Twinj FF : Humari Tashan-E-Kahaani (Discontinued) - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: piu22

Ty ty tysm..

Really missed the old tei...
So happy to get the good old memories back..
Waiting for the first chap


Even I miss it 😔
Hope you like it! 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: neverlandspirit

Looking forward to your amazing work!😃😃


Hope you like it my love 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: shreya098

I am soo excited...
I so badly miss the old tei..
looking forward to it


Even I miss it a lot 😭
Hope you like it tho 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jambread3


How sweet lavs!
I hope I'm able to live upto your expectations 😳

I said nah u t gonna kill it..😉😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Happy reading x

Chapter 1

As planned,the Sarna's and the Taneja's were seated in the hall of the Sarna mansion waiting for Guruji to arrive who would at any moment.

"Oho Didiji yeh Guruji kab aayenge?Kabse wait kar rahe hai unka bhai"whispered Pinni into Leela's ears.

Leela glared at Pinni signaling her to stay quiet as she looked at Usha Sarna who smiled back at her.

"Pata nahi kab iss family se chutkara milega",wondered Usha

The taneja's and the sarna's looked at each other awkwardly as they silently waited for Guruji to arrive

"Kuch bhi hojaye yeh shaadi hoke rahegi",thought a determined Manohar

All this while Kunj and Twinkle sat across each other glaring at each other every now and then.

While Twinkle would twist her lips making a pout waiting for Guruji to arrive,Kunj would roll his eyes and sigh looking at her.

"Patience naam ki cheez hi nahi hai iss ladki mein",thought Kunj

"Oho babaji,yeh guruji jaldi kyun nahi aate? Yeh aayen,yeh sab kuch khatam ho toh hi toh mein yuvi se mil sakungi na",thought twinkle

Suddenly they heard the door bell ring which made everyone straighten up.

As soon as the door opened,Guruji made a grand entry with two followers behind.

One by one everybody stepped forward to seek Guruji's blessings.

From one end Manohar signaled Kunj to go and seek his blessings,while from the other end Leela signaled Twinkle to do the same.

Taking their steps forward,both of them bend down to touch his feet at the same time making their heads bang into each other

"Ouch!",said Twinkle rubbing the portion of the head which had collided with Kunj

Kunj - "Tu dekh kar nahi par(legs) chu sakti?"

Twinkle - "Yeh sawal toh mein tumse bhi puch sakti hun na"

Kunj - "Sawal pehle meine pucha toh jawab tu degi"

Twinkle - "Accha?aur yeh rule kisne banaya? Sadoo Sarna ne?"

Before Kunj could reply back to her,

Manohar - "Kunj,yeh kya tarika hua apni hone wali biwi se baat karne ka? Chalo,Twinkle se maafi mango"

Usha looked at Manohar in disbelief while Kunj stared at Twinkle.She smirked looking at him

Leela - "Arre nahi nahi Manoharji,isme kunj ki koi galti nahi hai,use mafi mangne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai."

Manohar - "Zaroorat hai Leelaji.Kunj tumne suna nahi meine abhi kya kahan? Mafi mango twinkle se"

"Sorry",whispered Kunj as he looked at her with anger filled eyes.

Twinkle - "Kya? Kya kahan tumne? Kuch sunai nahi diya."

Leela instantly went towards Twinkle and held her hand.

"Bas kar twinkle",whispered leela into Twinkle's ears.

Twinkle - "Chalo theekh hai,tum bhi kya yaad rakhoge ki tumhara pala kisse pada tha.Jao maaf kiya"

With that everybody took their respective seats.

After 10 mins of continuously checking Twinj's kundalis,Guruji started

Guruji - "Kunj aur twinkle ki shaadi ke liye sabse accha mahorat aaj se 3 mahine baad ka hai"

As soon as he said this,Twinkle looked up to Kunj in shock

"3 mahine",said Kunj loudly

Nikki - "Kya baat hai Kunj? Tumne itna loud reaction kyun diya?"

Kunj - "Woh bhabhi..."

"Um aap logon ko nahi lagta ke 3 mahine thode jaldi hai.I mean aap logon ko hi preparations ke liye zyada time nahi milega",said Twinkle chirping in.

Manohar - "Arre nahi nahi beta,3 mahine is more than enough.Saari planning aur preparations ho jayenge,tum chinta mat karo"

Twinkle gave a nervous smile to Manohar while Kunj looked at Usha with his eyes filled with nothing but helplessness.

Guruji - "Toh kya aap logon ko 3 mahine ka mahorat chalega? Yaad rakhiye ga agar 3 mahine mein shaadi nahi hoti hai toh phir inn dono ki shaadi agle 3 saal tak nahi ho sakti."

Manohar - "Kya kehti hai aap Leela ji?"

"Mein toh kehti hun ke 3 saal waala mahorat leten hai",whispered twinkle to herself.

Leela - "Manoharji mujhe lagta hai ki 3 mahine wala mauhrat bilkul theekh hai.Waise bhi mujhe nahi lagta hume 3 saal tak wait karna chahiye"

Manohar - "I completely agree with you Leelaji.Guruji Kunj aur Twinkle ki shaadi aaj se 3 mahine mein hi hogi"

"Wow sirf 3 mahine mein twinkle di aur kunj jiju ki shaadi,how exciting",said bubbly

"3 mahine",said raman happily

"Ohoji 3 mahine ji",said a chirping Pinni

"3 mahine",said anand

"3 mahine",said an disinterested Nikki

"3 mahine",said Ishaan making everyone giggle

"3 mahine",said Twinkle sadly looking at Kunj

Kunj could see the pain in Twinkle's eyes and for some reason that didn't go down too well with him.

"3 mahine",said Kunj not taking his eyes off her.

Guruji - "Toh teh raha aaj se 3 mahine baad Kunj aur Twinkle ki shaadi hogi."

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Precap - Twinkle and Yuvi meet and decide to run away.

Note - whoever wants a pm everytime I update the story,please let me know! I'm making a pm list this time so won't be sending a pm to everyone.

Edited by Jambread3 - 9 years ago


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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
Res
--unres--
Wow...
Kiara first chappy it's self builted my curiosity level to peek..
U know I love these type of stories..
"3 mahine" I think aft this Im gonna fell in love with "3"..with such beauty u wrote their feelings..
Kunj is not feeling good becoz twinkle is sad..he is #goals..
Am eagerly waiting when twinj is gonna fall in love and all..
Yuvle planning to run away..
It's interesting..
Thx for pm dear..
Ly🤗
Edited by amlavs - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
I loved d 3 mahine 3 mahine 3 mahine everyone said.
Nd den twinkle's 3 mahine nd den kunj's 3 mahine awww dat ws so cute... kunj not feeling good coz twinkle ws sad..
So gud kiara...
Loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
K m really looking forward to ur story.
Its really interesting.
That 3 mahina everyone were saying was aww.
I loved that last 3 mahina said by twinj.
Loved the fact that kunj was not feeling goodthat twinkle was sad.
K thanks for pm.
Keep pmming me abt ur story.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
nice start...
really interesting..
loved the 3 mahine thing 😆 ...
thanks for the pm
and pls pm me everytime u update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
K,For INTRO~

And Lavs 🤗

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