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Posted: 11 years ago
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I am very new to this forum So, tell me frankly if you don't like this!!
It is a fiction written by meh!!

All Characters are the same!!

Panchi and Ranveer are chilling in canteen. Panchi receives one call from some hospital saying that her mother is critically injured! She tells the same to Ranveer and they both rush to the hospital ! They enter ICU and see her mother... panchi starts crying seeing her mother's injury! Panchi's mother ask Ranveer to promise her that he will never leave panchi alone and will always take care of her.. he promise the same to her mother! Meanwhile, the doctor informs that her mother is no more.. Panchi is heart broken and starts crying like anything! Ranveer tries to console her.. he says that he will always be there for her! Then suddenly, someone enters the room and he was Panchi's father (crying) panchi tell him to ask her mother to get up! She says mumma I'll be a good girl . Ranveer says that now aunty will never get up... Panchi's father ask her to come with him to Delhi as now, she would be alone in Mumbai ! She is answer less ! Everything's so sudden that she is not getting anything!!!

You guys tell that she should go to delhi or stay in Mumbai!

...continued on the first page itself !

PART 1 : page 2
PART 2 : page 3
PART 3 : page 4


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niya_ss thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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👍🏼awesome start 😊
i think she shud go to delhi
plz continue soon
sweetdesire thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey dear
Wow A RaHi story
Nice start
Poor Panchi
Plz continue soon
Take care

Geet
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Posted: 11 years ago
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its fab do continue nd pm me plzzz
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Posted: 11 years ago
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New rahi story great start
I think she should go to delhi
Plz continue
tinaswea thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Panchi's letter 🤔
Dear love,
You had no idea what you were getting yourself into, what you were falling in love with. I still wonder how you do it, from time to time. You have put up with my stupidity, my selfishness, and my insanity, and you still do. You say i'm predictable, and i'm silly to doubt that you love me, but you're almost too perfect to be true. If there were anyone else i could be with in this world, it would still be you, it will always be you. I love how you complete me. I mean, i knew we weren't going to be perfect from the start, but i know that i'm so blessed to have you. We fight on the daily, and i cry almost every other day, but truth is, there's no one i'd rather cry for. There's no one i'd rather put up with, and no one i'd rather yell at. We can make it work, i know we can. You're the only forever i believe in, i love you. But I have to go Ranveer I wish u'll understand! I also have to look after my father...Uh are one of the best thing that ever happened to me!

I know u'll feel cheated but I had no other option! I didn't tell uh coz I know if I would have then uh must tried to stop me!
Plz don't search for me or come to Delhi!

I am not in my senses! I m not getting anything and I know u'll understand my situation! I can't live without my mom... and I don't want to ruin your life becoz of me! I am sorry Ranveer but I have to do it! I just don't want people to show sympathy! Bye Nonu 😭

I will miss you my cute nonu!

Panchi





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Posted: 11 years ago
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😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
Panchi Left 😭😭😭😭😭😭
Poor Ranveer...
Gr8 job... 👏 👏 👏 👏
Nice concept 👍🏼
Continue Soon...
PM me whenever U Update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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fab
panchi left nonu .. :(
update soon
thnkkx 4 pm
hangok thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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owww this is great,
you should definitly continue,
and if possible please pm me when you update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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AWESOME 👏
plz continue😃

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