FF - Mere Dil Ki Daily Dastaan( Sahiba×Angad) -23/3/23 -NewUpdate!pg3

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Hellooo everyoneeee

My name is Prachi.

And I am new to TMD forum. I have been an ardent fan of Ipkknd and arshi back in the day and have only written fictions( many of them) on them here and on wattpad.

Off late Iv been more active on Wattpad coz I post on my arshi fictions there Mostly now. However yes - also offlate iv started watching TMD and after a long time( ages rather)- some other star plus telly show has inspired me to pen down/ write something on our leads..angad and sahiba.....so yup here I am with my first post in the TMD forum!

Okay enough with my intro rant ! I will get to the idea behind this POV style mini shorts write ups in this FF. So I thought as the track progresses ongoing- why not I try to pen down short internal POVs from Sahiba / Angad depicting what I think/ imagine what they must be feeling in a respective moment...hence calling it - Mere Dil Ki Daily Dastaan -

How do you like the idea guys?? Let me know! And I am now going to go ahead and post today's mini write up from Sahibas pov on the moment - what I think must be going in her head right now towards the end of the scene from today's epi...when Angad is accusing her of planning police coming there purposely....

Also yes I am keeping the hindi touch going in this so that it keeps the essence of the show alive..and as real as possible..let me know if any of you want eng translations..

So yup without further ado...here we go...

.......


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FF - Mere Dil Ki Daily Dastaan ( Sahiba × Angad)


Index

1. Sahiba's POV - pg 1 ( 21/3/23)

2. Angad's POV -pg2( 22/3/23)

3. Sahiba's POV - pg3 (23/3/23)



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1. Sahiba's POV


Ek toh yeh banda mujhe samajh nai aata aur na rab ki likh hui meri iske saath yeh ajeeb dastaan. Yahan toh main gana bhi nai gaa sakti...ki ajeeb daastann hai yeh...kahan shuru kahan khatam..kyunki yeh torture ki manizlein is ATM ke saath toh mujhe never ending hi lagti hai... aur uppar se gana gaane ka mood bhi nai hai....mera abhi...aap sab toh samjh hi sakte honge na kyun?

Hai rabba...kithe phase gayi main....??

Par haan ek baat toh sach hai yaar...ki yeh manzilen kaunsi...na woh samjh sake na hum....kyunki yeh toh sach haina hi woh ATM bhi iss syappe mein mere saath hi phasa hua hai...

Par waheguru se main yahi toh bolna chahti hun...jab saath mein phasa hi diya hai...toh thoda is ATM ki dimag ki light on karne mein meri extra help hi kardein? Kya chala jayega unka? Like...Is bande ki problem kya hai?? Ek second nai lagta isse mujhe galat samjhne mein...ek nanosecond bhi nai lagta...kalko..ludhiane mein earthquake bhi aajeye toh yeh kahega...sahiba ne dharti hila di....

Matlab ki...kya samjhta hai apne aap ko...iski family ke liye kuch karo...toh main buri...na karo...to bhi buri...lo ji...jab buri no 1 ka Oscar mujhe isne permanently de hi diya hai...toh main kyun kuch explain karun???? Kyun bataun ki mein seerat di ki complaint likhane kyun gayi thi? Jaise ki isne kuch samjh lena hai??

Pagal hai yeh. AUR iss pagal pe main kyun time waste karun?

Bhaad mein jaaye yeh...main na isko kuch explain karne wali...khud hi sochta reh jo sochna hai...par haan ek baat zarror hai...aaj toh iss ATM ki saari galat femi door karni hi padegi mujhe...

Isse yeh batana hi padega once and for all - ki main isse kabhi baat karne mein bhi interested thi hi nai...let alone isse kabhi shaadi karne mein...aur lagta hi ki iss baar iss hisaab se batana padega..ki iske dimaag mein..jaake...permanently hi fix hojaye yeh baat ki yeh dharti pe ...aakhri munda bhi bache na...toh bhi mein isme interested nai hun...aur na kabhi hongi...

Like...Bas...Yaar...Bass...Hogaya bass yaar iska..bass ab hogaya....

........

Tadaaaa!!!

How was it guys? Awaiting feedback and comments below from you all..did the peice feel authentic in reading exp? As if it were coming from Sahiba?

P.s - also aiming to keep it short and quirky..

Tomm will post a mini write up on Angad :-)

Thanks you guys...I really enjoyed penning this bit down hope you all enjoyed reading it too!

Gratitude × Infinity

Prachi

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: LifeDramaFicTns

Hellooo everyoneeee

My name is Prachi.

And I am new to TMD forum. I have been an ardent fan of Ipkknd and arshi back in the day and have only written fictions( many of them) on them here and on wattpad.

Off late Iv been more active on Wattpad coz I post on my arshi fictions there Mostly now. However yes - also offlate iv started watching TMD and after a long time( ages rather)- some other star plus telly show has inspired me to pen down/ write something on our leads..angad and sahiba.....so yup here I am with my first post in the TMD forum!

Okay enough with my intro rant ! I will get to the idea behind this POV style mini shorts write ups in this FF. So I thought as the track progresses ongoing- why not I try to pen down short internal POVs from Sahiba / Angad depicting what I think/ imagine what they must be feeling in a respective moment...hence calling it - Mere Dil Ki Daily Dastaan -

How do you like the idea guys?? Let me know! And I am now going to go ahead and post today's mini write up from Sahibas pov on the moment - what I think must be going in her head right now towards the end of the scene from today's epi...when Angad is accusing her of planning police coming there purposely....

Also yes I am keeping the hindi touch going in this so that it keeps the essence of the show alive..and as real as possible..let me know if any of you want eng translations..

So yup without further ado...here we go...

.......


FF - Mere Dil Ki Daily Dastaan ( Sahiba × Angad)


1. Sahiba's POV


Ek toh yeh banda mujhe samajh nai aata aur na rab ki likh hui meri iske saath yeh ajeeb dastaan. Yahan toh main gana bhi nai gaa sakti...ki ajeeb daastann hai yeh...kahan shuru kahan khatam..kyunki yeh torture ki manizlein is ATM ke saath toh mujhe never ending hi lagti hai... aur uppar se gana gaane ka mood bhi nai hai....mera abhi...aap sab toh samjh hi sakte honge na kyun?

Hai rabba...kithe phase gayi main....??

Par haan ek baat toh sach hai yaar...ki yeh manzilen kaunsi...na woh samjh sake na hum....kyunki yeh toh sach haina hi woh ATM bhi iss syappe mein mere saath hi phasa hua hai...

Par waheguru se main yahi toh bolna chahti hun...jab saath mein phasa hi diya hai...toh thoda is ATM ki dimag ki light on karne mein meri extra help hi kardein? Kya chala jayega unka? Like...Is bande ki problem kya hai?? Ek second nai lagta isse mujhe galat samjhne mein...ek nanosecond bhi nai lagta...kalko..ludhiane mein earthquake bhi aajeye toh yeh kahega...sahiba ne dharti hila di....

Matlab ki...kya samjhta hai apne aap ko...iski family ke liye kuch karo...toh main buri...na karo...to bhi buri...lo ji...jab buri no 1 ka Oscar mujhe isne permanently de hi diya hai...toh main kyun kuch explain karun???? Kyun bataun ki mein seerat di ki complaint likhane kyun gayi thi? Jaise ki isne kuch samjh lena hai??

Pagal hai yeh. AUR iss pagal pe main kyun time waste karun?

Bhaad mein jaaye yeh...main na isko kuch explain karne wali...khud hi sochta reh jo sochna hai...par haan ek baat zarror hai...aaj toh iss ATM ki saari galat femi door karni hi padegi mujhe...

Isse yeh batana hi padega once and for all - ki main isse kabhi baat karne mein bhi interested thi hi nai...let alone isse kabhi shaadi karne mein...aur lagta hi ki iss baar iss hisaab se batana padega..ki iske dimaag mein..jaake...permanently hi fix hojaye yeh baat ki yeh dharti pe ...aakhri munda bhi bache na...toh bhi mein isme interested nai hun...aur na kabhi hongi...

Like...Bas...Yaar...Bass...Hogaya bass yaar iska..bass ab hogaya....

........

Tadaaaa!!!

How was it guys? Awaiting feedback and comments below from you all..did the peice feel authentic in reading exp? As if it were coming from Sahiba?

P.s - also aiming to keep it short and quirky..

Tomm will post a mini write up on Angad :-)

Thanks you guys...I really enjoyed penning this bit down hope you all enjoyed reading it too!

Gratitude × Infinity

Prachi

Welcome ! Loved the write up😘 ...

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Originally posted by: Ayu_12

Welcome ! Loved the write up😘 ...


Thank you so very much ji..for the warm welcome..❤️ so glad to know that you loved the write up😃

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Awesome , what's ur wattpad id

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Originally posted by: anjali9996

Awesome , what's ur wattpad id


Thank you so very much ji😃

My wattpad username is - mysticaltales11111

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Wonderful start

Update next part soon

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Originally posted by: Az07

Wonderful start

Update next part soon


Thank you so very much ji...😃

Will update tomm!

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Hey welcome fellow ipkknd fan. I started reading IF and Fan fictions because of that serial which I watched recently and haiye kya likha hai logone.


I will read ur arshi stories now


Coming to TMD, yes the show is very slow but still somehow it has kept me hooked up.is it because it's parallels with ipkknd? Dunno but dekhate hai kab tak craze reheta but I love to read the stories people write


Ur story is very promising. iTV is very bad in terms of giving monologues to leads and stating their POVs. So it's refreshing to read it.


Do keep writing.awaiting Angad's POV now 😊

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Originally posted by: Ashviniv

Hey welcome fellow ipkknd fan. I started reading IF and Fan fictions because of that serial which I watched recently and haiye kya likha hai logone.


I will read ur arshi stories now


Coming to TMD, yes the show is very slow but still somehow it has kept me hooked up.is it because it's parallels with ipkknd? Dunno but dekhate hai kab tak craze reheta but I love to read the stories people write


Ur story is very promising. iTV is very bad in terms of giving monologues to leads and stating their POVs. So it's refreshing to read it.


Do keep writing.awaiting Angad's POV now 😊


Helllo ji...

Yayiie! So happy to find a fellow ipkknd fan in here !!! 😃 Well honestly even though its been what twelve years over to the tale of arnav and khushi...in ipkknd..there Evergreen charm has all of us from their fandom still like rooting for them! And yup...the love - hate bit in Tmd does seem to have parallel sorts with ipkknd!

And yes I would love to welcome you to read my fictional world on arshi - alert though there is lots to read I got like over 6 fictions ( ff's -) completed on them posted on Wattpad already and a couple are ongoing too! Also For my arshi work - I'd suggest to read on wattpad where my username is mysticaltales11111 - as in here as the old forum of ipkknd got archived I couldn't migrate it all to new ff's forum and its like a bit here and there - so yup easier to access there!


Now coming to TMD - yup I agree pace is slow..but like you said still keeping hooked...so hoping to see how that goes as fhe makers explore it further. I am super glad you found my write up refreshing! I absolutely love to write POV's style of writing...so thought why not explore it in mini updates for angad × sahiba...❤️


Once again...thanks so much ya!😃

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Welcome to the forum! Found the Drabble amusing! Keep it up!

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