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Posted: 9 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: Kapillian_girl

Awesome update. Uff! Loved the dining table scene very much. Kaash ki sumona jaldi se maan jaaye that she still loves him and then there will be loads of romance in the story. By the way i came online usually in afternoon that means around 1to 1:30 pm



Sabr karlo mohtarma kappu sumo ko milna hi cause its a rab ne banadi jodi 😳
Mahn ! How do I know where do u live ? I live in saudi arabia so there will be time difference na dishi

Thanks and Lots of Pyaar :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: aashup

Aaye haye ladki twadhi to punjabi bhi badi changi hegi punjabi maa ne aake to chaar chand hi lga diya story😉

Waiting for your next update



Kya baat hai yaar ! Thodi punjabi mujhe bhi sikhade na kappu aur aunty ji ko impress karna hai 😉 😳

Mummy ji came because mera kappu akela padgaya tha and u know I cant enter the story warna kappu ke sad hone ke chances hi nahi hotey 😛 😆

Lots of pyaar to u babes ;)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: Chit15

Wow read all 3 chapters update and all were mindblowing👏

KApil going to say sorry to Sumona in night and Sumona also saying sorry was awesome
KApil's mother was brilliant and perfect character in the story😊
This is for you🤗for brilliant story



Thank u so much sweetheart 😃
I know right i always wished that some day kappu would actually do the life threatening task of climbing a pipe only to meet her in real life 😳 par koi ni hum story se hi saarey mazey lelete hai 😛

Thanks and lots of loveee !!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: Kapillian_girl

The update was super awesome. Great job dear!! Loved the full on punjabi maa of kapil and its good to see that she still likes sumona. The fav dialogue is begal ki khoobsurti! It was very cute. Update soon!



See moms rarely support their sons when it comes to choosing bahu ! But here kapil's mom is all cool and extra sweet u all will love her more :)

Thanks to u khoobsurat kapilian 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: Naturegirl99

All 3 chapters were fab! Wooohoo..I love this story yar..him kissing her in her sleep was super cute..the pipe climbing scene best.. His mom was damn adorable! Hayye..u go girl! I'm loving ur writing..keep it up! Always waiting for more. Lots of love😊😳



I know right Kappu is such an adorable boyfriend and when with sumona cuteness just crosses the highest level !!!

Thank u so much prakriti and Lots of Pyaar always !!! 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 11

Sumona Went upstairs to her room.
" Pagal. . Pata nahi kya samjhta hai apne aapko. ." She thought and sat on the bed.

"Ab shopping jaoungi toh phir kuch karega. . . "She sighed.

"Sumona !" She heard pooja calling but her mind was not here it wandered somewhere back in those days.

Flashback:

"Sumona tujhpe yeh wala accha lagega. .. " She beamed seeing the blue anarkali.

"Di its so pretty "

"Nahi yeh wala accha hai " Kapil gestured towards the red one. He was standing there leaning on the wall.

"Accha ji ? Mein puch puch kar thak jaati hoon ke kounsa wala accha hai tab toh janab muh nahi kholte. . . Aaj inki sumona keliye dress choose karne ki baat aayi toh jhat se mub khul gaya. . " Pooja teased whilst the couple tried their best to ignore.

"Kounsa wala ?"

"Yeh. . "He handed her a long beautifully designed dress.

Sumona went to the mirror and held it close to her body.

"Wow yaar sumona seriously it lool good. . . Red color na tumhari khoobsurti aur bhi bada deti hai" Pooja complimented and sumona smiled.

Pooja left the couple alone as she heard her mum calling her.

He stood next to her and wrapped on arm around her shoulder. Looking at her reflection he said

"Di ulta bol gayi. ."

"Matlab ?"

"Red color tumhari khoobsurti nahi bada ta balki woh khud khoobsurat feel karta hai when my Bengali beauty wears it. ." He winked and she giggled.

"You know what ? I should thank aunty. " She was talking about Kapil's mum. She turned to him as he asked why ?

" For such an awesome production Kappu " She happily wrapped her arms around his neck standing on his shoes and he laughed hugging her back.

End of Flashback.

A smile spread across her lips but it faded soon as pooja dashed in.

"Kabse awaaz laga rahi hoon sumona. . Kahan khoi hai ? Chal shopping nahi chalna ?"

"Nahi di woh. . Meri tabiyat thodi theek nahi hai. . Aap log chale jana mujhse nahi hoga. ." Pooja was about enquire more when she stopped as a thought strikes in her mind she nods and leaves the room.

"Kya hua ? Sumona kahan hai di ?"

"Woh uski tabiyat kharab hai woh humarey saath nahi aarahi hai"

He sighed knowing the real reason behind all this.

"Anyway chalo di. . Maa car mein wait kar rahi hai "

"Nahi" She held his hand.

"Dekh kappu mein jaanti hoon ke tu sumona aaj bhi bohot pyaar karta hai. ."

"Par woh nahi karti di. . "He said sadly and she shook her head.

"Tum itne yakeen se kaise keh sakte ho ? "

"Di-"

"Meri baat sun. .mujhe pata hai sumona pehle jaisi nahi rahi par ek baar usse theek se baat toh karle. . Usse waqt lagega apne aapko badalne ke liye. . . Ek din mein sab kuch nahi badlega. .use waqt chahiye aur tera saath. . Kapil u really love her and she loves u too bas bata nahi rahi hai. . Abhi ghar mein koi nahi hoga. .mein maa ko leker shopping jaati hoon. .you take care " She instructed her brother.

"Koshish karunga di. . And Thank u" He smiled she patted his cheek and left.

A/N

So pooja ki baatoun ko kitna seriously lega kappu ? Jaan ne ke liye padhiye agla chapter ;)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57
Wow what a beautiful chapter 👍🏼 and that flashback sooo cute 😳 can't wait for the next chapter i can totally imagine something very exciting going to happen 😆 in the next chapter
Eagerly waiting for your next update❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Flashback scene was really fabulous and the line "Red color tumhari khoobsurti nahi bada ta balki woh khud khoobsurat feel karta hai when my Bengali beauty wears it. ." He winked and she giggled.

" For such an awesome production Kappu " She happily wrapped her arms around his neck standing on his shoes and he laughed hugging her back." completes Kapil & Sumona

Loved it👏

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Posted: 9 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: Chit15

Flashback scene was really fabulous and the line "Red color tumhari khoobsurti nahi bada ta balki woh khud khoobsurat feel karta hai when my Bengali beauty wears it. ." He winked and she giggled.

" For such an awesome production Kappu " She happily wrapped her arms around his neck standing on his shoes and he laughed hugging her back." completes Kapil & Sumona

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And thats my favorite part ! I added Flashbacks so that u all will have an idea of the differences in their attitudes when compared between past and present
They keep visiting in the past iseliye toh its A Walk Back In the Past :)

Thank u :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: Chit15

Flashback scene was really fabulous and the line "Red color tumhari khoobsurti nahi bada ta balki woh khud khoobsurat feel karta hai when my Bengali beauty wears it. ." He winked and she giggled.

" For such an awesome production Kappu " She happily wrapped her arms around his neck standing on his shoes and he laughed hugging her back." completes Kapil & Sumona

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