Twinj FF : Humari Tashan-E-Kahaani (Discontinued) - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31
the late kate is here with her comment..😎
K...it's a super start...
loved it..
all the dialogue were on point...
and were apt..👏
ishu is here...hayee i love u ishaan...
and lastly...the 3 mahine thing...it was very funny..
continue soon K..😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
Kiara 🤗 ur back with another FF. Em really excited.
Its awesome dea..loved it..Ur talent on writing stories is just superb dea.
Please update soon.
Thanks for the PM.
PM me whenever u update 😃.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: crazyfan9_sanju

the late kate is here with her comment..😎

K...it's a super start...
loved it..
all the dialogue were on point...
and were apt..👏
ishu is here...hayee i love u ishaan...
and lastly...the 3 mahine thing...it was very funny..
continue soon K..😳

thank you so much Sanju baba
so glad you liked it 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: tricksters

Kiara 🤗 ur back with another FF. Em really excited.

Its awesome dea..loved it..Ur talent on writing stories is just superb dea.
Please update soon.
Thanks for the PM.
PM me whenever u update 😃.

Aiesha,you and your comments make me so happy 🤗
Thank you so much darling,I'll for sure pm you!😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35

Happy reading x

Chapter 2

After the wedding date was fixed,the first thing that twinkle did was to call Chinki and cry uncontrollably.

Hearing her howling and crying,chinki had left everything aside and rushed to Taneja house.

Twinkle's room

After continuously crying for hours,twinkle dramatically threw herself on the bed as chinki looked on

Burying her face inside the pillow,twinkle started

"3 mahine"

Chinki - "Kya?"

"3 mahine",said twinkle,her face still buried inside the pillow

Chinki - "Twinkle,agar tu apna muh pillow se cover karke baat karegi toh mujhe kaise samjhme aaygega ke tu kya bol rahi hai"

Lifting her face up half,

Twinkle - "Sirf 3 mahine hai mere paas iss shaadi ko rokne ke liye,kitna kam saame hai mere paas"

"Jisme se bhi tune 3 ghante waste kardiye rone mein",stated chinki as a matter of fact.

Chinki was about to say something more when she fell quiet seeing tears form in Twinkle's eyes.

She quickly went on the bed and hugged twinkle

Chinki - "Shh it's okay"

Twinkle - "Chinki,mein sirf aur sirf Yuvi se pyar karti hun,aur mein shaadi bhi sirf ussi se karungi"

Chinki - "I know twinkle aur tu chinta mat kar,hum mil kar tujhe iss problem se azad kardenge,I promise"

Cupping her face,chinki wiped away Twinkle's tears

Chinki - "Ek kaam karte hai mein yuvraj ko yahan bula leti hun phir hum teeno milkar kuch plan karenge okay?"

Twinkle nodded in a yes as chinki pulled out her phone and dialed Yuvi's number

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Sarna mansion

Kunj kept pacing here and there in his room.

He had to find a way out of this mess.His love of the life was Alisha and he only and only wanted to marry her.

"Kuch bhi hojaye mujhe iss problem se bahar nikalna hoga",thought Kunj

While pacing here and there,he remembered how sad twinkle had gotten when their wedding date was fixed

"Mujhe kya pharak padta hai ki who sad hai ya khush",said kunj as he started pacing again

"Lekin woh bohot sad lag rahi thi yaar.I think mujhe usse phone karna chahiye. Nahi yaar,woh mera phone nahi uthaigi 100 kilo ka aakad jo leke ghoomti hai,uski ghar jaun kya? Nahi yaar bohot zyada ho jayega,but problem kya hai? After all uska would be hubby hun"

Even Kunj didn't know why he desperately wanted to meet Twinkle and make sure that she was fine.

After debating with his inner self,he chose his heart over his head and decided to go to taneja house to check on her.

Wearing his slippers and taking his phone from the side table,Kunj made his way out of the room.

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Back in Taneja house,with the help of the pipe,Yuvi made his way inside Twinkle's room.

As soon as twinkle saw yuvi,she ran towards him and hugged him tight.

She cried as yuvi patted her hair whispering sweet things in her ears

Cupping her face,yuvi started

Yuvraj - "Shaant hoja baby sab theekh hojayega"

Twinkle - "Kuch theekh nahi hoga Yuvi,sab kuch khatam ho raha hai"

Yuvraj - "Shh kuch khatam nahi ho raha twinkle.Tu sirf meri hai twinkle sirf meri"

Twinkle - "Abb hum kya karenge Yuvi?"

Yuvraj - "Bhag chalte hai twinkle"

Hearing this,Chinki looked at him in shock

Chinki - "Yeh tum kya keh rahe ho Yuvraj?"

Yuvraj - "Mein saahi keh rahan hun chinki.agar twinkle yahan rahegi toh family waalne iski shaadi Kunj se karwa denge,isse pehle aisa ho hum bhag jaatien hai.Chal twinkle apni ek nayi zindagi shuru karte hai."

Twinkle - "Lekin humari mom's"

Yuvraj - "Kab tak unke bare mein sochte rahenge baby.We have to think about our happiness"

Twinkle - "You're right yuvi,shayad tum sahi keh rahe ho"

Before Chinki could say something,they heard someone clapping at the door

They turned around to see Kunj standing at the door clapping his hands with a smirk on his face

"Wah kya baat hai",said Kunj sarcastically as he entered the room

Kunj - "Matlab mujhe humesha se pata tha ki Yuvraj ek number ka ghatiya insaan hai lekin tum bhi"

"Aye apni had mein reh",said Yuvraj

But kunj didn't look at Yuvraj at all.He kept looking at twinkle.His eyes showed nothing but disappointment which for some reason really hurt twinkle

Kunj - "Seriously Twinkle? Seriously? Mujhe tujhse yeh umeed nahi thi.haan mujhe lagta tha ki tu ek self centered and self obsessed ladki hai lekin ek aisi ladki jo apne family se bohot pyaar karti hai aur unke liye kuch bhi kar sakti hai lekin kitna galat tha mein.Twinkle taneja,tum apni family se bilkul bhi pyaar nahi karti ho."

Before Yuvi could say something,twinkle started

Twinkle - "Tumhari himmat kaise hui yeh kehne ki mein aapne family se pyaar nahi karti"

Kunj - "Kyunki aisa hi dikh raha hai twinkle.Agar tum unse pyar karti toh tujhe unki reputation unki izzat ka khayal hota.Tum iss tarah Yuvraj ke saath bhagne ka plan nahi banati.kya tum jaanti bhi ho ki agar tum bhag gayi toh tumhare family ki kitni badnami hogi? But why do you care? The only person you care about in this whole wide world is yourself and your boyfriend.Pata hai twinkle,mujhe lagta tha ki tum jaisi bhi ho lekin ek fighter ho,lekin nahi mein galat tha,tum fighter nahi ho,you only know how to run away from your problems.Kal humara roka hai iss liye ho sake toh usse pehle bhag jaana kyunki tumse shaadi karna toh dur ki baat hai,mein toh tumse roka bhi nahi karna chahta"

Saying this,Kunj left the room angrily slaming the door behind him leaving a shocked Yuvi and a hurtful Twinkle behind

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Precap - Twinkle sneaks into Kunj's room.

Edited by Jambread3 - 9 years ago


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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
K...nice update..
concern...
gussa...
fake love(ofc yuvi ka)...
everything was perfect..
and the dialogues again...👏
i'm really waiting to know ..
how twinkle in this FF will come to know about yuvi..
continue soon K😳😃😃
Edited by crazyfan9_sanju - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
Res
--unres-
Wonderful update dear..
Loved kunj dialogues
His concern for Twinkle is amazing..
Waiting for next..
Plz update soon..
Thx for pm..
Edited by amlavs - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
kunj's dialogue 👏 👏
loved them...
the precap seems quite interesting... twinkle sneaks into kunjs room...looking forward to it
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
Waah waah...Mindblowing...loved it.
Kiara 👏 its awesome.
Kunj's dialogue was superb..my kunj is always right and perfect
After reading the precap I cant wait anymore.
Please update soon.
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
loved kunj's dialogue and chinki's..
waiting for the next part..
kunj such a sweetheart

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