In search of the diamond -Fanfic-Updated-Chapter 51 - Page 13

Originally posted by: fantasy1000a

Which ship do you in TMD

I know None was developed but which one do u think had most potential or which one intrigued you the most ??

Tough question really because I'll admit i didn't watch the show properly, just clips and written updates once in a while and the fanfictions here. Coming to the couples, I usually go for the most unusual stories.I didn't follow SahAn much because it had been written as a typical enemies to lovers story.

Serry was developing really well till he started abusing her.Honestly,they would've made a great story,falling in love despite deceiving each other and learning to become better people.It would've been an excellent character arc for the two.

For Veer and keerat, i didn't get enough scenes of them together but their relationship would go against stereotypes as you'd get a brooding girl and a manic mixie boy.Keerat would have been the prefect foil to the conservative Brars.

The older generation of brars had so much to unravel,especially when you consider the initial episodes.

My favourite couple in that generation is Jaspal and Gurleen ,hence this fanfiction to begin with.With the other brars,you sort of get why they behave the way they do.But these two ended up having the healthiest marriage and give you the old timey couple feelings when they're together.You never know how they managed to put up with all that toxicity in Brar mansion and protected their children from it,considering the fact that Veer actually got to develop his musical career.They are fascinating individually as well.

if you take Jaspal, he's always on the side lines, but clearly he must have been the one in charge of the business after Inder quit until Angad was old enough.Not to mention, you cannot call him a blind supporter of daarji and his archaic values as that would have had a negative impact on his wife and children.

Gurleen on the surface is that extremely aunt who is exceptionally kind and nice, someone who can be walked over.But despite almost everyone hating each other in the family,she is the only one who has cordial relationships with each and every member of the household.No one ever insults her or talks down on her,not even Jasleen.She is the peacemaker so it makes me wonder how she managed to preserve her moral compass in the house.

sorry for the long post,everything just came out in a rush

Originally posted by: themasked

Tough question really because I'll admit i didn't watch the show properly, just clips and written updates once in a while and the fanfictions here. Coming to the couples, I usually go for the most unusual stories.I didn't follow SahAn much because it had been written as a typical enemies to lovers story.

Serry was developing really well till he started abusing her.Honestly,they would've made a great story,falling in love despite deceiving each other and learning to become better people.It would've been an excellent character arc for the two.

For Veer and keerat, i didn't get enough scenes of them together but their relationship would go against stereotypes as you'd get a brooding girl and a manic mixie boy.Keerat would have been the prefect foil to the conservative Brars.

The older generation of brars had so much to unravel,especially when you consider the initial episodes.

My favourite couple in that generation is Jaspal and Gurleen ,hence this fanfiction to begin with.With the other brars,you sort of get why they behave the way they do.But these two ended up having the healthiest marriage and give you the old timey couple feelings when they're together.You never know how they managed to put up with all that toxicity in Brar mansion and protected their children from it,considering the fact that Veer actually got to develop his musical career.They are fascinating individually as well.

if you take Jaspal, he's always on the side lines, but clearly he must have been the one in charge of the business after Inder quit until Angad was old enough.Not to mention, you cannot call him a blind supporter of daarji and his archaic values as that would have had a negative impact on his wife and children.

Gurleen on the surface is that extremely aunt who is exceptionally kind and nice, someone who can be walked over.But despite almost everyone hating each other in the family,she is the only one who has cordial relationships with each and every member of the household.No one ever insults her or talks down on her,not even Jasleen.She is the peacemaker so it makes me wonder how she managed to preserve her moral compass in the house.

sorry for the long post,everything just came out in a rush

I will definitely read jaspal - Gurleen fic 🥹

Chapter 33-Jaspal

He surveyed himself in the mirror one last time,praying he looked presentable enough for the lohri celebrations.His Pag was still askew but he didn't have time to retie it properly.Daarji expected everyone by the bonfire in ten minutes.He attempted to smooth over the cloth before heading outside where the rest of the family was gathered.

His eyes smarted as he took in the colour scheme for this year.His daarji had insisted on everyone wearing red and the effect was not kind to his vision.Everyone had chosen the most garish shade they could find.To his chagrin Jassi di was the only person who had somehow managed to look stunning in a cherry red saree.Her husband was missing,he noted,so was Inder veerji.Manveer Parjaai was busy with the preparations while daarji and bebe welcomed the guests.

Angad and Garry were dancing near the dhol players with Prabhjyot.The Brars had always been famous for their lohri celebrations throughout Ludhiana and this year was no exception.His impending wedding had made the stakes higher than ever.There would be extensive media coverage and they couldn't afford to mess it up .

"Jaspal,please try to smile.It will make you look less hideous and maybe a little more appealing."

"Sat sri akaal Jassi di.My heart leaps at the sight of you."

"Aren't you going to touch my feet now? I'm your elder after all."

He rolled his eyes at her before bending down.

"I can't wait to meet your bride to be.We had an interesting conversation last time,I can't wait to see her again."

Jaspal was. His sister taking interest in Gurleen did not bode well for them.As far as he was concerned,Jassi di was a snake through and through.He still wasn't sure why she had informed Gurleen about their attempt to take over the Babbar group of companies.

The brother in him wished to think that she wished to avert an unhappy marriage while the pragmatist scoffed at his notion.Jassi di had always coveted a position of wealth and power ;a hunger which had only increased in magnitude after marrying into a middle class family.While he was not privy to the details,he knew enough to comprehend that her marriage was on the rocks.With Inder paaji drinking his life away,she had expected Daarji to choose her as his heir.Except,he had pinned his hopes on Angad,keeping Jaspal as a chair warmer till the boy came of age.

Since then,she had done her best to discredit Inder veerji and parjaii to inflict all the damage she could on the relationship between daarji and Angad and on the boy himself.Unfortunately for her ,Manveer had seen through her scheme and put up a fight.Now ,the two of them were involved in a tug of war game over the power to control the household and the company.

And if she wasn't careful enough, Gurleen would find herself in the crossfire.As future chairperson of the Brar-Babbar group,she could make or break their dreams with the amount of influence she'd have.They would have to talk about it.

"Jaspal",it was his daarji beckoning him to the entrance.

"You look very handsome today.",his bebe clamoured ,a big smile on her face,she seemed to brighten like the sun.His daarji couldn't stop beaming at her,he noticed with a hint if surprise.It was strange to see Akaal Singh Brar in love.

"The two of you seem oddly happy,"he commented,rather suspicious.

"You're getting married .Why wouldn't I be happy?",his bebe gushed.

"And when your bebe is happy,your daarji is happy."his parjaai interjected ,a stony expression on her face.

He felt uncomfortable;no doubt she was recollecting her not so rosy memories of her marriage with his brother.A part of him worried for her.Since the disaster with his brother ,she had been edging towards a self destructive spiral,dragging Angad along with her.Since then,he had tried to support her unconditionally which was proving to be extremely hard where her son was convinced.

He couldn't counter Daarji's influence and had relegated himself to the side lines,hoping to catch him when he inevitably fell.The sudden click of the cameras and humdrum caught his attention.

The Babbars had arrived.

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"Sat sri akaal auntiji" he greeted his mother in law to be before touching her feet.To his surprise,the older woman smiled gently before wordlessly blessing him and hugging him.He then proceeded to greet Amrit and Parminder Babbar who seemed as hostile as ever.They still hadn't forgiven him for the blackmailing incident .

He heard Prabhjyot squeal as she flung herself into Gurleen's arms.Gurleen herself was being hugged by his parents who seemed genuinely happy to see her.She turned around and their eyes met.His heart plummeted . Something was wrong.He could make it from her countenance and the air of sorrow which seemed to cling to her.It seemed as if part of her had died as she seemed lost amongst the people surrounding her,neither here nor there,stuck somewhere in between.

Seeing Jassi di make her way towards her and the storm growing on Manveer parjaai's face, he decided to intervene.He quietly approached her and touched her arm.

"Sat sri akaal Gurleen . We're delighted to host you and your family tonight."

She nodded politely.Before she could reply,he gently tugged at her hand and made his way to Daarji and Bebe.

"Daarji, bebe,I would like your permission to introduce Gurleen to our business partners and the rest of the board members."

They smiled and nodded.He even saw an approving glint in his Daarji's eye.He walked her to a secluded gazebo and sat her down.

Kneeling in front of her,he took her hands in his own,which he belatedly noticed were bandaged.

His blood turned cold.Fearing the worst,he took a deep breath to compose himself before asking,

"What happened?"

The dam broke.

I can't wait to see how jaspal will comfort gurleen after she tells him what happened. Why is jasleen acting so suspicious

Originally posted by: themasked

Chapter 33-Jaspal

He surveyed himself in the mirror one last time,praying he looked presentable enough for the lohri celebrations.His Pag was still askew but he didn't have time to retie it properly.Daarji expected everyone by the bonfire in ten minutes.He attempted to smooth over the cloth before heading outside where the rest of the family was gathered.

His eyes smarted as he took in the colour scheme for this year.His daarji had insisted on everyone wearing red and the effect was not kind to his vision.Everyone had chosen the most garish shade they could find.To his chagrin Jassi di was the only person who had somehow managed to look stunning in a cherry red saree.Her husband was missing,he noted,so was Inder veerji.Manveer Parjaai was busy with the preparations while daarji and bebe welcomed the guests.

Angad and Garry were dancing near the dhol players with Prabhjyot.The Brars had always been famous for their lohri celebrations throughout Ludhiana and this year was no exception.His impending wedding had made the stakes higher than ever.There would be extensive media coverage and they couldn't afford to mess it up .

"Jaspal,please try to smile.It will make you look less hideous and maybe a little more appealing."

"Sat sri akaal Jassi di.My heart leaps at the sight of you."

"Aren't you going to touch my feet now? I'm your elder after all."

He rolled his eyes at her before bending down.

"I can't wait to meet your bride to be.We had an interesting conversation last time,I can't wait to see her again."

Jaspal was. His sister taking interest in Gurleen did not bode well for them.As far as he was concerned,Jassi di was a snake through and through.He still wasn't sure why she had informed Gurleen about their attempt to take over the Babbar group of companies.

The brother in him wished to think that she wished to avert an unhappy marriage while the pragmatist scoffed at his notion.Jassi di had always coveted a position of wealth and power ;a hunger which had only increased in magnitude after marrying into a middle class family.While he was not privy to the details,he knew enough to comprehend that her marriage was on the rocks.With Inder paaji drinking his life away,she had expected Daarji to choose her as his heir.Except,he had pinned his hopes on Angad,keeping Jaspal as a chair warmer till the boy came of age.

Since then,she had done her best to discredit Inder veerji and parjaii to inflict all the damage she could on the relationship between daarji and Angad and on the boy himself.Unfortunately for her ,Manveer had seen through her scheme and put up a fight.Now ,the two of them were involved in a tug of war game over the power to control the household and the company.

And if she wasn't careful enough, Gurleen would find herself in the crossfire.As future chairperson of the Brar-Babbar group,she could make or break their dreams with the amount of influence she'd have.They would have to talk about it.

"Jaspal",it was his daarji beckoning him to the entrance.

"You look very handsome today.",his bebe clamoured ,a big smile on her face,she seemed to brighten like the sun.His daarji couldn't stop beaming at her,he noticed with a hint if surprise.It was strange to see Akaal Singh Brar in love.

"The two of you seem oddly happy,"he commented,rather suspicious.

"You're getting married .Why wouldn't I be happy?",his bebe gushed.

"And when your bebe is happy,your daarji is happy."his parjaai interjected ,a stony expression on her face.

He felt uncomfortable;no doubt she was recollecting her not so rosy memories of her marriage with his brother.A part of him worried for her.Since the disaster with his brother ,she had been edging towards a self destructive spiral,dragging Angad along with her.Since then,he had tried to support her unconditionally which was proving to be extremely hard where her son was convinced.

He couldn't counter Daarji's influence and had relegated himself to the side lines,hoping to catch him when he inevitably fell.The sudden click of the cameras and humdrum caught his attention.

The Babbars had arrived.

*************************************************

"Sat sri akaal auntiji" he greeted his mother in law to be before touching her feet.To his surprise,the older woman smiled gently before wordlessly blessing him and hugging him.He then proceeded to greet Amrit and Parminder Babbar who seemed as hostile as ever.They still hadn't forgiven him for the blackmailing incident .

He heard Prabhjyot squeal as she flung herself into Gurleen's arms.Gurleen herself was being hugged by his parents who seemed genuinely happy to see her.She turned around and their eyes met.His heart plummeted . Something was wrong.He could make it from her countenance and the air of sorrow which seemed to cling to her.It seemed as if part of her had died as she seemed lost amongst the people surrounding her,neither here nor there,stuck somewhere in between.

Seeing Jassi di make her way towards her and the storm growing on Manveer parjaai's face, he decided to intervene.He quietly approached her and touched her arm.

"Sat sri akaal Gurleen . We're delighted to host you and your family tonight."

She nodded politely.Before she could reply,he gently tugged at her hand and made his way to Daarji and Bebe.

"Daarji, bebe,I would like your permission to introduce Gurleen to our business partners and the rest of the board members."

They smiled and nodded.He even saw an approving glint in his Daarji's eye.He walked her to a secluded gazebo and sat her down.

Kneeling in front of her,he took her hands in his own,which he belatedly noticed were bandaged.

His blood turned cold.Fearing the worst,he took a deep breath to compose himself before asking,

"What happened?"

The dam broke.

Jaspal and Gurleen are ❤️🥹

Chapter 34-Gurleen

It had taken one question from a near stranger for her to break down. The tears refused to stop,gushing like a waterfall,while strangled sobs struggled to escape her.The hollowness within, threatened to envelope her in a mound of darkness from which she couldn't fathom an escape.She was drowning in her own sorrow without a buoy.

Suddenly she felt a pair of familiar arms envelope her.She stiffened involuntarily.Half expecting him to retract ,she was surprised to find herself still wrapped in a cocoon of comfort.He slowly pulled her down to join him on the floor and wrapped his arms tighter as her sobs grew more frantic.She clung to him as he let her cry her eyes out.They sat still under the gazebo until the sobs died and she stopped shaking.

He rhythmically stroked her hair,not uttering a single word as if he understood the importance of silence.At point she stopped crying yet he still held on.She counted till three before pulling away.To her surprise,he didn't let go.She found herself staring up at him,his arms still around her and hers on his chest.His eyes were unreadable,filled with some unspeakable emotion.

He raised a hand and tucked an errant strand of hair behind her ear,almost ghosting her skin reverently.He traced the tear tracks on her face from her eyes till her chin;his thumb rough and calloused,before bringing his forehead to touch hers.She closed her eyes at the contact and relished the warmth.There was no desire to flee or drown.She just wanted that moment to remain frozen in time.

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"Will you tell me what's wrong Gurleen?"

The spell broke and she found herself scrambling to stand,adjusting her dupatta.She felt her skin burn as she turned bright red,recollecting all that had happened.He looked as embarrassed as she felt as he cleared his throat and stepped away.

"I'm sorry for overstepping my boundaries.I shouldn't have probed you as such.I understand that we're not close enough to share our troubles with each other but I couldn't bear to see you despondent.I really want to apologise ,i shouldn't have done that."

With that he just walked off,leaving her behind,rather confused.

She stared at his retreating back ,almost at a loss.

Have I done anything wrong?,she wondered.

His change in behaviour was startling and rather sudden. Granted that they were not exactly close enough to share their secrets with each other,it was extremely nice of him to comfort her as she had cried,even if they had gotten a bit too close.After a moment of contemplation,she ran after him but he was nowhere to be seen.Resigned,she returned to the lohri bonfire and joined her Parjaai,who immediately clocked that something was wrong.

"Gurleen,what is going on?Why won't you tell me anything?"

Her Parjaai whispered.

She didn't know what to say as her mind was filled with a buzz.As her thoughts started to race,they started taking a more drastic turn .

As far as she knew,they were close acquaintances who were well on their way to becoming close friends.Yet she had managed to ruin it all with her outburst.

Had he gotten tired of her as well?

First her birth parents,then her mummy,then her veerji and parjaai,and now, finally him.

Perhaps she was destined to live in solitude for the rest of her life.She ignored the incessant whispering of her Parjaai and focussed on the bonfire.She no longer had the right to confide in anyone for she no longer had any right over her family, especially her parjaii .

She remembered the conversation she had had earlier that day, shortly after her Parjaai had bandaged her hands.

"Parjaai ,why are you suddenly shifting to Amritsar?"

"Gurleen,the only reason I remained in Ludhiana and in this sham of a marriage was for you.I couldn't bear to leave you alone with Amrit ji and mummy , especially after what happened with Vikrant ."

"What has changed now?"

"Your marriage." Her Parjaai had replied softly,"You're getting married to a nice young man who will respect you even if love doesn't blossom between the two of you .

You'll finally be at peace.Not to mention, you'll be chairperson ,and living up to your full potential. What more could I want ?

"I thought you didn't like Jaspal ji ."

"I don't if I wish to be honest.But he is definitely better than his brother . Do you know something?I wanted to take you along with me after selling this company and everything.But I know that you're hellbent on protecting this legacy of yours and nothing will convince you otherwise.The only thing I can do now is to step back and respect your decision.

I need to leave this city Gurleen . I can never have fond memories of this place,a place where I got my heart broken over and over again.I really need to move on before I do something crazy."

She had briefly considered moving to Amritsar with her Parjaai but was acutely reminded of the blood debt she owed the Babbars.They had given her a life worth willing,a debt which could only be paid back by protecting their legacy.Ironically, the family name which was supposed to unite them had finally managed to isolate her from everyone else,once and for all.

She silently contemplated her future,watching the flames from the fire shoot higher and higher,missing the figure by the trees,watching her with the most forlorn expression in his eyes.

Originally posted by: Amanita09

I can't wait to see how jaspal will comfort gurleen after she tells him what happened. Why is jasleen acting so suspicious

In Jasleen's case, she needs more influence if she wishes to gain a foothold in the house as well as business.So she's trying to get on Gurleen's good side as the latter is chairperson and could potentially help her.

Chapters 27-34

Wow that was a really great development of Gurleen and Jaspal's characters. Seeing all the angst between them, I really wonder how their love story is going to start?

Originally posted by: fantasy1000a

Which ship do you in TMD

I know None was developed but which one do u think had most potential or which one intrigued you the most ??

I am asking the same question to you. Which ship do you think had most potential or intrigued you the most?

Originally posted by: Aleyamma47

I am asking the same question to you. Which ship do you think had most potential or intrigued you the most?

My Answer is Very Simple

All the ships had equal potential

But If you are asking my favourite ship

1 ) Veer - Keerat

2 ) Veer - Keerat

3 ) Veer - Keerat

End of topic 😅

I was devastated the way they ended them.

But I also love to Write different ships.

I am currently writing on Kerry and Veerat.

I will also write on Sahan sometime.

They were Butchered .

But definitely on Veerat.

The ship is kind of magnetic.

It pulls me towards them anyways 😅😅

I cannot help it.

Jatin - Prachi made a completely unique ship.

So yes If you are asking whom Will I ship throughout my ITV journey or throughout my Life??

You have the Answer

Neend mein bhi Veerat ka naam Sunna padega 😅😅

I will not forgive Makers 😞

But I love to write on different ships too. 🙂

Kerry is also cute, Sahan have great chemistry.

But VEERAT is My favourite. ❤️

And whom do you ship from TMD??