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Posted: 12 years ago
#61
🤗1. I LOVE PanSh like crazy
2. those little gestures
3. KD's self control in front of Panchhi
3. their light hearted moments
4. KD's flirtiousness
Makes me Give U a BEAR HUG🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗
🤗🤗 🤗 🤗
Loved it to the CORE

🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62
Wow Mais!
U do know how to maintain humor in an updt!!


Apne manicured nails se pillar ko scratch kar rahi hai, like a wild cat!" KD painted such an exaggerated picture that Panchi couldn't stop her laugh.
^🤣
Panchi couldn't stop her laugh, n neither cud I!


Loving it!!
I wonder if RV will notice dis n feel jealous... 😕 🤔

Conti soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#63
Mais darling, kisi update ke PM mein shayad link bhi deni hoti hai?
Or do you expect me to open the message...a blank one for that, and then hunt for your work in My Posts, click on the specified page and then read?
Or is THIS how you send PMs?
Accha chaddo, PM toh kiya.
As for the update, do you mind if I swear?
Actually, wait, I don't care.
Because the first word, rather the first words that came to my mind after reading it were these :
Oh. f**k.
Seriously, I'm loving this...though the end tells me I'd rather start imagining Juhi instead of Panchi.
But oh! An initially reluctant Panchi to an in-charge one. I'm really liking her character here...and KD too, obviously. For all your dislike for him, he's turning out pretty good.
And Kiya? Lawl! I kinda feel sorry for her. :P
Poor girl, reduced to feeling jealous, instead of making KD jealous.
Too bad, I've let go of my resentment for Kiya...or I'd have enjoyed the torture much more.
Sigh...quoting Lil' Wayne, "Life is a bitch."
Aaj pata chala, kyun.
I loved the update and domo arigatou gozaimasu for the blank PM.
Mugs.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#64
Awesome update. Loved it. Loved pansh moments a lot. And the last scene was damn cute! Rules r meant to be broken! Hayye! I'm waiting for them to break rules. Please cont soon. Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65
can this get more awesome , i mean i was like totally awe-struck the whole time i was reading it!!!!!!
i jst love the way u r potraying pansh in it <33
gosh panchi is the only girl that can make my Diva jealous 😆
and fortunately kiya can't do anythng about it🤣
KD is so the way i want him to be
gosh that wildcat line cracked me up🤣
and rules gnna break😲
i wonder wats in store for us😉
omg mais u r a class writer👏

thnk u soo much for the pm , do pm me for further updates too !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66
Mais That was superb 😳
PanSh 😳
KD wants to make Panchi his fake gf n Panchi was denying 😳😆
Our diva is jealous
ALLAH!! Ye to mai kab se dekhna chahti hoon
And that line
"Apne manicured nails se pillar ko scratch kar rahi hai, like a wild cat!" 🤣
Their were rules 😲😆
And that
"Koi baat nahin, rules are meant to be broken!" 😆😆
Totally loving it 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#67
Awesome update Mais!!!! 👍🏼 You are an excellent writer 👏 Enjoyed reading the new part very much!!! Waiting to see how the PanSh break rules!!!! UPDATE THE NEXT PART SOON!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: coolpixie

Res!


Unres!
Okay, I'm majorly liking this!!! I especially love the little movements they both have, I loved how panchi had her one hand on his hand and other on his broad shoulders..god! I actually can imagine that! so cute!!
And then Kd goes, what is platonic anyways? lol..I can't believe he is asking such questions, when the man himself is epitome of platonic relationships with girls other than kiya..lol..
Mais, Major points to you for making Kd's character so likable for me!! I seriously love you for that!:)))
And then in the end, panchi winking and saying rules are meant to be broken..OMG! gal's gone wild! ahahah:))
I am loving her, my angle is getting in touch with her wilder side..
Definitely Pm again when you update!!
I can't believe I am starting to like a non-canon pairing so much right now, but it's only because of your awesome writing skills!!
Lots of love..😳



I always take liberty with KD's character and end up making him OOC 😆 or not...khair! I like to show a different side of him when he's with Panchi! After all, PanSh is my first non-canon love! 😳 Lolz yeah, Panchi is also a little different here...wildness tou still has to come 😉

Thank you! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: -3raser-

"Koi baat nahin, rules are meant to be broken!" She whispered back and winked.

OMG Mais! Is the same Panchi Rastogi that I know!? 😲 She's letting go of her Angelic side and being more human 😉 But yeah, she's the same! 😳
I love this naughty yet reserved wild side of her. Also I think this line will foreshadow the rules being broken. Just saying😆 Uhum...everything that happens, happens for a reason. Nuff' said!
Also not to mention that the KD in your SS is much more fun to read and imagine because of his exaggerated images of Kiya and also the healthy flirting he does with Panchi out of the blue. ☺️ Well KD has to let go of his serious mood sometimes...plus i really enjoyed KD's crazy side which we sometimes get to see so yeah 😆
Forget Kiya...I died at the wink that he gave her!
Not to forget that I kept laughing and swooning at the littlest things such as Panchi keeping her hand on his shoulder and Kiya about to faint 🤣 it was unintentionally hilarious and cute. Abhi tou bohat kuch hoga! 😛

I am completely in love with this SS...come to think of it I love everything you write
But, this one always keeps me wanting for more so you better be updating soon. 😈😆 Imma try and update/finish this ASAP...if I leave it hanging, I'll never be able to finish it so worry not! 😃

P.s: Thanks for the PM
I am waiting for YOUR PM when you'd make a new TBP vm

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Posted: 12 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: -BlazingWater-

Ok great, i am again grinning like an idiot in front of my PC :P Me Gusta!


"And if we break any rule?" KD leaned in and whispered secretly. Panchi bit her lower up and leaned in closer.

"Koi baat nahin, rules are meant to be broken!" She whispered back and winked.

^^ AAAHH they cant get more adorable , can they?? And Panchi telling rules are meant to be broken, now THAT's something :P See, if Panchi is doing something as crazy as having a fake affair then her saying that rules are meant to broken is something of a given 😆 Technically, she is already breaking one of her self-imposed rules that she has to be good with everyone 😛

I loved the way you explained the tiniest of their moments,their reactions...like Panchi tugging his arm and Kiya literally fainting at that :P like the fact KD could not get angry at her even in his wildest dreams...
And let me tell you, THIS KD i love!!! Uff! PanSh feels! Because honestly, KD can never get angry at her! I'm reminded of that FIRST official PanSh interaction when Panchi asked KD to thank cum apologize to Rama Sir...the KD who didn't take attitude from anyone, agreed to apologize cuz she asked him to...haaayyyeee!!

"Apne manicured nails se pillar ko scratch kar rahi hai, like a wild cat!" 😆😆


And that wink..leave Kiya, I almost fainted at that :$ :$ Everyone had the same reaction 😆

This was such a nice, cute and sweet update!!

Lovely part, contd soon <3

and thankuu for the PM :D Anytime girl! 😃

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