"And if we break any rule?" KD leaned in and whispered secretly. Panchi bit her lower up and leaned in closer.
"Koi baat nahin, rules are meant to be broken!" She whispered back and winked.
^^ Aww... If i imagine that on PanSh, I'd feel like going and giving them a group hug while they stare maniacally at me!!
I love the whole Agony Aunt character you've created for Panchi. She understands everything so well, reactions, equations... and she's so non-judgmental! Everyone needs a friend like that in real life.
Panchi chuckled in shock.
^^ That is confusing... How can you chuckle in shock?
I love the imagery here. So simplistically written.
"Apne manicured nails se pillar ko scratch kar rahi hai, like a wild cat!" KD painted such an exaggerated picture that Panchi couldn't stop her laugh.
^^ KD painting an exaggerated picture... I like how your version of KD in this SS is building up. I like his light banter cum flirting with Panchi in front of Kiya in both the chapters.
This chapter lacked a little of the impact the first one had. But this one is a perfect building block for the story. Good going girl!
Edited by CoffeeAddict - 12 years ago