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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
That letter of Panchi
Make my eyes teary😭
So she left
cant wait to see Ranveer's reactions
plz continue soon dear

Geet
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
Part 1
R - Ranveer
C - chotu Ranveer's servant)

Ranveer's room
Chotu Chotu! Ranveer shouted!
C - haan! Bhaiya bolo.. Ap uth gye?
R - nhi! So rha hu and laughs 😊
C - Bhaiya Panchi didi aayi thi
R - kya? Kab ? Tune mjhe uthaya kyu nh?
C - mein utha rha tha lekin didi ne mna kr dia
R - vo bhi na
C - bhaiya didi bht ro rhi thi😔
R - shit! Mein to bhul hi gya tha aunty k baare m!
C - bhaiya m to apko letter dena bhul hi gya
R - letter? Wo mjhe letter kyu likhne lgi?
C - haan bhaiya letter!

Chotu handover the letter and leaves the room!

Ranveer reads the letter and is heartbroken! Panchi uh can not do this to me... you cannot leave me like this! I cannot live without you. He shouts . He try to call her but her phone was switched off!

He cried a lot dt ni8.. The feeling of not meeting Panchi again was killing him from inside..

Few days passed,
Everyone (kisha and piddi) was worried for Ranveer !
He used to be sad all the time! And always used to be lost in his thoughts! He started Watching Sad movies! He surrounded himself with Panchi's stuff! He used to watch panchi's photos. He tried to hate panchi but end up loving her more as love is more powerful than hate! He began to drink..

Kd tried to console him by taking him out.
Kd - Move on dude! It's high time or else u will ruin ur life.
R - I cannot move on! I know she will come back
Kd - ok! Let's imagine that she will come back but will she feel nice seeing uh in this condition? No! Not at all!
R (drunk) - Can I ask ew one thing?
Kd - of course!
R - Sab mjhe kyu chodkr chle jaate h? Am I that bad? Phle mummy papa then aunty and now panchi!
Kd - esa kuch nh h..
R - I know ki tre paas panchi ka new no. h! Plz dede let me try once . Agr kch nh hota to I'll move on and will nevr give a second thought to it...
Kd - I can't! pachi has asked me not to!
R - plz
Kd - okay! I'll msg ew tomm. Mornin!



Edited by tinaswea - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
I am dying to read this...😭😭
Plz continue!!!

I was blusing all the time!!
Once a Nonu who hated Moti like never before, so much that he refused her to call him Nonu.. is getting all drunk for her! ☺️ really sad...

RV don't be sad...Panchi'll come around
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey.. I am anjali. Its gr8. Panchi left. Ranveer heartbroken n missin her badly. Poor rv. Loved it. Do continue 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Heyyy ..nice story build up .. treat to see a devdas desperate ranveer missing his panchi.. do continue.. will b waiting for ranveer's talk to panchi...
Thanks n hi m Neha..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16

Res

unres

wow rahi story 😳

OMG i just loved it 😉

its superb dear 👏 👏

feeling bad for panchi 😭

iski mom ko kyun mara ?😲 😭

aww my nonu poor rv 😭 😭

ab ranveer kya kare ga ? 😉

i m soo excited to read more 😃

plzz update soon and pm me ⭐️



Edited by Rabertmona - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
Omgee
My Nonu😭
I am feeling so bad for him
I wish I can hug him
He is missing her moti so much
plz continue soon
Take care

Geet
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
Dear loving it though i am kisha fan but still i love it.Please update next part.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
Nonu 😭
i am loving it
plz update soon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
PART 2
He couldn't sleep that night! He was really excited. He was dieing to hear Panchi's voice. It was 8 in the morning, he called kd

Kd - halo! Tu kbse itni jldi uthne lg gya?
R - cut the crap! Mujhe panchi ka no. Send kr as soon as possible!
Kd - Are uh sure? Uh want her no. ?
R - yes!
Kd - but
R - but vut kuch nh! I want it.
Kd - okay! I did text you!

Ranveer cuts the phone!
He thinks of calling her but dn he realises dt it is too early! She would be sleeping..

It was 9 and he couldn't w8 more so he called her

P - halo! ( it was the voice Ranveer was dieing to hear )
R - Panchi
P - nonu? Tjhe mra new no. Kha se mila?
R - it doesn't matter anymore.
P - I know I m being mean but plz forget me!
R - why do ew want to throw me out of ur life?
P - Yaar, see I m only givin uh more and more pain! Kiya told me abt ur condition! How can you be so irresponsible Nonu? I didn't expect dis out of you! It is not dt I want to throw uh out of my life but if u'll be a part of it dn it will only give uh pain and nothing else!
R - wt do uh think dt if u'll leave me like ds den I'll be happy? No not all! I'll die panchi.
P - wt has happened to uh ? Take care of urself!
R - nothin, I just want to be wid ew!
P - nonu (crying) grow up!
R - I wanna meet you! I m comin to delhi!
Panchi is speechless! She has nothing to say!
He ends the call saying dt he loves her! And will soon meet her!



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