A Walk Back In The Past- Completed KaSu FF.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey beautiful people !

It's a new idea but I want your opinions should I continue with it ?

Kappu's character is not yet revealed.
If u all think its not a time waste then I will continue =)

Pushing the glass door in her black leg-hugging jeans, white T-shirt and a blue blazer. Her high heels made noise as she, the entrepreneur of her own huge company named-

Her brown curls playing around their own game. She took off her shades only to see the staff members standing in humble manner with their smiling faces.

"Good Morning ma'am. . " One by one they greeted as she headed to her cabin with her secretary Linta informing her about important meetings today.

" Good Morning. Ramu please get a cup of coffee in my cabin NOW !" She ordered.

" Madam we have appointed a new photographer for clicking our new designs as the previous one-"

"Just tell me the important part I have no interest in hearing any stories Linta !" She said in her firm voice which hid the sweetness behind.

"Sorry madam. . Here is the detailed information about the new photographer. . " She kept the file on the table and sipping the coffee she opened it and as it wast damn hot she spilled it on the file.

Ramu and Linta looked at each other with wide eyes and immediately grabbed the tissue box trying to clean the stuff.

" Step back !" She commanded getting off the seat and the file fell. She walked to the washroom and cleaned her dress.

As she looked up in the mirror she halted.

Sumona Chakravarti, one of the top designers around the globe. The proud owner of a successful business. She was like a precious, rarest and most expensive gem available. She was bright, Her life was a bed of roses, Her every wish was a command for all other but it was all for the world.

For herself, she was weak, she had a past which always held her back. She wanted to be carefree. She hated her life. She wanted that past to fade away from her memories but it was not in her hand. She was not the same Sumona after coming here to Canada. She was a strong woman with the weakest heart and soul.

'Sumona Chakravarti is just a fake identity'

She sighed looking at her reflection. Those eyes held so many tears in. Everything was suppressed deep in her heart which she wanted to vomit out but who bothered to sit and hear to her ?

With the same fake identity she stepped out.

To be continued. . . Agar aap chahein ⭐️
Lots of Pyaar 😃

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Chapters - Page No.
1 - 1
2 & 3 - 2
4 & 5 - 3
6 - 4
7 & 8 - 5
9 - 6
10 -7
11 & 12 - 8
13 - 9
14, 15 & 16 - 10
17 & 18 - 11
19 & 20 - 12
21, 22 & 23 - 13
24- 15
25- 17
26- 19
27, 28 & 29 - 20
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Okay its different i mean very different but i believe its a good idea what i really loved in the story is that sumona is a powerful woman with a bad past which made her so rude and i'm very much interested to know about her past in this story
You know even i really think she's a very storg and independent woman in reality. i really like her personality and i trust your writing i know you'll make this story amazing with your writing skills babes 😎
Will wait for your next post baby

Your's sincerely
Kayal dost 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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What a story. So much realistic and sumona a famous designer. I guess kappu will be the photographer !!
And it is totally oppsosite of real sumona, i mean she wnt be that arrogant in real life. Anyway thanks for pm and yeh koi puchhne ki baat hai?? With this brilliant concept you should surely continue!! And woh bhi jald!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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So Sumona is powerful working girl with some past and trying to hide her pain from outside world seems interesting.
I liked the new story line
Go ahead it will be exciting to read and you are undoubtedly good writer
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sumona a powerful working girl with some pain inside her and hiding her pain or past from outside world
It seems interesting and I liked the storyline
Will wait for your next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It's drastically different and definitely intriguing ... Do continue I want to see where it goes 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank u so much for all your suggestions.
As per ur will. . I decided to go ahead with the story :)

I haven't decided the title. .will take a little time for it.

Chapter 1
It's continued.


Pushing the glass door in her black leg-hugging jeans, white T-shirt and a blue blazer. Her high heels made noise as she, the entrepreneur of her own huge company named-

Her brown curls playing around their own game. She took off her shades only to see the staff members standing in humble manner with their smiling faces.

"Good Morning ma'am. . " One by one they greeted as she headed to her cabin with her secretary Linta informing her about important meetings today.

" Good Morning. Ramu please get a cup of coffee in my cabin NOW !" She ordered.

" Madam we have appointed a new photographer for clicking our new designs as the previous one-"

"Just tell me the important part I have no interest in hearing any stories Linta !" She said in her firm voice which hid the sweetness behind.

"Sorry madam. . Here is the detailed information about the new photographer. . " She kept the file on the table and sipping the coffee she opened it and as it wast damn hot she spilled it on the file.

Ramu and Linta looked at each other with wide eyes and immediately grabbed the tissue box trying to clean the stuff.

" Step back !" She commanded getting off the seat and the file fell. She walked to the washroom and cleaned her dress.

As she looked up in the mirror she halted.

Sumona Chakravarti, one of the top designers around the globe. The proud owner of a successful business. She was like a precious, rarest and most expensive gem available. She was bright, Her life was a bed of roses, Her every wish was a command for all other but it was all for the world.

For herself, she was weak, she had a past which always held her back. She wanted to be carefree. She hated her life. She wanted that past to fade away from her memories but it was not in her hand. She was not the same Sumona after coming here to Canada. She was a strong woman with the weakest heart and soul.

'Sumona Chakravarti is just a fake identity'

She sighed looking at her reflection. Those eyes held so many tears in. Everything was suppressed deep in her heart which she wanted to vomit out but who bothered to sit and hear to her ?

With the same fake identity she stepped out.

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" Everything is ready for the shoot just the photographer is a little late "

"Darn ! I hate late comers" She turned the chair to the other side. Facing the white wall as he entered.

With a brightest smile and a lot of hope he pushed the door of the cabin. Taking a deep breath he asked

" May I come in madam ?"

"Come in " She wasn't looking at him. Her chair's back was facing him.

"Please sit and May I know who u are ?"

He sat on the chair. As her voice filled his ears his heart recognized it whilst his ears questioned why was the sweetest voice dripping so much of harshness ?

When she didnt get any reply she turned around only to get the shock of her life.

Wohoo ! Humarey Hero ki entry hai shock toh lagna hi tha na
😉 😆

Hope u all like it !
Next part will be from Kappu and Sumo's Point of views.
Ab thoda idea ho hi gaya hoga about the story so suggest some good title people. . Pleasshhh !
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow this TS is so damn good. From the start you wrote so well. And lastly finally kappu ki entry but why she got shocked seeing him?? Koi past wagera hai kya?? I am so damn excited for the next part. And my mind also started imagining the rest of the story. Plz update sooner!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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O to past sayad kappu k sath h i thought may be it would be with somebody else and kappu will try to heal her heart lets see what happens next eagerly waiting for your next chapter and yes awsome story babes 😎
Your sincerely
Kayal dost 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oho Hero ne entry li aur heroine shocked😆
I thought Kapil feel heal the past but it seems he is related to past. Its exciting lets see how story goes ahead

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