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Posted: 9 years ago
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Pehle to apki shayri ke liye wah wah wah ... 👏😛 woow... Great ab kuch or interesting hone wala h story great
You know what i like the most about you, you update your chapters constantly which allow your readers to get more involved in the story
There is a kind of curiosity and surety that you'll update next chapter in few hours 😳 many a times you give the bonus point to us by updating 2 or 3 chapters in a day😆
Do update the chapter soon waiting eagerly
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Loved the 15th chapter very much but the 16th one was very confusing. Kappu ki shaadi hai ya sumona ki and yeh sumona 1month ke liye kaha ja rahi hai?? And a lot of questions but i know that the next chapter will answer all my questions so plz update soon dear!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 17

Thank You All :)

"Tum shaadi kar rahe ? "

"Kya ?! " He was shocked but what surprised him was her next movement.

She held him by his collar and looking straight into his eyes she spoke.

"How dare u ? How dare u hurt me ! Pehle. .pehle uss shreya ke saath milkar mujhe dhoka diya ! Aur ab. .ab tum shaadi kar rahe ho ? I trusted u damn it ! Meine apne aapko tumharey hawale kardiya. . .aur tumne ? Tumne. . Kyun mera dil toda ? Kyun mera bharosa toda ? " She cried after years making all his senses to go numb.

She then wiped her tears "Mein kyun ro rahi hoon. .tum. . Tumne toh mujhse kabhi pyaar hi nahi kiya. . . And. . I hate you. .I dont love u. . I dont ! Kya zaroorat thi wapas meri life mein aani ki ? Sab kuch ek jhatke mein badalne ki ? Aur. . Kitni ajeeb baat hai na. . Mein tumse nafrat karna chahti hoon kapil. .par nahi kar parahi. . . Kyun kar rahe ho yeh sab ? Tumse pyaar bhi nahi kar sakti aur nafrat bhi nahi. . Ab kya karoun mein ? Kahan jaoun ? Kaise rahoon tumse door ? I hate u damn it !" Her forehead rested on his chest and she kept punching his chest. His shirt was wet with her tears.

His confusion was now being cleared slowly but what made him hate himself were her tears. He has been the reason behind all this.

He immediately wrapped his hands around her as soon as he shut his eyes tears fell off his eyes. She kept sobbing. Years of frustration,pain and all those emotions flowed down in the form of tears.

"I. .I hate you so much. . " She said hugging him tightly. Weeping at her helpless situation.

He sat down on the floor still holding her in his arms. She just knew that this warmth was soothing her. She snuggled closer to him fisting his white shirt tightly.

He caressed her arm holding her close to his heart.

" I-"

"I know. . You hate me. . I too hate myself. . But Shreya ? Tumhe agar aisa lagta tha toh. . Tumne mujhse kuch pucha nahi ? Kyun koi safai nahi maangi. . Agar clarify karleti toh itna sab kuch nahi hota na. . " Her head was resting below his head as he stroked her hair and her crying now stopped making his heart sigh in contentment.

When he didnt get any replied he titled his head to side to find her eyes shut. She was now asleep.

Flashback :

With a huge grin on her face she excitingly called him stepping into his house

"Kapppuuu. . " After calling his name more than thrice she headed to his room and then few voices from his room made her stop.

"Please. . . Please Kapil mein tumse bohot pyaar karti hoon. . Mujhe kuch nahi pata par agar tumhari shaadi mujhse nahi uss sumona se hogayi na toh mein. . Toh mein jee nahi paungi . . Kapil"

Shreya Mehra- Sumona's frenemy. Friend when she needs to know Sumona and her secrets but also her enemy because she was jealouse of Sumona and Her fianc Kapil Sharma.

What sumona witnessed was Shreya hugging Kapil and her face soaked in tears.

"Shut up shreya ! Pagal hogayi ho tum ? Yeh kya bakwaas hai ? Meri sumona se engagement hogayi hai or marriage is next week aur tum-" Kapil moved her away.

"Please Kapil ! Agar tumne sumona se shaadi karli toh mein apni jaan de dungi. . . No ! U cant marry her. . I love u so much. .please please yeh shaadi mat karo please. . I beg u. .please kapil " She fell on the floor as she realised sumona was watching them. One thing not many knew about Kapil was he hated to see anyone cry just to console her he said a yes which unfortunately triggered something unwanted in Sumona.

He held her by shoulders and made her stand. She stepped forward and simply hugged him tightly.

"Its ok. . " He whispered and this made Sumona feel as if her entire world just crashed down in front of her.

"Mein samjha dungi Sumona ke that we love each other. . Aur tum usse dhoka nahi de rahe ho" Such a cunning lady shreya is.

Sumona's tears rolled down and without a word she left the place.

'Just wait and watch. . Kapil ne tumse kabhi pyar nahi kiya hai Sumona aur tumhe yeh baat jald hi samjh ayegi. . .'

'I wish you see kapil and the reality. Pyaar mein itni bhi andhi mat bano ke tumhe sach dikhayi na de. .Just look at him he keeps flirting around. . He just doesnt love you'

Shreya's words kept ringing in her mind as she sat in a corner of the room hugging her knees and sobbing.

A/N

Welcome the new character people Shreya Mehra whom I already hate for creating so much of trouble :(
Edited by Kappumyfav - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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😲 finally the Raaazzz is out .. .. awsum update ...do update fast
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kashish95

😲 finally the Raaazzz is out .. .. awsum update ...do update fast



No buddy abhi toh aagey aur drama baki hai.

Thank u yaar tum bhi na saal mein ek baar comment karti woh bhi rasgulla wala sweet sa 😳 😉

Thank u Rasgulla 😛 Lots of Pyaar !
Edited by Kappumyfav - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 18

Continued from the previous chapter. .

Whenever anyone tried to tell her that Kapil's flirting is a major problem she always hid it. She always said he loved her alone which was true because she laid all her trust in him. She knew his flirting is habitual and harmless but then people and their talk did affect her in some or the other way.

But shreya's words had stronger impact than any other's which was a loss. A loss of joy. A loss of love. A loss of trust.

Kapil was not in town for next
Month when Sumona decided to break the engagement. She waited for him for one whole month but when he came back it was late and Shreya got a chance to fill more of poison in Sumona's mind when kapil was away.

End of flashback.

Present :

He scooped the deep in sleep Sumona in his arms and walked to her room.

"Aaaye hayye ! Toh Matlab sab solve hogaya ? Maa ko kehdoun ke shaadi ki tayyariya karey ya phir-

"Di yaar ! Seriously ? Aap aur Maa dono ek jaise hi ho choti baat pe itna over react " Pooja followed him to the room where Kapil gently laid her on her bed.

"Toh phir bata na kya hua ?"

"Kuch nahi bas purane din shayad jald hi laut aayenge " He said looking at her calm and peaceful sleeping face.

Pooja knew her presence was not needed so she left smiling.

Kapil covered her with the duvet and kissing her forehead he whispered in her ear.

"Good Night Bengali beauty and I love you. ."

Before he left the pink diary kept on the table caught his attention. Thinking there would be something important in it he took the diary along with him.

A/N

jab insan kuch kehna nahi chahta toh hum samjhe kaise ? A big thanks to the diary Ut will reveal things to Kapil :)

Lets see what Kapil has to say after reading it !
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Okay ek gehri saans or mera comment likhna suru okay so this is the reason hmmm what i like about this story hehehehe mere favourite line h ye 😛 ab plzzz meri koi galati nhi h isme what to do i like so many things about you and your story 😳 but seriously you have made sumona's character so strong as a woman she took such a strong decision to leave a man whom she felt is cheeting on him in no tym and became a successful designer but at the same time as a lover she has a soft heart which melts so easily though relationships becomes very difficukt to handle if there is lack of communication in it that you showed it brilliantly 🤗
What else i can say
Will going to repeat the same dialogue
Please do post your next update soon :*
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: aashup

Okay ek gehri saans or mera comment likhna suruokay so this is the reason hmmm what i like about this story hehehehe mere favourite line h ye😛ab plzzz meri koi galati nhi h isme what to do i like so many things about you and your story😳but seriously you have made sumona's character so strong as a woman she took such a strong decision to leave a man whom she felt is cheeting on him in no tym and became a successful designer but at the same time as a lover she has a soft heart which melts so easily though relationships becomes very difficukt to handle if there is lack of communication in it that you showed it brilliantly🤗

What else i can say
Will going to repeat the same dialogue
Please do post your next update soon :*



Mein yahan padhne ki koshish kar rahi hoon aur yeh dekho such khush kardena wala comment 😃
Accha I am confused Yaha almost u got everything but in the next chapter I thought agar Kappu aur Sumo baat karlengey toh it will be okay I hope next chappy wont feel repetitive.
Dont know why but I actually feel sumona is real life too is a very strong and bold actress and Also if she loves something or someone she does it with all her heart :)
Ur same dialogues pushes me to update even if its a lazy day !

Love u lovely and Thank u :*

Lots of Pyaar !!!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sorry cudnt comment earlier. Lovely man,, All chapters and every sentence.. Don't know where to begin and where to end. Will just say that I love ur kapil,Sumona,pooja and his mom,,all characters. I prefer nowadays reading Ur FF over novels. U r that good. Keep it up. Kudos! 😊😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Naturegirl99

Sorry cudnt comment earlier. Lovely man,, All chapters and every sentence.. Don't know where to begin and where to end. Will just say that I love ur kapil,Sumona,pooja and his mom,,all characters. I prefer nowadays reading Ur FF over novels. U r that good. Keep it up. Kudos!😊😳



Mahn thats such a huge compliment but I dont think it suits on me so u better take it back before I treat myself as Shakespeare jaise mahan 😛 😆 😆
Thank u so much sweetheart made me really happy 😃

Lots of Pyaar to u always :)
Edited by Kappumyfav - 9 years ago

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