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Okay so this is an old work of TaaRey. I thought of making a RaHi version. I have made some changes though. I hope you all will like it! 😃

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Her Nose

"Ranveer...!" Panchi pushed Ranveer away and she turned around shyly. They were in the college garden alone and Ranveer was again and again whispering something about her in her ears which was making her blush. "Okay okay fine. I won't say anything more. But just one last thing!" Ranveer pleaded. "What?" she asked. "Do you know which part of your face I like the most?" Ranveer asked staring at her. "Which?" she enquired. "Your nose." he said with a smile. Panchi was surprised. "N...n...nose?" she said confused. "Yeah. You know your nose is very cute. It is small with a lil curvy tip which still looks a bit pointy. Isn't that sweet?" Ranveer said looking at her nose. "Ranveer..!" Panchi laughed. Then she looked at her watch. "Okay now come let's go to the class room. Buddies are waiting for us. We have to talk about the project remember? ." He nodded and they both went to the class room. Panchi stood in front of them explaining them about the project while Piddi, KD and Kiya listened to her attentively. But Panchi was unknown about the gaze on her. She and Ranveer stood in the middle of the room and Ranveer was staring at her continuously. Not at her actually. At her nose. It was so adorably moving while she was moving her face that he felt something inside him. He leaned very little towards her and no one noticed. But the desire in him rised that all of a sudden he just moved to her and placed his lips full on the tip of her nose. Her jaw dropped and her eyes were wide open. And her nose turned pink while her cheeks became bright red. He slowly pulled back and looked at her. She blushed badly and ran out of the hall. Ranveer looked at the Buddy gang who had turned around with their eyes shut. Kiya slowly turned and saw that Panchi had gone and Ranveer was looking at them. Kiya nudged KD and Piddi in order to tell them that Ranveer had pulled away. They turned and stared at Ranveer as though he was crazy. "Ranveer" KD started. "If you needed some more time you could have told us. Why in front of us man?" Kiya and Piddi giggled. Ranveer smirked and said " Sorry guys. This won't happen ever again." KD nodded but something struck him. "Ranveer" he asked. "If you wanted you could have kissed her. But why did you kiss her on her nose?" KD asked her curiously. Ranveer stared at the ceiling dreamily. "Her nose is so cute!" he gushed.




And yeah if you have to leave any constructive criticism you are more than welcome!😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aww ...this is so cute just like RaHi ❤️
totally loved it 👏
n last part was just🤣
plz write more on RaHi 😳
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This is chooo chweeet and cute. I was blushing the whole time reading it...
Amazing work...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow Diya... 👏
Mast... 😉
Loved it... 😳
Really a cute stuff dear... CVs need 2 learn smthing 4m u... 😆
Bt being a selfish Kisha fan... I really want u 2 write smthin like dis on Kisha tooo... 😃
Plzzz Plzzz yaar mana mat karna...
Thanx 4 d pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awww! ☺️

This was the cutest OS I've ever read!
Awesome X 3

Please write some more!


Regards
Aishwarya
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: RAHI_SS

Aww ...this is so cute just like RaHi ❤️

totally loved it 👏
n last part was just🤣
plz write more on RaHi 😳
thanks for the pm

Aww...
Thanks so much dear Embarrassed
I am glad you liked it so much...
Yes RaHi are the cutest <3
PM no prob yaar..no thanks for that :)
And yes I will try to write more... 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: anjali1805

This is chooo chweeet and cute. I was blushing the whole time reading it...
Amazing work...

Thanks dear...😳
Am glad you liked it... 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: luv_u_Bharti

Wow Diya... 👏

Mast... 😉
Loved it... 😳
Really a cute stuff dear... CVs need 2 learn smthing 4m u... 😆
Bt being a selfish Kisha fan... I really want u 2 write smthin like dis on Kisha tooo... 😃
Plzzz Plzzz yaar mana mat karna...
Thanx 4 d pm...

Thanks alot dear...it means a lot to me!!😳
And yes I'll definitely write something on KiSha..!
I like them too...And i'd love to write something on them too..!
And yeah PM no prob yaar...no thanks :)
Am glad you liked it... 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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😊

Originally posted by: aishwarya2905

Awww! ☺️

This was the cutest OS I've ever read!
Awesome X 3

Please write some more!


Regards
Aishwarya

Thanks a lot Aishwarya...😳
Am glad you liked it so much..
And yes I will try to write some more..!
😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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But diya what do I criticize about... it was so freaking cute n so perfectly rahi babe...awww my nonu s so stricken by her nose that he can't control himself n the buddies reaction was so cute too... do write more on rahi...loved this one... thanks..
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