Twinj FF - Distorted Destiny Completed on Pg 39 - Page 26

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: twinjlover9

as usual its an awesome update Kiara
and Kunj's surprise was so cute only giving her back those things not the whole marriage as they are already one its so so sweet ...
and then his one liners in their room aweee he can't control😆 and his hormones 🤣
imagining Twinkle I.e. has in black nighty she must be looking damn hot then how he can control Lol ...
and about 18+ things its upto you but don't go to far as m a chota bacha for it
ohhh so now new entry is coming up ha
what is it??? tell me please 😃 because I m really very curious you know
but I know you my dear new TEI writer will make me wait for the next
so please update soonish
m waiting 😃


Thank you so much Shristi!
Yes yes I'll make sure that the 18+ one is acceptable!
Sorry babe,I can't tell you the new entry but I'll update soon
Love you 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
Twinj got remarried finally. They are so perf together! Writing explicit is an art that I am yet to master so I'd say your attempt of briefly showcasing an SR was great 😆

Looking forward to seeing what happens in the story now
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Posted: 9 years ago
lol is it weird that i am missing cherry right now. Thats so his line -kunj ki teesri shaadi hogayi hai😆
Kiara it was very well written. Despite kunj being one of the most amazing character on tv , i think ffs like these have raised Kunj Sarnas bar even higher. I am loving this story.
Waiting for the next part
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Tranquility123

Twinj got remarried finally. They are so perf together! Writing explicit is an art that I am yet to master so I'd say your attempt of briefly showcasing an SR was great😆

Looking forward to seeing what happens in the story now


Thank you! 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sdea

lol is it weird that i am missing cherry right now. Thats so his line -kunj ki teesri shaadi hogayi hai😆

Kiara it was very well written. Despite kunj being one of the most amazing character on tv , i think ffs like these have raised Kunj Sarnas bar even higher. I am loving this story.
Waiting for the next part


Hahah no no,I miss Cherry too 😆
Thank you so much Sammy! 😳
I'll update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaveerkti

In shopping ...

'll beback...


Hey...I m back...sorry for being late Agent k
Tesri shaadi...🤣
Sadu sarna cum pyara pati kunj"-this I think made all the radars blush ...😳
kunj -handsome without trying...so true. ...
The dialogues of kunj were just so simple yet so special...
U r raising the expectation bar of girls...Agent k...🤣
Twinj room scene was really cute kunj thinking about twinkle May change her mind & then...

I may not comment on every update but I read them for sure...
This story has become like a breakfast...So keep continuing. ...
at least till 100 episodes...
Edited by Shaveerkti - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Kiara sorry for late reply.
Kiara i loved it.
Yay twinj marriage third time.
Twinj bathroom thing m blushing.
Do write erotic piece.
Thanks for pm.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaveerkti


Hey...I m back...sorry for being late Agent k
Tesri shaadi...🤣
Sadu sarna cum pyara pati kunj"-this I think made all the radars blush ...😳
kunj -handsome without trying...so true. ...

The dialogues of kunj were just so simple yet so special...
U r raising the expectation bar of girls...Agent k...🤣
Twinj room scene was really cute kunj thinking about twinkle May change her mind & then...

I may not comment on every update but I read them for sure...
This story has become like a breakfast...So keep continuing. ...
at least till 100 episodes...

Hahah I'm so so glad you are liking it Shavs 🤗
Thank you so much buddy!
100 episodes?😆 I'll go mad only then 🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: tikit

Kiara sorry for late reply.

Kiara i loved it.
Yay twinj marriage third time.
Twinj bathroom thing m blushing.
Do write erotic piece.
Thanks for pm.
Continue soon.

Thank you so much Eshuu😳
I'm just so happy that you guys are reading it and enjoying it too
I'll pakka write an eroctic one maybe once I end this one
Ly🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
It's a busy day for me today and considering I won't be able to update tonight,I'm posting the next part now. Happy reading x

Chapter 17

Morning scene

Twinkle ran towards the kitchen in haste

Twinkle - "Good morning Mummyji,Good morning Bebe.Please mujhe maaf kardijiye woh mein late hogayi"

Bebe - "Koi baat nahi putar,Maafi mangane ki koi zaroorat nahi hai."

Twinkle then looked towards Usha

Twinkle - "I'm really sorry Mummyji."
Usha glared at her.

Twinkle knew how much Usha hated it when twinkle came late so she was scared.

To her relief,Usha started laughing making Bebe laugh too

Usha - "Oho twinkle aapni shakal Dekho."

Twinkle sighed in relief

Twinkle - "Matlab Mummyji aap mujhse Naraz nahi Ho?"

Usha - "Nahi putar.Bhala mein kyun aapni beti se Naraz rahungi"

Twinkle smiled and went and hugged Usha

Seeing their hug,Bebe smiled and continued

Bebe - "Oho agar tum dono maa beti ka Milap Ho Gaya Ho toh nashta banale? Abhi sab niche aate hi honge"

Twinkle and Usha together - "Ji Bebe"

And with that the ladies started cooking.
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Dining room

As twinkle was placing the dishes on the table,she saw Anand and Cherry running down the stairs

Cherry - "Good morning Twinkle Babiji"

Anand - "Good morning twinkle"

Twinkle - "Good morning cherry bhaiya,good morning Anand bhaiya"

Cherry - "Arre wah badi acchi Khushbu aa rahi hai.Zara dekhu toh khane mein kya bana hai"

Before cherry could open the dish,Surjeet intervened.

Surjeet - "Arre nalayak,humare liye toh rukh ja.Kya Saara khana Khudh kha lega?"

Cherry took his hand back and stared at his father

Twinkle - "Good morning Tauji,aaiye baithiye"

Surjeet - "Good morning Putar"

Soon Manohar,Bebe and Usha also came and took their seats. Only Kunj was remaining.

Manohar - "Arre twinkle yeh Kunj kahan reh Gaya"

Twinkle - "Woh daddyji..."

Twinkle stopped when she saw Kunj coming down the stairs lazily.

His eyes were drowsy and he kept yawning.
He came and took his seat.

Bebe - "Good morning Kunj putar"

"Good...morning everyone" said Kunj yawning once again.

Anand - "Kya baat hai Kunj tu bada thakha hua lag raha hai,theekh say neend nahi milli?"

Before Kunj could answer,

Cherry - "Oho Anand bhaiya aap bhi na good for nothing hi ho,aap bhi kaisa sawaal puch Rahe ho.Arre Bhai theekh say need nahi milli ya neend milli hi nahi?"

Anand smirked listening to cherry's question

Twinkle looked up in surprised. She surely wasn't expecting this question. Since when did her family become so naughty.She looked at the other family members who were suppressing their giggles. This surely wasn't going to go down well

On the other hand Kunj was to sleepy to understand anything.

Kunj - "Haan yaar Cherry Bhaiya,neend milli hi nahi"

That's when twinkle choked on her food
Kunj immediately stood up and gave her a glass of water. He kept tapping her back till she felt better.

Kunj - "Twinkle Dhyan se khana chahiye na.Itni bhi Kya bhukad ban rahi hai."

Twinkle glared at him that went noticed by everyone else.

Bebe - "putar tu theekh toh hain na?"

Twinkle - "Ji Bebe"

Bebe - "Kunj putar tu toh theekh hai na?"

Bebe smiled,she was enjoying so much looking at twinkle and Kunj's flushed faces.

Kunj - "Ji Bebe woh mein toh bas issliye Dar Gaya tha kyun ki ek hi Biwi hai na Meri,ab agar isse kuch Ho Gaya toh kahan dhundta phirunga ek dusri Biwi"

Twinkle stamped his foot as he completed his sentence

Kunj - "Ouch!"

Usha - "Kya hua putar"

Kunj - "Kuch nahi Maa jungli ant thi"

Kunj glared at Twinkle who glared at him back

So finally their Tashan was back.

The family enjoyed their Tashan so much,how much they had craved for this happiness since the past 5 years.

Suddenly they heard the door bell ring.

Manohar - "Kaka Zara dekhna Kaun hai?"

After 2 mins they heard Kaka scream

Kaka - "Ji chote saahab ke liye koi aaya hai"

Kunj - "Excuse me"

Kunj got up from his seat and went towards the door

Twinkle - "Mein abhi aai"

And with that twinkle followed him too.

Kunj - "Oh my god Tu yahan what a pleasant surprise"

Twinkle saw Kunj hugging someone

That someone was tall just as much as Kunj,well built and good looking too
She heard them talking and hugging each other again and again. She wanted to know who he was.So she stepped forward and started

Twinkle - "Kunj"

Kunj turned around to see twinkle looking at him with a confused expression. He completely forgot to introduce her and the foreign man to each other.

Kunj - "Arre mein toh Bhul hi Gaya. Karan meet my beautiful wife Twinkle aur Twinkle yeh hai mere childhood Friend Karan."

Karan - "Hi Bhabhi! I must say you're very beautiful"

Karan shook hands with Twinkle

Twinkle - "Thank you"

Twinkle smiled

Kunj - "Oye Saale Meri Biwi ke Saath flirt karna band kar,she's mine"

Karan laughed and put his hands up in defeat while twinkle smacked his arm and giggled at his behaviour

Then suddenly heard a voice from outside

They saw Mahi running inside with a plate of ladoos in her hand.

Karan looked at her and suddenly his face softened. He fixed his eyes upon her.
Mahi's hair flying and she trying to catch her breath.

Kunj noticed Karan's expressions change while twinkle was unaware of this new development.

Kunj in his mind
"Arre yeh achanak Se Karan ko Kya hogaya,Mahi ko Dekh kar yeh red kyun Ho Gaya"

Mahi looked at Karan and their eyes met. Both their soft eyes did a sweet talking.

Kunj - "Arre Mahi tum yahan?"

Mahi - "Haan jiju woh maa ne aap logon ke liye ladoo bheje hai"

Twinkle - "Oho Mahi toh tu bhag ke kyun aa rahi thi?

Mahi - "Woh di mujhe laga aap logon ka lunch kahi Khatam na hojaye"

All this while Karan kept looking at her lovingly

Karan in his mind
"Woh yaar,kitni pyari hai yeh.Sabka kitna sochti hai. How cute is she."

Kunj saw Karan looking at her

Kunj - "Arre Mahi tum isse nahi milli. Yeh hai Karan mera childhood friend aur Karan yeh hai Meri pyari si saali Mahi. Kitni pyari hai na?"

Karan without knowing what he's saying

Karan - "Haan Bohot pyari"

Kunj smirked at his answer while Mahi blushed. All this while poor twinkle couldn't understand anything so she decided to stay mum.

Karan - "I..I mean hi,nice to meet you"

He forwarded his hand which Mahi took shyly.

Kunj - "Arre Karan tu ek Kaam kar aaj raat ka khana yahan kar le. In fact Mahi tum maa aur Manu bhi yahan dinner pe aajao. Kyun twinkle?"

Karan's face lit up listening to Kunj's suggestion. He mentally noted to thank Kunj later.

Twinkle - "Haan haan Kunj Sahi keh Rahe hai. Pls join us for dinner Karan"

Karan - "Theekh Hai agar Bhabhi itne pyar Se kahe rahi Hai toh mein zaroor aaunga. Lekin philhal mein chalta Hun. Raat ko Milte"

He did his goodbyes to Twinj and gave a Loving look to Mahi who returned his gesture.

Twinkle - "Jaa Mahi jaa kar yeh plate table pe Rakh de"

Mahi - "Ji di"

And Mahi went off to the table.

Now Twinj were all alone.

Kunj - "Twinkle Karan kitna accha hai na"

Twinkle - "Hmm"

Kunj - "Arre Kya hmm hmm theekh say toh Bhol"

Twinkle gave him a glare which meant he's gone and went off to her room.

Kunj in his mind
"Hey Bhagwan abb isse Kya hogaya"
Kunj then went towards his room thinking of ways of manaofying his Lady Luck
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Twinj's room.

Kunj entered the room to find twinkle sitting on their bed murmuring something under her breath. Kunj knew this wasn't the right time to talk to her about Mahi,Karan and his observations. He needed to make sure that twinkle is in a good mood to hear this considering this to be a sensitive topic since Mahi's past had been rough.

Kunj came and sat behind twinkle and hugged her

"Kya hua mere baby ko?" Asked Kunj making a cute little pout

Twinkle didn't answer and got up from her place and went beside the sofa

Kunj tried again

This time he came from ahead and held her face in his palms

Kunj - "Kya hua Meri Siyaapa queen ko?"

Twinkle knew she'd melt seeing his eyes so she moved her face away

Twinkle - "Tum Bohot bure Ho Kunj"

Kunj - "Haan Lekin tujhse zyada nahi"

Twinkle glared at Kunj

Kunj - "I mean,Kya hua twinkle? Ab meine Kya Kiya?"

Twinkle - "Kya Kiya?"

Twinkle started coming forward while Kunj started going back in fear

Twinkle - "First of all tumne mujhe puri raat sone nahi diya,uparse tum breakfast ke liye late aaye,uparse tumne Cherry Bhaiya se Kya kahan,pata hai kitna embarrassing tha woh and uparse tumne mujhe jungli ant bulaya"

By now Kunj was the one stuck to the wall while Twinkle was pointing her fingers at him

Knowing what to do the best he started

Kunj - "Twinkle,baby,Jaan I love you na. Woh toh meine mazak kar raha tha. I'm sorry na"

Twinkle - "Nahi mujhe tumse koi baat nahi Karni."

Kunj - "Please twinkle"

Twinkle - "No"

Kunj - "Please na baby"

Twinkle - "Nahi"

Kunj - "One chance"

Twinkle - "Nope,never"

Kunj was now frustrated,he had to think of something else. When twinkle sensed that he had stopped pestering her,she got angry again and started

Twinkle - "Kunj tum na.."

Before twinkle could continue Kunj came forward and kissed her. Twinkle was shocked,she didn't know how to react,she surely wasn't expecting this.

Kunj by now had lost his senses and taking her waist kissed her hard. Slowly twinkle began melting and giving in to the kiss. They kissed for long until they ran out of breath

While Kunj took in a few breaths trying to calm his breathing down,twinkle blushed

Kunj - "Hayee twinkle tu aise blush mat Kiya kar,mujhse control nahi Hota."

Without giving twinkle a chance to speak,he quickly went and locked the door,came to twinkle,picked her up in a bridal style,placed her on their bed,kissed her on her forehead,took the blanket and covered themselves,knowing what was going to happen next.
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Precap - Twinj argument,Karan asks Mahi for Marriage and Twinkle learns that she's pregnant.




Edited by Jambread3 - 9 years ago


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