to play with her when mamu is away ;)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#73
O my god sooo many cute movement's in your story vese bhi i love those men who are good with kids and the way you showed the bonding between two made me grin all the time
Waiting for your next chapter dals 😳

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Posted: 9 years ago
#74
I don't think I hv too many words left for u 😉😆 Too good! I loved Aruhi..I want to cuddle her..sooo cute! And sumona' talk with her mom too.. Very beautiful! Love this story. Keep it up!😊😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75
Cuteness ka overdose hogaya
Kapil and aruhi scene was sweet and cute
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76
Wow what a cute repo kappu has with kids. In real life too he becomes a kid around kids. You described the scene so cutely. Now i too love mamu ki jaan. Loved her cute cute dialogues. And the agreement thing which he said was funny but for the sake of her he should do that! Anyway update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77
Chapter 15

Thank You Sweet people for loving Me ;) I mean my story = )

Next Morning Sumona was ready to finally go back to her own house. She met aunty and Pooja di then went upstairs with a mind set that she will meet aruhi and leave but will her heart let her go without meeting him ? A big 'No' it was.

She discreetly pushed the door and found him sleeping on his back. She smiled as she found that the other end of Aruhi's frock belt was tied to his wrist cause everyone knew aruhi plays soccers whilst sleeping.

Biting her lower lip to stop her chuckle she went to aruhi and kissed her cheek.

"Bye bye cutie " She whispered.

She was about to leave when she heard him murmur something in his sleep. She went to his side of the bed to find out what was bothering him.

When she stood in front he was calm as the sun rays were now not falling on his face. She moved a little and he frowned the rays again irritated him. She giggled internally and again provided shade making him smile in his sleep.

She turned around and closed the curtains. She was about to leave the room when a hand held hers. Her heart skipped a beat as it knew whose hand it was.

She turned around and he frowned.

"Good Morning. . Tum kahin ja rahi ho kya?" He asked and she nodded saying
" Wapas apne ghar"

His frown went deeper as he got up and sat still holding her hand.

"Kyun ? I mean itni jaldi kyun ?"

"Bohot kaam hai kapil aur mein yaha reh kar aunty ko aur takleef nahi dena chahti. " She looked down as she was lying.

He sighed pulling the string of the frock and after freeing his hand he jerked Sumona closer which made her almost fall on him but thanks to her hands which were on his shoulders. Her hair covered his face. His hands were busy holding her waist and he enjoyed that fragrance and the feel of her smooth hair.

She lifted her hand slowly and moved the strands off his face. As her gentle fingertips moved on his face his lips curved up.

His eyes opened and met directly with hers. They stared deep in each other's soul. The penetrating stare felt wrong at some stage yet so perfect. His eyes roamed on her face and stopped on her pinkish lips and she gulped the lump in her throat.

She slowly moved back but his grip tightened.

"Panch minute aur tumhe aise dekhoun toh tax toh nahi lagega na ?"

"Kapil. . "

"Please. . ."

She had no idea what to say now. His arms completely wrapped around her as he hugged her with his eyes shut and her hands still resting on his broad shoulders.

There was a sense of affection which she wanted to ignore completely but when he caressed her back and brought her more closer to his body she couldn't stop herself from wrapping her arms around his neck and hugging him back slowly closing her eyes and living the moment.

They stayed like that for no idea how long but who cares when the feeling is just the best one.

She opened her eyes and found Aruhi wide awake smiling at them. Feeling a little awkward she tried to move back but he had no plans to leave her so she whispered

"Kapil. . ."

"Hmm. . ." So lost in her.

"Aruhi. . .jaag gayi hai " His eyes opened and he slowly moved his hands and thought to himself

'Seriously Aruhi itni bad timing ?'

Not knowing how to react she immediately left the room saying bye and he turned to aruhi narrowing his eyes at her telling her how irritated he is but she flashed her cutest grin and of course her mamu melted on that.

A/N

Kya kahoun ? Same dialogue 'Hope u all liked it ;)'
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Posted: 9 years ago
#78
First of all baby i love you and your stories both ❤️ now coming to the chapter like alwys it feels so good to read it
ufff that hug was sooo good throughout your story this emoji has been my favourite one as your stories are so admiring
Do update the chapter soon
Babes i'm waiting :* 😎
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Posted: 9 years ago
#79
Chapter 16

Sumona was back with her routine Kapil and His family frequently visited her house all thanks to Aunty for being stubborn to visit her every weekend.

This time too there was a lot of hustle bustle in her house as they came along with few more guests who were unknown to sumona.

" Di yeh log koun hai ?" Pooja was about to reply when her mind thought of a brilliant plan.

"Sumona yeh log. .. Um woh ladki hai na suman uske maa baap hai ladki waley hai humarey Kappu aur Suman ka rishta tai karna chahte hai abhi baat chal rahi thi" Pooja was surprised at her own self how easily she can lie.

Talking about sumona she left the glass plate on the floor and her heart thumbed hearing so. She clutched the hem of her kameez stepping back.

" Kya hogaya sumona ? Are u okay ?"

"Haan di. . Bas. ." She wiped the sweat off her forehead and left the kitchen.

She ran upstairs to her room and locked herself in the mirror as tears flowed down her eyes.

Her heart and mind always had their own fights.

Mind: Why r u crying ? You never loved him right then why those tears ?

Heart: It's just a proposal Kapil's haven't given them an answer.

Mind : Oh ! U silly sumona ! Stop being a kid u knew u dont love him. He doesnt deserve u

Heart: Didnt u notice ? He is trying his best to make u happy to help u change.

Mind: So what ? Its not a big deal every good at heart person will do that.

Heart: So u see Heart matters the most to everyone Brain never wins.

Mind: But-

"Shut up !" She shouted in the empty room.

Wiping her tears she said " Enough ! He cant do this. . He cant repeat his mistake. . I need to talk to him "

She opened the door and was about to walk to his room when Aunty met her.

"Arey puttar tu kitthe chali ? Chal na neeche dekh toh mehman aaye hai. ."

"Aunty mein woh-

"Koi ni puttar ji Ramu hai na woh sab kaam sambhalega. . Tu chal mere naal " She held her hand and helpless sumona walked down to living room where the guest were seated.

After the guest left she immediately walked to his room.

"Sir please I need atleast one time. Yeah Sir I will be back after a month. Pakka pakka sir i will be back. "He turned and found her.

"Ok. .thank u I talk to u later sir " He hanged up.

"Kya hogaya sumon tum yaha ?"

She went and stood infront of him and then he noticed her eyes were red and puffy.

"Tum shaadi kar rahe ? "

A/N

Hmm. . . Kappu ki shaadi ki jhooti khabar sunkar laga sumona ko jhatka. Ab kaise samjhayega Kappu jab woh khudhi hia comfused ? Jaan ne keliye padhiye agla chapter ;)

LOL ! I sound like those typical voices in the background before the start of any daily soap ;)))

Lots of Pyaar =)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: aashup

First of all baby i love you and your stories both❤️now coming to the chapter like alwys it feels so good to read it

ufff that hug was sooo goodthroughout your story thisemoji has been my favourite one as your stories are so admiring
Do update the chapter soon
Babes i'm waiting :*😎



Muuuaaah ! Love u tooo babes :) and all the tareef from all of u makes me go 😳 😳 😳
😆 After reading all the comments Jab bhi aise phone ko dekh kar smile karti hoon na toh mum gives me a confused and shak wala look 😆 and I immediately clear sayings its just sweet comments 😛

Thank u so much :)

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