Originally posted by: CoffeeAddict
"And if we break any rule?" KD leaned in and whispered secretly. Panchi bit her lower up and leaned in closer.
"Koi baat nahin, rules are meant to be broken!" She whispered back and winked.
^^ Aww... If i imagine that on PanSh, I'd feel like going and giving them a group hug while they stare maniacally at me!!
Lolz, even I'd be doing the same thing 😆
I love the whole Agony Aunt character you've created for Panchi. She understands everything so well, reactions, equations... and she's so non-judgmental! Everyone needs a friend like that in real life.
Cuz that's just who she was supposed to be! I don't think about it much but the whole Advice Queen side of Panchi was never explored in the show. Just once Kiya had mentioned that Panchi gives advices, and ended up giving her one but other than that..nothing. So just playing along 😳
Panchi chuckled in shock.
^^ That is confusing... How can you chuckle in shock?
You do that! 😲 I dunno the proper word but like you dunno how to react and you end up laughing...I screwed it up, ne? Proper wordings bata! I'd edit! 😲
I love the imagery here. So simplistically written.
Phew! Thank God! 😆
"Apne manicured nails se pillar ko scratch kar rahi hai, like a wild cat!" KD painted such an exaggerated picture that Panchi couldn't stop her laugh.
^^ KD painting an exaggerated picture... I like how your version of KD in this SS is building up. I like his light banter cum flirting with Panchi in front of Kiya in both the chapters.
I actually like KD's light side whenever he shows it. Like in the episode where JJ was dreaming about the Buddies and then yesterday when the boys were talking about KD...he maybe all big and mighty but he's also a normal teenager at the end of the day...plus he hardly interacts with girls so using my writer's liberty and making him react this way with girls 😛 I'm glad it's working! 😳
This chapter lacked a little of the impact the first one had. But this one is a perfect building block for the story. Good going girl!
True that...it wasn't as good as the first chapter. I guess it's due to my laziness 😆 You know me Biwi! 😛 Next chapter gonna be fun! In Sha Allah!!
Arjun
